Everything Burns Thread V Ch 21 & Epilogue Updated PG 140

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1001

Well nice update even after lack of inspiration u wrote very nicely. Though short n bit rushed into. But still a big thank you for giving it a proper closure at least. Like ur stories and will definitely follow on ur blog.

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1002

nice end to the story. Liked

it very much. Hope u post the

reinovated story soon.

will miss the story

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1003

It wasn't the ending I imagined.. But it was good...

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#1004

its amazing...

wonderfull...

thx fr the pm...

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#1005

Nice end!!!! Its ok i understand!! Thanks for atleast completing it!!

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1006

Wow so finally a long journey has come to an end

Even with u cutting it short

I understands how u fell u lost the inspiration to write and I lost the inspiration to read

I remember how I used to be hunting for updates

It was one of my fav when it still had the zest to hold u

U r an amazing writer and u will be missed

I am glad asya got their happy ending but it was no to my expectation

To know the passion and suspense u had us clinging on to this story

But then we went into a dry season

I wished asad would have express his love like zoya did pour his heart out

Glad he accepted he was defeated

So shahid was in love with Najma and Rihan came in the way

And he was out for revenge too until he got caught and fired

So so glad they got tht evidence they needed

Sorry to say was disappointed dissatisfied with this ending

I know u could have done better

I will miss ur writing as u r an amazing writer and as u know I only read asya story

So take care and best of luck

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#1007

Fantastic ending to a mindblowing, thrilling, action-packed, suspenseful, funny and romantic story! Will miss you immensely! Wish you could have given us more! Best of luck in your futuristic pursuits!

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@kabhi_asya

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#1008

Hey...this was very abrupt ending...

It was so beautiful story... One of my favorites that I'll never forget...I like everything about this story__romance, drama, action everything...

Asya were so strong characters here...individually as well as together...

Last chapter was beautiful... Not much drama about rehaan... Like their confession very much... You are a wonderful writer and it is shown in your story very well...

Off course I didn't wanted this story to end just like this..but respect your decision and its reason... So don't worry... We are OK with it...

Thank you.

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H.e.n.a

@H.e.n.a

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1009

Hi! u r no doubt an awesome writer. Loved this story too much. Each individual characters were well written n well developed. Whenever u thought to rewrite it just inform me. M so much love with this story. The story telling way is unique one, that's y I loved to read ur stories.

Will miss this. Thank u so much for this awesome story...