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Originally posted by: AMMY12

congo 4 d nw thread.
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Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

wonderful!! kamran 🤢 why don't they lock him up in a bathroom!!
asya reached the valley...good news...hope they'll at least marry without any hurdles ...
loved asya's confrontation...
continue soon


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Salaam All

Please see below chapter 18 in two part. They are long so be warned. I really do hope I have done justice to update and that you like it. Please let me know what you think...silent readers would be great to hear from you too. After this I have two more updates left before this one completes and then it's Alvida from me.

Lots of love to you All

Saima


Chapter 18 Part A

The next morning Ayaan set out to pick Dilshad up from the airport, whilst Zoya helped Shireen to prepare for her arrival. Asad and Ghaffur Chacha sat out in the porch talking over their plans for the coming day 'Ghaffur Chacha...as much as I wanted for Zoya to put herself first...what I am trying to say is that...' 'you will be marrying her' Ghaffur finished his sentence for him 'yes, and I wanted your blessings' 'Asad, you had them the very first time I told her to say yes...you don't know how happy I am that you are part of her life and that it is you that will continue to stand side by side with her'.

'I hope you are not talking about me' Zoya said as she stood by the door smiling radiantly. Ghaffur held out his arm 'come sit' Zoya went and sat on the arm rest and leaned against her Baba so are you going to tell me or not?' she said looking at Asad 'yes, we were...but it's not something we are going to share is it Ghaffur Chacha' Asad said with a mischievous wink 'Allah...how rude...fine don't tell me...I am off' Zoya stood up only to be held back by Ghaffur 'Zoya, beta he is only teasing...come you sit I will go and check on Ayaan, see how far he is'.

Zoya sat down in front of Asad, his intense gaze on her instantly warmed up her cheeks, not being able to hold on any longer Zoya looked away blushing. Asad sat back and enjoyed every moment of her shyness 'Asad, you have to stop looking at me like that' 'I don't see why I should...come' Zoya took the hand he held out as she did Asad pulled her towards him making her sit on his lap. He pushed back her hair and cupped her face, caressing her soft skin with his thumb 'do you know how beautiful you are?' 'of course I do...I do have a habit of looking in the mirror from time to time' Asad started laughing 'Zoya over the last few days, it's like you have opened up...I don't know, its like I see a new you, more confident, more vibrant, full of life...and it is making me love you even more' Zoya linked her hands around his neck 'well then Prince Asad Ahmed Khan, you continue to love me as this Princess of yours is forever going to be changing and growing...but on a serious note...it is only because of you Asad...if you hadn't come I would have still been hiding behind a veil in a corner of the Colony, like I said to you before you have become my strength, it is because I have you with me that I have found this renewed confidence...thank you' Asad rested his head against the crook of her neck and placed a soft kiss, making her giggle 'that tickles' she said 'mmm...so where else are you ticklish?' 'you will have to wait to find out' Asad tightened his hold around her waist 'promise I will be finding out a lot sooner than you think'

Back in Delhi Humera was finding it hard to get rid of Kamran, who seemed to be following her everywhere she went 'Kamran, you must be getting bored hanging out here...why don't you go out, I think Mamoon is going out, you can join him' Kamran gave her a lopsided smile 'and miss out on your company...I am perfectly fine here, plus I am waiting for a phone call...you know how eager I am to find Zoya...I mean you must be too...right?' 'of course...she is my sister after all, what more could I want' Humera tried to keep a straight face as she spoke to him but the way he looked at her told her that he wasn't easily fooled.

'Kamran...how will you find her, I know you managed to track her here but Delhi is a big place' 'not as big as you think Humera, I have a lot of people helping me...don't worry by the time we get to Banglore I will that much closer' 'Bangalore...you just said she is in Delhi...then why Bangalore?' 'I don't know Humera you tell me' 'm...me...how am I supposed to know, I thought you were tagging along for some business reasons' 'Khala's family and you Humera are my business...once I have Zoya, I can return her home safely...and once she starts receiving her treatment we can think more about her future' 'her future...what do you mean?' 'Humera, must you act so nave, you know what I am talking about...did your Ammi not tell you, I plan on marrying her' Humera started to choke on the air she just inhaled 'if Api is so unwell why marry her...I mean what is in it for you?' Kamran started to snigger 'all in good time my dear cousin...you will attend our Nikah...won't you?' Humera gave him a faint smile then walked out.

