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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

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The first time... I saw the Banner I was just awe-struck

It's the most beautiful banner I have ever seen...

Virina can create magic with pictures

Scroll for comment on the prologue and CS

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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

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The character sketch is so simple and I love every one in the story

The prologue was nothing over the top or something extraordinary

It was just the ordinary day to day life shown in the simple way and that makes it real

I loved the conversation between Zoya and Rashid and also Anwar

I am loving this Zoya in the story already

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Mahima

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Now I get the reason why there are so many spammers out here

Every scene was something that I thought was not imaginary...it seemed so real

The picture had come alive before me

Every character was a regular day to day person

I just couldn't help but like them

Every dialogue was the kind which we people generally use while conversing

Yet they had so sheer perfection in them

Anwar-Zeenat-Zoya scene was so sweet and the love between them was so clear

Ayaan-Dilshad-Asad scene was just so like any family where the younger son is fun-loving and elder a serious one

Rashid-Zoya scene was one of my favourites... I have always loved the bond they had in the show...

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Mahima

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#14

OMG!

WOW!

AWESOME!

SUPERB!

BRILLIANT!

FANTASTIC!

AMAZING!

FLAWLESS!

SO CUTE!

SHEER PERFECTION!

TOTALLY REALISTIC!

The phone conversation between Rashid and Zoya... I read it 3 times because I just loved it...

I loved they Dilshad and Asad heard the conversation and their reactions

Asad already agreeing to Zoya's words already... aaha

I am loving this story like anything now

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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

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The phone conversation finally took place

I have never liked the concept of 'Arrange Marriage' but suddenly I am liking it... The way you have shown it is just so realistic and at the same time like living a dream is just keeping me glued to the story...

Well... The phone conversation was just so simple and so cute at the same time

They were really honest to each other and this was the part I liked the most

Surely they were out of words but things just went in a flow

The picture part was so nice... Zoya's with Haider and Asad's with his ammi... Just wow

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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Well... it isn't post exams but I just couldn't stop myself from coming here

This story is very addicting and towards the end I always keep wanting more and more and more

Haider and Zoya scene was so cute... I am so glad you took Sanaya...

I loved both the AsYa phone conversations... both their thoughts were so well depicted

24 hrs for the decision... oh no... lets see war happens

Asad and Zoya surely and clearly are liking each other's character but they maybe have a long way to go

But definitely the journey with you on this story will be amazing

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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Now I'm done consolidating my comments! 😛

Now listening "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!" ❤️

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 11 years ago

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😛

I miss "Alah Miyaan whats wrong with you !!??" 😒

This is obviously Zoya..and possible hai that she is yelling haider ... Coz vo san ko akela chod aaya 😡

Second... Shayad se Zoya hai... 😆

And third AsYa main se ek hai 😳

Edited by Niya_789 - 11 years ago

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Congo for the new thread

Luv u too

Chalo now update soon😉

Warna yeh stalker phir se spamming chalo kar degi 😎🤣

Edited by Niya_789 - 11 years ago

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Mahima--
Consolidating ALL my comments related to the chapters here! ❤️

Happy Reading!!!

Oye Hoye..

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