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Chapter 1 A New Mission
In an old, abandoned house, a young girl was trapped inside a room in a disheveled condition. Her hair was messy, bruises were found on her arms and she was dressed in bridal attire. She was tied up on her hands and she sat in a chair, crying. That was when a crooked looking man came inside the room, holding a gun in his hand. "Payal...Payal...Payal," the man said, smirking. "I didn't have to do this to you. But what could I do?! Girls like you are so hard to deal with."

The girl, Payal, looked at the man with a terrified face. The man stepped towards her, putting her at gunpoint. "Now...if you want to save yourself, marry me...then your nightmare shall end." the man said. Payal didn't say a word. "Come on...what choice do you have?! No one can save you now!" the man cackled.

Just then, the room door was knocked down. The man turned around to see a man in a black suit standing in front of him. Two other men came behind him. "Who are all of you?!" the man asked in a yelling voice.

"Ayaan, get the girl." the man in front ordered. One of the men came inside the room, untying Payal's hands. The other two men began to fight the man, kicking him in his legs and punching him in the face. "Who are you?!" the man asked, infuriated.

"Cadet Asad Ahmed Khan of the S.R.O." the young man replied.
"S.R.O.?" the man said.
"Secret Rescuing Organization...of India," the other man said. "By the way...I'm Cadet Haider Sheikh."
"And Cadet Ayaan Ahmed Khan here!" Ayaan added as he finished untying the girl's hands.
"But what have I done?!" the man asked.
"Don't act innocent. Real men ask a girl's permission for marriage... But you...you tried to force this girl into marriage by gunpoint! That doesn't make you a man," Asad replied. "Haider, handcuff him."

Haider took out a pair of handcuffs, handcuffing the man's hands and taking him away. Asad went up to Payal as Ayaan got her up from the chair. "Are you okay?" Asad asked her.

"Yes. Thank you so much."
"Please...it was my duty."
"May God bless you all."
"We'll get you home safely now."

Hours after the cadets took Payal back home, they headed back to their main base. The S.R.O was centered in the suburbs of Mumbai in a tall building that was protected by security walls. Asad, Ayaan, and Haider entered the building, using their ID's and went inside. "Another job well done." Ayaan smiled.

"Haan, yaar. I think we should go for dinner now." Haider said.
"Agreed. Bhaijaan...what do you say?" Ayaan asked Asad.
"Sure." Asad replied.

The three of them headed down to the canteen area of the building. The three of them sat at a table. Ayaan had ordered paneer and parathas for all of them. Once they got their food, Ayaan and Haider gorged on the food immediately. "Mmm...long time since I had paneer!" Ayaan exclaimed.

"And that too this good!" Haider added. As Haider continued to eat, he noticed Asad was sitting still, pondering rather than eating. "Asad." Haider called. Asad turned to Haider. "You're not hungry?" Haider asked. "Eat some." Asad nodded his head as he began to take some paneer on his plate. "Bhaijaan." Ayaan called. Asad turned to Ayaan.
"What's wrong?" Ayaan asked.
"Nothing, Ayaan." Asad replied.
"You're lying. Something is definitely bothering you." Ayaan said.
"What makes you say that?" Asad asked.
"Bhaijaan...we're brothers. I know you well enough by now." Ayaan replied.
"What are you thinking about?" Haider asked Asad.
"Nothing...I just don't know why...but I feel as if something big is going to happen," Asad answered. "Have you ever felt like that before?"
"Yeah, I understand." Haider said.
"What big thing?" Ayaan asked.
"I don't know. I have some weird feeling that something will happen that's going to change my life. I don't know why I feel as such." Asad said.
"If that is it, then something is going to happen," Ayaan smiled. "Question is what."

"Hello, cadets." a man, in a gray uniform, said coming upto the three boys.
"Mr. Sharma!" Ayaan exclaimed.
"Sir, you here?" Asad asked.
"Yes...actually I have to give you three your new task." Mr. Sharma said.
"Sure, we'll come." Asad agreed.

On the other hand, all the way in Rajasthan, there lied a dark, secret hideout. It was like a small castle almost, but no one could see it as it was guarded by a circular wall. Within the walls of this castle, there was a girl who was in the balcony of her room. The girl had long, raven black hair, shiny and silky. She had tears forming from her big chocolate brown eyes as she looked downward. Here's my chance. I can escape while they're having dinner, the girl thought to herself. The girl was about to get off the balcony until a voice called, "Zoya."

And that was her name. Zoya turned around, looking at the girl standing there. She was a short girl with long dark hair, wearing a green salwar kameez. "Humeira...what are you doing here?" Zoya asked.

"That's what I should be asking you, Zoya. Don't do it."
"Humeira, this is our chance to escape. Come on!"
"Zoya, we've tried this before. We were caught and beaten for it. Its best not to."

Zoya sighed and got down from the balcony. She headed inside the small room with Humeira. The two sat down in their room. "I wish we could continue trying. But no matter what...we still can't escape!" Humeira cried.