'Idiot, I can't believe I am related to that demonic moron' Humera said to herself as she charged out. In her anger she walked straight into Haider 'shit...oh sorry...Haider...what are you doing here?' 'hi to you to...and who is a demonic moron?' Humera let out a deep sigh 'my good for nothing cousin...look I can't talk to you here, he is inside...come with me' Humera grabbed his hand and led him up to her room, she locked the door behind her then took him into the bathroom. 'Humera, I assure you I had a shower this morning' 'ha ha, very funny...that man is on to us Haider, he has been following me all morning and this is the only place where his ears can't get to'.

Haider took Humera into his hold 'you are worrying for nothing Humera, I have just spoken to Ammi, she is nearly home...and we will be joining them soon...just a few more hours I promise' Humera looked up at him 'how can I ever thank you and Ammi for what you have done and are doing to help protect my sister...' 'I am sure I can think of a way' Humera smiled at him before she let him flush her against his hold and claim her lips, she couldn't remember the last time they had any kind of intimacy between them and this certainly did feel like home. After fulfilling every desire Haider and Humera pulled apart 'we should be going...well I should, I came to offer my lift to the airport' Humera tightened her hold on him 'no...not right now...I am not done' Haider raised an eyebrow 'now when will I ever complain of having more...I am all yours'.

Haider managed to sneak back downstairs and meet with Kamran 'How are you...I guess you are all set for your trip tomorrow' Haider said plastering on a fake smile 'yes...we are. So what brings you here' 'oh I just came to offer Humera a lift to the airport, I am meeting some clients from the US...so thought' 'that's very generous of you...but...' as Kamran was about to decline his offer Humera came from behind 'that would be great Haider, thank you' 'no worries, I will be here in time to pick you up'. As Haider was about to leave Kamran called out after him 'how is your brother...am sure he is enjoying his vacations' Haider stopped for a second, he looked at Humera and then turned around to face him 'yes he is, he works very hard so I guess deserves a break' 'strange, you two are brothers right...but you don't have the same surnames' 'you seem to know a lot...but nothing strange in that at all...I will see you in the morning'

Haider walked out of Humera's house as he did he saw a shadow appear and disappear as quickly behind a parked vehicle. Haider took out his phone and angled it to see if he could see a reflection of the person 'Asad was right, Kamran does have eyes on me...well Me Kamran if you are clever, I am no less, do all you want I won't let you get to my brother or Zoya that easily'.

Dilshad had finally reached home, after having settled in she sat with Zoya and Shireen and caught up with them 'Aunty I am so worried for Humera, that Kamran is a nasty piece of work' 'I know beta but don't worry Haider is on top of everything, inshAllah everything will work out'. 'Ammi, I am just going to the mosque with Ayaan, I will be back soon' 'ok bet, you take care'. Once Asad and Ayaan had left Dilshad asked Zoya to go and rest as she still looked exhausted 'I will call you when dinner is ready' 'jee...umm aunty do you think I could talk to Humera, I haven't spoken to her since we left to come here' 'call Haider, it will be safer...just in case Kamran is around her when you call' Zoya nodded and then turned to Shireen 'can I please use your phone?' 'of course...please you don't have to ask, there is one in the room behind reception, take your time'.

Zoya spoke to Haider who told her what their plans were for tomorrow 'Haider, I was thinking that by me getting married the property will automatically be transferred to me...but that doesn't mean that Kamran or Humera's Ammi will stop, they can still attack, they can still ploy to do something' 'I know Zoya, please don't think I have not taken that into consideration, I have spoken to the Assistant Commissioner of Police in Delhi, he said that even though Barakah Valley is a close knit community and the area has never had any outside intervention they can still arrange a convoy of officer that will be willing to go in and support us...if you give them permission' 'permission...' 'yes Zoya, your father Kind Abdulla never allowed any law enforcement into his valley as there was never any need, a treaty was signed by him and the government...but under these circumstances we will need permission' 'Haider you have permission from me to do anything you want, anything that will help...thank you so much, how will I ever repay you?' 'Zoya, please...but...if you really do want to repay me then..' 'then?' 'then you can give me your sisters hand in marriage' Zoya smiled to no end 'she is all yours Haider, what more could I want...I will see you soon inshAllah, Allah Hafiz' Allah Hafiz'.

