AsYa SS-WALLBANGER!Round 9 - Pg 98, 4th Aug! - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
OH MY GAWD
That was a helluva update.
Oh man!! peas, mangoes, stick, shake, remote🤣 🤣 🤣

Not just laughing but I think i am a mess now. Can't think straight.

Juliet, Juliet, Juliet you HEAT IT UP EVERYTIME😆

Lovel love Zoya. Seriously love this Zoya. if she liking what she was seeing, i was LOVING what i was reading.😉😆

But yeah Asad was a darling. Helping her around and taking care of her was just too adorable.

What just happened in the men's room. OM*G.
No right words to describe that. you see I am a mess right now.

I am just so slow writing this comment. My mind seems elsewhere. Yes yes its definitely elsewhere.

Shatakshi and Sadie are bombshells. Loved them too.

And yeah be ready I am going to pester you for Round 4 again. I guess its my hobby now to remind you to update coz honestly i want the dose.😆

LOVE you.🤗 so update soon 😃


Edited by jasminerose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
FFS 😕
(That's my "res" for all your updates on this thread 😆)

OMG!

An update and what an update it was!

Juliet, your way with words... 🤣

Awww, Asad isn't just a wallbanger... He's a sweetie pie too. He came and helped her and cleaned up 😳 - I loved that!

Sweet, sweet wallbanger!

And HIS way with words?! So bloody naughty (in a good way)

And they had lunch together too. And now they're going away on a trip???

Sadie and Shatakshi will clearly be very busy, so I foresee some alone time for some wallbanging, perhaps?

But wait, did he stop wallbanging completely after the incident?!
It's not just desire for Zoya, right...?

Sadie and Shatakshi - 😳
Good luck with your love lives... You know they're in good hands :)

Juliet... I know I always tell you your humour is second to none, but how you manage to interweave actual sweetness through your humour is beyond me.

Teach me!


Edited by Tamara27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OKAY...

I completely loved this! 😆 Having a neighbor like him is such an advantage! 🤣

Oohhh... Me loved the ending so much! ❤️

EEEPSSS!!! It's not a dream! ☺️

Continue soon Julz!

- Mrina <3
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
its God-Dam f**king Awsome update

Zoya sleeps on kitchen 🤣 🤣 🤣
Asad carry Zoya&also took care of her
I just loved it.

about precap:i agree it sounds dirty but I don't mind being dirty at all 🤣 🤣 🤣

anyways, thanks for PM
Hope u get 150+ LIKES&we get next par soon


"AND EID MUBARAK TO ALL"
Edited by imcooldude - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res😃
finally😆

1st soyyi 4 late comnt😳

updt isse kehte hain😃
I want 2 say Remo style "THIS IS IT"👏 wid a standing ovation😉
what an updt u made me speechless😵
no1 can beat u in this department of writing👍🏼
Sachi bol rahi hon u don't believe me😲

So Asad heard everything & Zoya was not ready 2 accept 😆
he made fun of her & poor Zoya cried cuz she never has d last word...awe🤗
she started throwing things & hurt herslf ...Asad named her correct Trouble magnet😆
Asad came 4 help took care of her while she was having dirty thoughts about him😈
I loved Zoya's rant she has awesome vocabulary😆
Asad self invited himself 4 a date wid her & although reluctant she was dressing upd 2 impress wallbanger😎
Asya's frnd gave no attention 2 them & engrossed in themselves😆
S scene in d washroom was hilarious i laughed out loud reading that🤣
In d plane Asad confessed he want her 😉
all in all i loved d updt❤️
U rocked baby⭐️
now in nxt part hopefully Wallbanger will rock C**k-blocker☺️
updt nxt part soon😒

4 likes i m going 2 promote ur story😎
here i go😉

& thanku 4 acknowledging me in head note🤗
Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh am late
Res


Unres


Juliet I don't have words for this update. It was sooo good.


Their bickering in the beginning was what we all had been waiting for and then aww poor poor Zoya, she felt so helpless losing to him all the time. Poor baby was crying too.


And then him helping her and her non stop dirty rant. Lol that was so hilarious. Loved the concern and the way he helped hwr. And still knew she was checking him out.


Oh lord and their so called dinner date, satakshi and Sadie were least bothered about her. Busy with their boys.

And the men's room scene, hilarious again and so expected to happen with Zoya. Oh so finally he says it to her face while she is with him and so close to him.

Waiting for their kiss and then a lot more.


Love you Juliet for updating even though you didn't get the number. Hope you get it this time and soon.


P.S. have to tell you this. I was reading the part where she's telling Asad to leave her peas and mangoes, and my son ( he's 5 yrs) decides to walk into my room, 2 bananas in hand and it was almost time for his dinner. I was so engrosed in reading about the mangoes that I kept telling him to leave the mangoes and he's looking at me wide eyed. Finally he's shouting on top of his voice'I'm eating bananas. These are banana's' and only then did I notice. I burst out laughing and the poor soul didn't know what happened to his mum 😆
Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..
Thanks for updating. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome + funny update...👏

Asya dirty talk is super funny...😆

Just love the update...😊

Waiting for part 4 eagerly so update soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was superb 👏

Glad you decided to update

Loved every bit 😉

Sword of Excalibur was hilarious 😆

Loved how he came to help her

Peas..mangoes..Shake..can't stop laughing 😆

And boy can he read every thought in Zoya's mind 😆

How nice of the girls to invite the boys 😳 *batting eyelashes*

So glad the last bit wasn't a dream

Yay they're gonna kiss 😃

Loved the underlying jokes

Hope you get your desired likes this time !!!!

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