"Humeira, I've spent five years here in this prison. I've tried many times and failed many as well. But I still believe...that there is some light out there waiting for me to bask in it. So i can't stop trying."
"It's because of you. I was taken here two years ago. These two years would be far more worse had you not been here to support me."
"Which is why we have to be here for each other...until the light comes."

"This is your mission." Mr. Sharma said. Back at the S.R.O. headquarters, Mr. Sharma was going over the new mission with Asad, Ayaan, and Haider. "How long have these girls been in captivity?" Asad asked, looking at the computer screen showing screenshots of the hideout. "That we don't know. Our spy was only able to capture these shots. No one knows about the girls in there as the castle is guarded by circular walls." Mr. Sharma explained.

"He could've taken pictures of the girls in there!" Ayaan exclaimed.
"Why?!" Haider asked Ayaan.
"One of them could be my potential bride!" Ayaan smiled.
"Our job is to rescue them...not send them our kundlis." Haider said.
"Shall we go tonight?" Asad asked.
"Is that okay?" Mr. Sharma asked.
"The sooner the better." Asad replied.
"Then so be it. You can rescue them tonight itself." Mr. Sharma said.
"Who knows, Bhaijaan?! Maybe one of them might be the something that'll change your life!" Ayaan exclaimed.
"Ayaan, please. This is just my job to rescue them," Asad retorted. "And besides...my job has so much importance...that I don't have time for such nonsense."

"I still can't believe how you can be so hopeful, Zoya." Humeira said to Zoya as the two stood by the balcony of their room, watching the night sky.
"One thing I can assure you, Humeira," Zoya said. "Whatever may come...some where Allah has someone that will take us away from this nightmare...a savior."


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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely start...
SRO gonna save zoya n humaira...
continue next part soon
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amazing part
thanx for pm
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Nice start
Asad with ayaan & haider on the way to rescue zoya & humeira
He has a feeling that something will happen & change his life
Waiting for next update for asad rescue zoya & their first met
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazingly written excited to read more thanx for the pm and update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow superb update. Very nice start. Waiting to c asad rescuing zoya and asya first meet. And also waiting to c how zoya going to change asad life. Cant wait for next part. Pls update soon
❤️ Raj
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This is such a splendid first chapter!!

I am loving it!!!


And Ayaan AND Haider???? Double wow!!!!



I'm so enthralled! What spell is this Meryl!!?? I'm so taken by all your stories!!! And every update!!


Hayyyeee!!!


I love you my darling!!


Update update!!!


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Chapter 2 The Rescue
It was around eight at the castle. Zoya and Humeira were in their rooms, eating the little food they were forced to eat for dinner which was just bread with pickle. As they ate, a man entered their room, who appeared to be one of the men working for the don. "Saab has ordered both of you down. Guests have arrived. You need to dance." the man said.

"Why ask us when you force us to dance for your own cruel means of entertainment?!" Zoya asked, infuriated. Thats when the head of the castle, the don, had arrived. "Akram saab!" the man exclaimed. Akram gave an angry look on his face to Zoya. "You leave." Akram ordered the man. The man left the room. Akram came towards Zoya, grabbing her by her head as Humeira gasped, scared. "In five years, I haven't been able to discipline you properly! You both get ready!" Akram yelled, pulling on Zoya's hair as he held her by the back of her head. "Or else...you don't know what Akram saab is capable of!" With that, Akram jerked Zoya, throwing her off against the wall. Her head was bruised against it as she fell on the floor. "Zoya!" Humeira called out, rushing to Zoya. Akram left the room. Humeira helped Zoya get up."Zoya, just get ready. I'll be back." Humeira said. Humeira gave Zoya's ghagra to her and left the room. As she was walking down the hall, she was grabbed by someone, who covered her mouth with his hand. The man took Humeira in a storage closet. He was wearing a black mask. He let Humeira go and took off the mask to reveal who he was...Haider. "What is the meaning of this?!" Humeira asked. Haider signaled her to be quiet. "Who are you?" Humeira asked.

"Cadet Haider Sheikh of the S.R.O." Haider answered.
'S.R.O.?"
"Secret Rescue Organization of India. Me and two other cadets are here to rescue you and your friend."
"How could you even know two girls were trapped here if this castle is guarded by the walls?"
"Our organization has its ways of finding those in captivity. Now...you'll have to stay in here with me."
"But what about Zoya?"
"Your friend will get taken cared of. But my orders are to have one of the girls, that's you, stay with me. Just stay with me."
"Okay."

Haider then turned on his ear communicator. "Hello, Asad." he said. Asad and Ayaan were outside of the castle. Asad was near the wall, while Ayaan had made his way near the actual castle, under a pillar. "Yes, Haider. Do you have one of the girls with you?" Asad asked.

"Yes, Asad."
"Good. Stay there with her until I tell you to come out."
"Okay. What about you and Ayaan?"
"Ayaan will take care of the guards. Once he does, I'll make my way inside the castle, disguised as one of the guests. I'll rescue the other girl then and we'll leave together."
"All right, captain."

Asad then switched his communicator to contact with Ayaan. "Ready, Ayaan?" Asad asked. "I was born ready, bhaijaan!" Ayaan replied.