The sun finally rose and it was time to put their plan into action both Humera and Haider sat in their respective rooms praying for Allah to be with them and for them to successfully lead Kamran astray. Humera hugged Razzaq 'I will see you soon Mamoon...' 'Humera, you keep me informed, I want a regular update of what is going on beta...I wish I could come with you but...' 'I understand Mamoon, take care' Kamran sat in the front with Haider whilst Humera sat directly behind him, that way she could communicate anything she needed to through her eyes as he kept looking at her via the rear view mirror.

'Damn' Haider said exaggeratedly. Kamran looked up to see a the road blocked ahead 'what is going on?' he questioned 'I totally forgot, the annual youth carnival is on today...the road are going to be jammed, but don't worry there is another route we can take' Haider turned his car around and started driving down the alternative route, that he knew would also be blocked. 'You have to be kidding me' Kamran said in frustration, Haider looked up at Humera who was trying to stop herself from laughing 'I don't believe this...Humera, how long do you have?' he asked with a worried expression 'not long Haider, please try another route, if I don't get there soon I will miss my flight' Haider turned the car back around and started driving off again, this time he managed to avoid the congestion and got to the airport.

'I am so sorry Humera, because of me you missed your flight' Haider said feigning sadness and a little guilt 'its ok Haider...Kamran, we can book to go on the next flight...right?' 'huh...um yeah...sure...can you excuse me for a minute I need to make a few calls' 'but Kamran...what about the next flight shall I book you on?' 'yes...I am right behind you...I will meet you at the counter'

Haider and Humera walked to the booking counter they booked their tickets to the Valley and booked Kamran a ticket to Bangalore 'Ya Allah...this better work' Humera said trying to regulate her erratic heart beat 'it will Humera...it will, look we are just two boarding gates apart...so we will be walking in the same direction...he will not suspect anything until it's too late'.

'Here is your ticket, come we can go through departures' Humera said. Kamran took the ticket from her and started walking 'hang on...one minute' as Kamran turned around Humera and Haider held their breaths 'where are you going?' he said looking at Haider 'through departures...my client group is waiting for me at the VIP room, I have been given a special pass to go and collect them' 'oh...ok'.

Haider sighed in relief when Kamran turned around and continued walking.

Haider took out his phone and sent a message to Humera

I am going to leave you now, I will be wearing a sports cap and have sunglasses on...go to the ladies and put your veil on.

'Ok Kamran, Humera...hope you two have a brilliant trip, I will see you in a few days' time' Haider extended his hand out to Kamran who shook it and then smiled at Humera before he left.

Humera sat outside the boarding gate for Bangalore, trying to keep her nerves in check. She kept on scanning the passengers that walked past to see if she could spot Haider, but she had already missed him. As the announcement came for them to board the plane Humera stood up and smiled nervously at Kamran 'let's go' Humera kept looking a t her watch, she needed to get out and board her own plane before it was too late. Kamran held on to her elbow 'come on Humera, stop walking so slowly' 'yeah...sure' she said as she let him lead her on to the plane. Once they sat down Humera stood up, her eyes were fixated on the door 'what happened?' 'Nothing, I just always get a little anxious when I have to fly, am just going to the toilet'.

Humera looked over her shoulder to see Kamran busy with his phone, she quickly ran to the opposite aisle and locked herself in the toilets. If there was a record time for wearing a full veil Humera had just broken it, she stepped outside of the toilets and made up an excuse to step off the plane 'ma'am you need to hurry up, we will be closing the door soon' 'yeah...just one minute' she said before she hurried off.

Humera ran out off the plane and out of her boarding gate and towards where her flight was due to take off any minute. She ran in to find people all standing in a queue 'Haider where are you?' she said in a panic 'am right behind you' as soon as she heard his voice she turned around and hugged him 'please let's just board the plane before he sees us or realises I am missing'. Humera did not sit in peace until the air hostess closed the door of the plane after which she let out a sigh in relief 'Ya Allah, thank you...thank you'.

