ASYA TS : CHOCOLATES WITH LOVE ! PART2:PAGE 15 22/06/14

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
Ya allah!

Tu kyu merko pakao-ing? Tu ye likh rahi thi itni der se? Ab ye bhi TS hai aur tu bolegi, iska ye last part hai? Main ultimate bore hui hoon!

Ayaan Tamatar Asad Scene was cute! 😳 Chalo finally Asad jealous to hua Mr. Zaid se! 😛
Ab jaldi continue karna! Agar nahi karna hai to mat karna! Main force nahi karungi! JA! 😡

Bye! And i don't love you!

- Mrina <3

Haaahaahha..

Pakao aurat chup kar ! 😆😆

Ofcourse this isn't the last part. Bore ho raha tha aur likhne ko . 🤢

Chalo kuchh toh achha laga tujhe yeh update mein !! 🤔😆😆

About loving you , share the same feelings, Jaanu ! 😳

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA
Lovely update...
Cute...
Love jealous asad.
Update soon

P.s. my like button is not working so considery like too

Thankyou so muchh Yashika 😃

Considered , you like it ! 😳

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: Emaani.95
Yeh kya? Buss itna hi?
Dinner date toh isi part mein daal deti mona darling. 🥱
I so agree with Mrinss - itne dino se yeh likh rahi thi?
Kuch toh AsYa ke mazay mazay ke scenes daalnay thay. 😒
Not so happy with the update. Plus it's a three shot! Next part - last part! 😡
Mujhe ab next update SUPER SOON chahiye. Or usme sirf or sirf AsYa honay chahiye! 😉

Hahaha.. Bore ho raha tha to write more toh jitna likha tha, update kar diya😳😆

Asya mazza next part mein pakka ! 😳

And , dw, agar next part mein I can't accomodate everything , I'll then make this a four or a five shot !! 😳😃

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Haan Jackie Chan! Don't be upset. Take it as positive criticism! 😳
And update a nice lovey dovey Part 3.. SOON! 😡

Hahaha,

Yaww cuuttaays ! 😆😆😳

Me no gets upset !! It's cool criticism is part of the deal. It helps me improve, makes me stronger (:
Thankyou both for being honest about how y'all actually felt the update was. Honest opinions are always welcome !! 😃

Okay too much gyan happened.

Boyee ! 🤗❤️

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: princess101
LOVED IT THIS IS AMAZING
THANX FOR THE PM
PLEASEEE UPDATE SOON

Thankyou princess ! 😃

Update may take some time

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: imcooldude
lovely part
loved bade & chore bhaijaan scene

I want Asad to punch Zaid's nose

update soon

Thankyou cooldude ! 😃

And I've accomodated your request in the next part !!😳

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: kkbigfan
Lovely update.Simply awesome.I loved ayaan and najma bonding.They are super cute.Dilshad is such a understanding mother.She knew asad meets ayaan.So we have a new person zaid.I hope he does not stay for long.I am waiting for asya scenes.Please try to update as soon as possible.Thank u and keep smiling :):)

Thankyou so muchh kk ! 😃

I'm glad you liked it ! Asya scenes in the next part !😳

I'll try soon, nt sure.

Thankyou and you too keep smiling .

😊

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: cale
cute update
ayaan and najma were very sweet
i always wanted to see this in show
And Asad back in action when he saw zoya with someone else
lovely
continue soon

Hahah.. We all wanted to see a lot of thins in the show, anyway .

Yes, Asad's back in action.

Thankyou Cale ! 😃😃

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: jas91
awesome part mona darling👏
Asad getting jealous of Zaid😆
but why didn't Zoya directly said Asad id here 2 pick her😡
Asad is right she's musibat magnet😆😡
Ayaan Naj & Asad scene was cute😛
Dillu moma knew about Asya & Asyaan secret meetings 😲
she insisted Asad 2 take Zoya 2 dinner date that was her plan😉
ab agar man kare toh nxt part dena or we'll thinks its last part😆😵
waise bhi tu meri kahan sunti hai😡