"GO!" Asad ordered. Ayaan jumped from the pillar and attacked both of the guards at once. He kicked both of them and banged them against the walls of the castle, knocking them unconscious. "All clear, bhaijaan." Ayaan said to Asad. Asad then activated his belt under his suit jacket, which was a bunjee belt which had a long metal string come out from it and hang onto the top of the outside walls. Asad climbed up the wall and then jumped downward. He reached to the castle entrance, entering inside while Ayaan stood by to watch the guards and make sure they wouldn't wake up.

In her room, Zoya had gotten ready. She wore her green choli over her magenta ghagra that had many colors as well. She wore several jewels as well. "How much longer do I have to go through this toruture?!" Zoya asked, shedding a tear. "And where's Humeira?! She hasn't came back!" That's when Akram came in her room. Zoya turned around to him in fear. Akram smirked, coming towards her as she backed up against the wall. "That's it...a real beauty." Akram said as he tried to touch her hair. Zoya moved her head away from him. "What's wrong? Still the shy nineteen year old girl you were when I first brought you here?" Akram asked in a sinister voice. Zoya slapped Akram across the face, disgusted. Akram touched his cheek, looking at Zoya with rage. Akram then hit her even harder against her face as she fell on the floor. "Now enough of this!" Akram yelled as he grabbed Zoya by her head. He pulled her out of the room, dragging her down the stairs as she pleaded him to stop. He took her to dance floor which was covered in decorations like trees,lights, and little curtains. "When the time comes, be ready to entertain my guests. Or else!" Akram warned. He left while Zoya sat there, crying as she bled on her forehead.

Akram made sure all the guests were seated. Asad stood along with some other guests who also chose to stand. Asad looked around the area. And that's when he saw Zoya, sitting on the dance floor. Her sad face stuck his eyes. Not due to her tears it was. But even in tears, her beauty was still not ignorable. "All right, guests! We shall begin the night with our very own Zoya dancing for us!" Akram announced. "She shall begin." The guests all clapped except for Asad who was still waiting to make his move. Music started playing...but Zoya sat still in anger, refusing to dance. The guests looked confused, some even angry that she wouldn't dance. "Haider...take the girl with you and escape from the balcony of the girls room. I instructed Ayaan to help you with the rest." Asad whispered to Haider over the commuincator. "Yes, Asad." Haider said. Haider opened the storage room door and went with Humeira to her room. They went off to the balcony. "We'll have to jump." Haider said as he let down a rope.

"What?!"
"Its okay. We'll be fine."
'But what about Zoya?!"
"Asad will take care of her, don't worry!"
"But I'm scared!"
"Just trust me!"

Those words struck Humeira, as she turned to Haider. She then nodded her head as she held onto Haider, with the two of them going down the rope. When they got to the ground, Ayaan came to them. "Come on! Let's get to the car and wait for Asad!" Ayaan said. The three of them ran towards the castle wall, where they climbed up using the rope Ayaan had placed. They got down the wall from the other side using the same rope and got to the car.

In the hall. Akram went up to Zoya in rage. He got her up by pulling her by her head that was covered with her choli. He smacked her in her face. "Will you ever learn?! You've danced here for five years under me!" Akram yelled.

"What I've done for you is not dance! Dance...was my passion! It allowed me to express my feelings! But what you've made me do is nothing but cheap entertainment for your own liking!" Zoya yelled. "You treat women like they are puppets to be played around with! Well I won't stand for it! I don't want to perform for filthy people like you and your company!"

The guests were shocked. Zoya's words had touched Asad as he looked at her determined face. Akram became even more furious. He pushed Zoya to the floor. "Now I'll show you what happens when you disobey me!" Akram shouted. He was just about to smack Zoya again until his hand was stopped by someone. It was none other than Asad. Zoya looked at Asad with astonishment. "Who are you?!" Akram asked Asad in rage. Asad threw Akram off by his arm to the floor.

"A man that should've came here long ago. Any one could've. But it takes courage for a girl to withstand the likes of you for so long." Asad told Akram. Zoya looked up at Asad, surprised. Asad turned to Zoya, holding out his hand. Zoya looked at him with relief.

Zoya took Asad's hand and Asad helped her get up. As she got up, her veil came off her head. "You think you can take her from here so easily?!" Akram shouted as he got up. "Attack him!" Four other men arrived, ready to attack Asad. Zoya stood back and Asad began to fight the goons on his own. He kicked all of them, throwing out punches against all of them until each of them was down. Akram attacked him from behind, hitting him. Asad turned to him, punching him in the face. Akram drew out a dagger, and because Zoya was near, she was struck by the dagger on her hand, which began to bleed. Asad dodged the dagger and hit Akram in the face three times. Then he kicked him in his leg, finishing him off. With all of them down, Asad looked at Zoya, who was standing uneasy. She fell while Asad caught her in time. Zoya looked into Asad's eyes as she lifted him for her safety. The lights in the castle began to dim out.

Zoya continued to hold onto Asad as he carried her away down the hall. After five long years... her savior had come.

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Thank you for the pm

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