As the plane approached the runway Humera took off her veil and Haider took of his hideous cap and sunglasses 'we made it Humera...poor Kamran must be going crazy looking for you...Humera look...that's the plane for Bangalore, it's just taken off' Humera looked outside the window and started smiling, she turned around to face Haider and gave him a high five. They were finally off to the Valley, to meet with their families and then to finally return home.

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Chapter 18 Part B

Even though the journey was not long, Humera did not sit in peace. Haider had given up trying to calm her down and make her understand and accept that they had actually succeeded. It was only when the plane touched down and they embarked did she feel content.
Asad hugged Haider 'you don't know how happy I am, thank you so much Haider, you really did it' Asad went on to meet Humera as Ayaan met Haider 'long time' 'I know, hope you and Aunty Shireen have been well' 'yes, she is eagerly waiting for you guys to get home...come'. The four of them wore happy faces and made their way towards the car park unaware of the man that stood behind them taking pictures on his phone.
The reunion back at the hotel was an extremely emotional one, it took a long fifteen minutes before everyone was able to finish hugging and wiping tears away. Shireen had prepared a lavish meal which everyone enjoyed 'Shireen, that was absolutely delicious, thank you' Dilshad said 'Dilshad, you forget you did help too...so the credit goes both ways' 'Ammi you and Aunty Shireen sit, me and Api will clear up' Shireen looked up at Humera 'its ok beta, we have maids, they will take care of it, come you and Zoya can join us in the back'
The boys including Ghaffur seemed to follow the ladies outside 'Ammi, I think we should get down to sorting out our next plan of action. It is obvious that Kamran knows that we duped him, but what we don't know is how vast his connections are...we shouldn't underestimate him nor take any risks by delaying anything' 'I agree with you Haider...Asad, beta the ball is in your court, are you and Zoya ready?' Asad looked at Zoya, he was about to answer when she spoke 'we are ready Aunty...as ready as we will ever be. I also agree with Haider, the sooner we do this the better, why take unnecessary risks' Humera held on to her arm and jumped in excitement and Asad just stood there in awe of her new found sureness.
'Ghaffur Bhai, I think we should go ahead first thing in the morning, it is Friday, so maybe just before Jummah prayers' 'I think that would be a great time to have the Nikah,. I will take Ayaan and Asad to talk to the Maulana tonight so the papers can be prepared by the morning'.
Dilshad turned towards Zoya and placed her hand against her cheek 'this is no way a future Queen should be wedded, I am sorry we have not been able to do more under the circumstances Zoya' 'Aunty please...this is perfect, I have all my family with me, people who are important...and besides I have already promised Humera a big reception party when we get back home' 'Api, what will you wear' Humera said wide eyed realising she didn't bring anything with her 'you don't need to worry about that Humera, I brought an outfit for Zoya' Zoya and Humera started to smile 'you did...well come on then I want to see it' Humera said pulling at Dilshad's arm.
Dilshad pulled out a simple yet elegant lehnga 'Aunty it is beautiful' 'really, you like it' yes, I love it' Zoya picked up the lehnga that was sparkling gold with a deep maroon 'Api, you are going to look stunning in this...Ya Allah Princess Zoya Abdulla Farooqui is getting married' Zoya hugged her little sister 'yes she is...but worry not because Princess Humera Abdulla will also be following pursuit' Humera pulled back how do you mean?' Zoya looked at Dilshad 'I mean that once we get home I will be placing this beautiful hand into the hands of the man I know that will love you like no other...I will be asking for you and Haider to be officially engaged and as soon as you complete your degree I want you to get married too' Dilshad covered her mouth as she shed tears of happiness 'Zoya...really' 'yes Aunty really...I already have spoken to Haider about it'
