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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

interesting update..please do update soon..😊

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Suganti Kularaju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

a very emotional update

poor asad and zoya..hope asad won't go back to his previous state

humeira is right in her place..she's thinking about zoya's life

i hope she will realise soon that zoya's life is asad

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zynia890

@zynia890

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

It was such an emotional update...feeling too bad for Asad...he tried so much but zoya didn't stop...I m literally crying while reading his state...hosting humaira...let's see what happens next...eagerly waiting for next part ...

Update ASAP bcz I can't wait to read the next part ...you write very well...

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zynia890

@zynia890

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

And PM me for the next part bcz I want to read the story...I always wanted someone to write a story like this... I thought that I myself should do this but I m horrible at this...you guys have this potential and this is really appreciable!!

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aYASHIKA

@aYASHIKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Lovely ...
Superb ...
Fabulous update...
Beautifully written...
So emotional ...u made me cry 😭
My eyes are wet after reading the update 😭
Asya are suffering so much 😭
Humi is such a jerk ...how can she not see the pain zoya is going through on leaving asad...
U described asya emotional state so beautifully. ...
Asad is trying to be nice to humi only for zoya...
Asad hold zoya dupatta...was the most emotional part for me...
How he is pleading zoya to stay back 😭
Both are emotionally broken...
Asad fell down on his knees...
Plzz dont separate asya for long...
U r an amazing writer dude...fabulous. ...
Update soonish...
Thanks for pm and do pm me for upcoming parts...

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Ami34

@Ami34

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

NOOO!!!😭

Zoya I'm so angry with u with now!!!😡

Actually I'm angry with ya!!!😆

How can she leave Asad when he's like begging her forever!!!

But ya did an amazing job at describing the scene!!!👏

Please make everything happy and cheerful again!!!

I beg ya!!!😃

Thanks for the pms!!!🤗

Update soon!!!👍🏼

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fifi1297

@fifi1297

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

Yayyy...my name in bold...thnku so much...

Very emotional update...

U made evryone cry today😭

Beautifully written...

Amazing job done...

Hats off...

Asya r suffering alot...😭

Asya r separate nw...hope dis z not long one...

Update was fabulous...

Loved it alot...

Continue soon...

Thnx for pm😊

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Rosered1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

U made me cry😭

It was soo beautifully written..The inner turmoil

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

While it was funny...while it lasted...this is try a heart breaking chapter. And you know I'm on logic and practical's side.

I don't blame Humeira at all.

And you my dear, has given each character justice. Especially that of Zoya and Humeira. Then Asad and Dilshad. You did an excellent work with all four.

The depth of the pain, the understanding, and ultimately being strong.

Phir bhi. Rula diya.

Give yourself a pat on the back for such heart wrenchingly amazing chapter.

Hugs!