| SaHil OS: 'Three Wishes' |(part-3 uptd on pg-6/ oct 21) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part -3

Sanam was happy seeing Aahil-he is a changed man now,he believed in him,he believed in her and with her support he was becoming a person whom she always wished.

Aahil asked her "Now, come on quickly tell me your second wish!" in an impatient voice.

Sanam enjoyed the desperation in his eyes -his eyes spoke volumes, she explored a new world inside it, it always wanted to see sanam happy and wanted to fulfil all her wishes. It took a moment for her to relieve from his eyelock!

"Dance!" she muttered.

"Dance?" Asked Aahil in a surprised tone.

"Yes ! I want to dance with you now, and that's final!" she said in an assertive tone.

Aahil had no other choice, he convinced her with his "ok".

Aahil raised his right hand towards her to seek her hand,she gave he hers. Then he curved his hand around her hip and pulled her closely , Sanam was taken aback with this intimacy, her heart was beating faster, She felt numb standing very close to him, she could feel the warmth from Aahil's hand when he pulled her closer.

"What happened?" he questioned her.

Sanam was lost in her thoughts about this intimacy and took a moment to understand what was happening.

"Are you okay, Sanam?" he asked her in a naughty voice.

"I...I am..ahh...I am fine, yes absolutely fine!" she uttered in shivering voice.

Aahil understood her state and was smiling inside, later he took his phone and played his favourite song.



"Baby, I know you're hurting
Right now you feel like you could never
Love again
Now all I ask is for a chance
To prove that I love you

From the first day
That I saw your smiling face
Honey, I knew that we would
Be together forever
Ooh when I asked you out
You said no but I found out
Darling that you'd been hurt
You felt like you'd never love again
I deserve a try honey just once
Give me a chance and I'll prove this all wrong
You walked in, you were so quick to judge
But honey he' s nothing like me

I'll never break your heart
I'll never make you cry
I'd rather die than live without you
I'll give you all of me
Honey, that's no lie"



Both danced happily, passion was predominantly running into their veins, they could feel eachother's warmth by their touch, they were madly in love with eachother. After the dance, Sanam hugged him tightly ,Aahil obliged and held her and asked her "What happened ,Sanam? You are happy right!" .

Sanm was silently crying from inside ,she wanted that moment to freeze forever, because everything which was happening was surreal for her. The person whom she thought she would hate until her lifetime is the same person whom she can't live without now, tears started to roll out from her eyes, she released herself from him and started walking away from him without saying a word so that Aahil doesn't see her in tears.

Aahil was puzzled with everything, her behaviour surprised him, he didn't know what to do, thinking that she is angry with him; he followed her and gave her a back hug tightly.

Sanam's eyes were already with tears.

"Sanam, what happened? Why are you so silent ? You are happy right?" saying this he turned her face towards him, he was shocked to see Sanam crying.

"Sanam, What happened, why are you crying,Did I hurt you?.." he asked in a restless voice.

"No Aahil, I am crying because I am happy being next to you" she said wiping her tears.

"But why are you crying if you are happy?" he questioned her.

"Buddhu, Is there any rule that one should cry only when they are sad, no right..! these are the tears of joy, ok" she said in a calm voice.

Aahil didn't know what to say.

"You know Aahil, I am very satisfied with my life today, I want god to maintain this happiness forever, even though you think I gave you strength to live, but it was you , who believed in me than myself, by seeing your belief in me, I started to believe in myself,You think I support you, But the truth is,it's you who always supported me and gave me strength" she finished and turned towards Aahil.

She was shocked to see Aahil, he was crying too, she asked him "Why are you crying now! Did I say something I shouldn't?".

Aahil took a long breath and wiping his tears he said "Buddhu , these are the tears of joy!". He smiled.

Seeing him she smiled too.

Both hugged each other tightly.

After a moment,Aahil asked "Ok, Tell me your third wish!".


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Sorry for updating late, was busy with some work.


ok guys how was it?.😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Aaliya i just read all three parts 😳 they were SO cute
Bravo 👏 i loved them 😃

SaHils first date

Aahils song choice was perfect 😳 and their dance was so darn adorable 😳
SaHil crying tears of joy after the dance was just cuteness overload 😭 😳

Update soon 😳 i wonder what the third and final wish will be 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Ohhh that was a sweet update

Sanam is so emotional but understandable why she's crying cus all the past memories came flooding back. This is when I would have loved to have images or descriptions of the exact scenes she's thinking of but all good I imagined the ones I like the most

Ahil cried too :)

Loved that call each other "budhu" so real and cute

Great update
Hmm whas the next wish gonna be...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Beautiful start..😳

Loving it..❤️

Do continue soon and PM me when you update..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ..Sakura..

Aaliya i just read all three parts 😳 they were SO cute

Bravo 👏 i loved them 😃

SaHils first date

Aahils song choice was perfect 😳 and their dance was so darn adorable 😳
SaHil crying tears of joy after the dance was just cuteness overload 😭 😳

Update soon 😳 i wonder what the third and final wish will be 😳



Thnk u so much kiru! 🤗
glad u liked it! just wait and u will come to know the third wish soon! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Ohhh that was a sweet update

Sanam is so emotional but understandable why she's crying cus all the past memories came flooding back. This is when I would have loved to have images or descriptions of the exact scenes she's thinking of but all good I imagined the ones I like the most

Ahil cried too :)

Loved that call each other "budhu" so real and cute

Great update
Hmm whas the next wish gonna be...


Thnks, yeah she was full of mixed emotions.
Just wait and u will come to know abt the 3rd wish! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinks2911

Beautiful start..😳


Loving it..❤️

Do continue soon and PM me when you update..😊


Thnk u, sure i will do it! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
lovely update she said Buddhu, Is there any rule that one should cry only when they are sad, no right..! these are the tears of joy, ok" and in the end when he said buddhu these are tears of joy awww loved it cute/ continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: FATIMA78651

lovely update she said Buddhu, Is there any rule that one should cry only when they are sad, no right..! these are the tears of joy, ok" and in the end when he said buddhu these are tears of joy awww loved it cute/ continue soon :)



thnk u, yeah even I liked the buddhu! thing 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Aaliya so romantic update
Loved it

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