Dilshad left the room to find Haider, she need to hug him and express her happiness at the news she had just received. 'I can't believe that the heirs of Barakah Valley are here with me...I am so happy for you both, I really wish our King was here to witness this happiness' Shireen said 'he is Aunty, he is with us every step of the way' Zoya said pointing up wards.
'Api, I will officially become Mrs Haider Ali...and you Mrs...what is Asad's full name again?' she said scratching her head. Zoya started to laugh 'Asad Ahmed Khan' Shireen looked up to her again 'Asad Ahmed Khan...' She whispered to herself 'are you ok?' Zoya asked Shireen seeing her facial expression change 'yes, I am...let me go and check on the boys...doesn't matter how old they are you can't leave them on their own for long' Zoya and Humera started laughing.
Ghaffur and Haider had managed to arrange everything they needed to for the Nikah to take place. As Haider walked in with Ghaffur and Asad he was taken aback by his mum pulling him into a hug 'Haider, you don't know how happy you have made me, something I have been waiting for all this time' Haider pulled his Ammi back 'waiting for what Ammi?' 'you and Humera, Zoya told me...actually she announced that you and Humera will officially be getting engaged' Haider started to smile 'oh...yeah that...I was going to tell you' Asad grabbed his arm and turned him around 'that is so cool Haider, congratulations man' 'thank you' he said as he hugged him.
The whole family sat around in totally happiness but also totally oblivious of what was going on not so far away from them. The man at the airport was none other than Kamran's man. As soon as Kamran realised that Humera had escaped he called his people in the Valley. He knew that seeing that painting in Haider's house was no coincidence, he knew that if Humera had tricked him and run, she was definitely going to be headed there. The picture he received was only a confirmation of that. He ordered his man to pull in more people and to wait for him before they made their move. The only thing left to see was if he reached there before the Nikah took place or after.
Dilshad could see Asad and Zoya steal glances 'Asad, although traditionally you shouldn't be talking to your wife to be just before the wedding, I can see you need to have one last conversation' Asad started to blush as he looked at her 'go on...you have ten minutes and then after that the only time you see her is as your bride'. Asad stood up and walked outside 'go on Zoya, don't make him wait forever' Dilshad said teasingly.
Zoya joined Asad outside, they both looked at each other and then looked away feeling rather shy 'your last night as a single lady' 'yes...and yours as an eligible bachelor' Asad started to laugh 'eligible bachelor...seriously'. Asad entwined his fingers with Zoya's 'it's all going to work out you know' 'I know' scared?' 'Nope...a little nervous...but it's a good nervousness...I think we should get back' Asad wanted for her to stay but he knew that going back was the right thing to do.
No one was sleeping, as much as they all tried they were kept wide awake, waiting for the new dawn, the sun to rise and shine its beautiful light on them. And when it did shine it was an amazing feeling, a feeling like they had never felt before.
Asad and Zoya were kept apart, Humera spent the morning pampering her sister and then helping her get ready for her Nikah, on the other side Haider and Ayaan were doing the same for Asad.
'Haider, Ayaan...are you ready...the Maulana will be here shortly' Ghaffur said as he walked in 'yes Chacha, we are all set'.
Once the Maulana came in he greeted everyone and took his seat 'please call the bride to be' Humera ran inside where Zoya stood looking extremely nervous but absolutely breathtakingly stunning 'you ready Api?' Zoya nodded. Humera led Zoya outside and as she did Shireen and Dilshad joined her, they all walked her and sat her down on the others side of the veil that had been erected between them.
The Maulana started with Zoya

