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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ican

Good topic idiot abusing stepmothers and horrible stepfathers


Thanks 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
but thats not going to be actual topic of the story or FB ,,
its yet to come
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

wonderful!!

Really Zoya's dark past made me numb...
She had gone through so much then how she would open up to Asad!!
Really Asad surprised me every time in this story!!
Were they related somehow in their childhood???
Zohura -Asad!!
I know I am asking too many things!!
It was an awesome update
Loved it 😊


Thanks Swapno 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
Past is still left to clarify Zoya's character ,,
all I can say is that u will get ur answers sooon 😆
no u r not asking much ,,
I always love ur comments 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for Update.

First of all,The pic was very nice and i just loves it,Thank you for this pic.
It was very nice part.
Asad(KSG) takes Zoya for coffee,it was very nice and their conversation was very nice.
Zoya and Nisha bond was so nice and their conversation was very nice.
The flashback part was so sad ,Zoya had blamed by her father for no mistake she hadn't done.
Please update next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY)
PRIYAKABHI.


Thanks Priya 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
Will deffo try updating soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Amazing update...Sparks are flying...Asad held her hand😳 ignoring her stupid excuses😆...AsYa are falling for each other...loved every bit of the update😳...Zoya had such a tragic past😭...I just want to kill Gaffur,Razia and Saiqa😡😡😡...🤬...I have a request to you-can you also write the pronunciation of the german words that you include in the update?in brackets like you did in the first chapter😊...in this way we can get to learn a li'l bit of German too and even speak if required anytime😃...It's ok if it's hectic for you😊...I understand it takes a lot of time to write and post an update😳...and you're doing a terrific job👏🤗...update soon😃


Thanks 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
haha kill them but after my story ends plzz 😆
I always do I don't know how I forgot this time ,,
just edited now soo u can read it 😊
noo its not hectic at all I also want u all to understand whatever I am writing 😉
That really means alot to me ,,
thanks for appreciating my work 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maz8

Wonderful update😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maha70

Congrates for new Thread.. Banner is awesome..😳

Wonderful Update..
Update Soon..😊


Thanks Maha 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
Will try updating soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinita459

Congrats for the new thread 🥳
Lovely update as usual. I really like this Asad. He seems really mature and understanding person.
Zoe is afraid of getting closer to him.
Looking forward to more AsYa scenes.
Update soon Sweety :)


Thanks Vinita 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
Yeah for a change my Asad is normal 😆
Will try my best to add more of it ,,
Will be updating sooon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Bubble.. That was brilliant... Liked how Asad grabbed her hand and took her for coffee.. and he felt sad knowing shewould be away for 10 days... oh oh... so Asad is already feeling a pull towards her...and same with her...but she is trying to hide her feelings and being stubborn..😊

Zoya is such agood friend of Nisha.. loved their bonding...and the conversations...😊


Thanks Devika 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
Yup he is always feeling a pull towards her 😆
Yup life made her stubborn !
Yeah they are best friends 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Both asad & zoya wanted to speak each other but can't
Finally they met after a week in hotel
Asad shared his car passion with zoya & asked abt her
She doesn't want to break her walls
She told nisha abt asad & she said to think on different way as well
Flashback was sad poor zoya, hope asad will take her out from her misery
Plz update soon
Thanks for pm
Congratulations for new thread


Thanks 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
yeah she just answered him as if it was her viva 😆
he will deffo take her out of all that miseries ,,
Will try updating sooon !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: laks_vish

loved it!! I hate Gaffur...what kind of dad is he?...Zoya 's past is similar to Cindrella


Thanks 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
aww really ?? I love cindrella ❤️
maybe it was in my sub-conscious mind while writing the beginning of FB ,,
but story is gonna change from now on 😉

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