'Zoya Abdulla Farroqui, daughter of Mohammed Abdulla Farooqui, do you take Asad Ahmed Khan, son of Rashid Ahmed Khan to be your husband with a Haq Mehr of 1001 rupees, kya aap ko Qubool Hai?' 'Jee Qubool Hai'
'Asad Ahmed Khan, son of Rashid Ahmed Khan do you take Zoya Abdulla Farroqui, daughter of Mohammed Abdulla Farooqui to be your wife with a Haq Mehr of 1001 rupees, kya aap ko Qubool Hai?' 'Jee Qubool Hai'
The Maulana raised his hands and then read out a few versus of the Quran after which he congratulated the newlywed couple. Asad hugged his brothers and Ghaffur Chacha. On the other side of the veil Humera stood up to hug Zoya, when she turned around to give way to Dilshad and Shireen she was surprised to see them missing 'hey, where did they disappear to?' she asked looking left to right maybe they have gone to get the mithai' Humera and Haider stood on opposite sides of the veil 'you two ready...Api, you want to see your husband...Ya Allah I can't believe you are married' 'Humera, can you please stop with your blabber, let's not make them wait any longer' Haider said 'ok ok...on three...1...2...3' Humera and Haider dropped the veil and as they did Asad and Zoya finally came face to face, their eyes instantly connected taking in the other entirely. Feeling conscious of the teasing eyes and cheeky smiles around them Zoya started to blush and then looked away.
'Where is Ammi?' Asad asked as he looked behind her 'good question' Humera said 'one minute they were there and no they are gone'. 'Asad you sit with Zoya, I will go and get them' Haider said as he went to call Dilshad and Shireen.
Haider started to go in and out of every room 'Ammi...where are you' he called out. As he walked past the reception area he heard someone cry and immediately stopped. Haider opened the door to see Dilshad in floods of tears sitting against Shireen's hold 'Ammi...what happened?' he said as he ran towards her. Dilshad quickly stood up and wiped her tears 'no...nothing beta...just feeling a little overwhelmed' Haider started to shake his head 'no...you are hiding something...Ammi you forget how well I know you...you never look away whilst talking to me' 'No Haider, beta...your mum was just feeling overwhelmed...she didn't want to upset Zoya...come lets go back'
Dilshad walked back, she hugged Zoya 'Aunty, are you ok?' 'yes beta' she then looked at Asad who smiled at her. Dilshad took measured steps towards him 'Ammi, where did you go' 'nowhere Asad, I was here...mubarak' she hugged Asad. Asad put his arm around Dilshad, he secured his hold as he felt her body shake against his, there was something different about the way she held him 'Ammi, what's wrong?' he whispered against her ear 'my son just got married...I am just very happy'.
Asad pulled back from Dilshad and then looked up towards Haider. Haider shrugged his shoulders understanding what Asad was asking 'umm guys, sorry to break the party, but Asad, I think we should go to the mosque its nearly time for Jummah, Ammi we will see you in about half hour'.
As the boys and Ghaffur entered the mosque two feet jumped off the plane that had just landed. Kamran walked through the arrival gate and met his men 'where are they?' was the first question they asked 'they are staying in a hotel run by a guy called Ayaan and his mother...' 'how long will it take to get there?' 'if we leave now we can be there by sunset' 'let's move'.
'Humera, something is not right...Aunty has been acting a little odd all afternoon' 'I am not sure Api...don't worry I will speak to her...come on let's get you to your room, Asad...ooops I mean Bhaijaan Asad should be returning soon' 'Humera...it is still the afternoon, have you forgotten I am not about to retire to my room now' 'oh yeah...how weird...who decided to have the Nikah so early...man...this is not good Api' Zoya started to laugh out loud 'it's no big deal, I am glad we had the Nikah in the day time...and plus it is when Allah had destined for us to have it...if it makes you any happier I will wait for Asad to come home so he can see me in this before I change' 'deal...I will go and check on them'
'Haider...will you bring him already' Humera said impatiently Haider and Ayaan managed to bring in Asad and walk him towards their room 'Asad, we thought of going to the cottage a little later, I thought Bhabhi would like to go...I mean the very place you two first connected, where you met' Asad placed his hand over Ayaan's shoulder 'thank you Ayaan, we will get ready and join you'.
Asad opened the door to find Zoya looking out the window. As she heard Asad close the door behind him, she sucked in a breath and held it. Asad walked up to her and wrapped his arms around her pulling her further into his hold 'Shaadi Mubarak Princess' Zoya turned finally turned around 'you too...we finally did it' 'yes we did...um Ayaan has arranged for us to go to the cottage, I told him that we would get ready and meet them outside'. Zoya nodded and stepped away from Asad to go and get changed as she started to walk off Asad held her hand and pulled her back, he leaned towards he and gently brushed his cheek against hers, as his face came into contact with hers Zoya whole body erupted with goose bumps 'Asad...I' 'I know Zoya' Asad kissed Zoya on the cheek 'I just wanted to kiss my wife...my bride...before you got changed that's all' Zoya gave him a loving smile, she tip toed up and placed a soft kiss on his cheek in return 'I'll be back in a few minutes'.
Zoya came out dressed in a light green and pink outfit, she looked at Asad who also had changed into his jeans and tee shirt 'you ready?' 'yeah' Asad walked up to Zoya and held her hand into his and then walked outside to be with the rest of the family.
'Haider can you please talk to Ammi, I have been calling her for ages but she is refusing to eat...there is something wrong with her' Haider looked at Humera and then at the new couple that had just walked in 'hey...you guy ready already...you start eating, I am just going to get Ammi' Haider walked past Asad and towards where Dilshad and Shireen's room.
Dilshad stood up seeing Haider walk in 'Ammi...you are crying again' 'no beta...I got something in my eye...have Asad and Zoya left?' 'no, we haven't even eaten yet, and do you really think Asad would leave without seeing you...come on lets go' 'Haider I am not feeling too good, you guys go ahead and eat'. When Dilshad turned away from Haider he walked up to her and made her turn back around "what is it that you are not telling me...what is wrong Ammi...please' 'Haider its nothing please just go' 'No I will not go not until you tell me what is going on, you have waited for this day as much as everyone, and now Asad is finally married you keep yourself away...everyone is asking where you are'.
Dilshad's eyes started to well up again, feeling frustrated Haider turned to Shireen 'what is going on Aunty...please will one of you say something...Asad and Zoya just got married, and instead of being happy you are here looking like someone has died' 'Haider' Dilshad reprimanded him 'Sorry Ammi...but please...just come' 'I can't Haider...I can't go and face him knowing who he is' Haider looking at his mother confused 'who who is...Ammi you are making no sense' Dilshad started crying she turned around to face him 'Asad...I am talking about Asad...from he minute I met him I felt like I knew him, like I was connected to him somehow, it was like all my motherly instinct heightened...' 'Ammi what do you mean?' 'Asad Ahmed Khan...Haider his name is Asad Ahmed Khan' 'I know ...so what?' 'Ya Allah...Haider Asad is the son of Rashid Ahmed Khan...don't you see, don't you get it?'
Haider was losing his patience he took Dilshad by her shoulders 'Ammi, I know I heard the Maulana when he read out the Nikah, what has this go to do with anything' 'Rashid Ahmed Khan is your Abu Haider...he is your father...Asad is your real brother...the one I lost all those years ago...the one I thought had died along with Rashid on that fateful day...Asad is my son Haider, my real son, your older brother' Haider stumbled backwards 'As...Asad is your son...my brother...but how?' Dilshad was about to move closer to him when her eyes caught a movement by the door, when she looked up she saw Asad standing there looking at her with tear filled eyes 'Asad' she whispered Asad looked at her and then towards Haider not believing what he had just heard.
The three of them stood there in silence, the shock of what had just been disclosed had taken away their ability to move and even speak but their silence didn't last for long.
Humera and Zoya's loud fearing screams brought them out of their trance 'Humera' 'Zoya' they both said in unison and then ran towards the dining hall where they found Ayaan pressing down on Ghaffur's head with a cloth, his head was bleeding. 'Ayaan...Ghaffur Chacha...what happened...Shit, Ayaan you are bleeding too...' Asad said as he grabbed a table cloth and wiped the blood from his cut lip 'don't worry about us Asad...Bhabhi...Humera...some guy came in and took them...it happened so fast there were so many of them' Haider and Asad looked at one another 'Ghaffur Chacha...who was it...please look at me tell us who it was' Ghaffur looked at them with tears in his eyes 'I am sorry I couldn't stop him...I couldn't stop Kamran'.
Edited by Saima-Syed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Res unres
yehhh I m first again...
but what an updates...
love the way Huha fooled Kamran... he set his men, but cant reach the valley before the nikah...
finally it is revealed that Asad is dilsahd's real son...
but the end... omg Zoya n Humi are kidnapped... man god pls save Kamran from Asad and Haider...
pls update soonish as I cant wait
but only 2 parts left...😭
Edited by Sanjhari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
MIne

Sis, I loved both the chapters. It was so gripping. I couldnt move my eyes away from the screen even for a second.


The way Hayder and Humeirah trick Kamran was amazing. UFF I hated the way he was literally sticking to humeirah (like a leech) to get information on Zoya.


The wedding was simple and I loved the fact you didnt add too much to it as the situitation didnt allow any extra celebrations.

I loved Dilshaad's breakdown. The way the truth was revealed was excellently written sis. I want to know what happens on this front.

Zoya and Humeirah kidnapped 😲. Want to see Asad and Hayder beat those guys into pulp.


Brilliant update sis. Loved it.
Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
well written update..good going..thank you for the PM...continue soon..😊

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