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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys this is ursula here i have remained a scilent reader but now i think its high time i come out of the silent reader zone and post something . Sorry guys So i decided to post my short story on ofcourse asya( sorry guys I am a huge fan of Kuch kuch hota hai so most of the songs r from it ) and name it

" We were we are and will always remain best friends "


Chapter one

Asad is in his room getting ready for his forced engagement with zoya .
Asad always took zoya as his best friend . But the problem was zoya really liked him . Because of which Asad's mom was forcing him to get engaged to zoya . But asad thought it was to early for him to get engaged he's just 20 . Asad took a last look at him self in the mirror and went out to see zoya waiting for him to come . Zoya smiled at him and asad could see her brasses . Zoya was a normal look girl with pimples & brasses . Asad looked at his mother and gave her an expression that ment I can't believe I'm doing this . Zoya's mom passed away when she was just 5years old and her dad died out of shock leaving zoya with her younger brother & younger sister.Anyways coming back to the engement party where asad & zoya exchanged there rings.
At night Zoya was dreaming of her future with asad


On the other hand asad is thinking what he has done today when Najma enters and aks

Najma - r u ok Bhaijan

Asad look at Najma says

Asad - do I look ok

Only Najma knew that asad took zoya only as his best friend not more than that .

najma - bhaijan abbu is coming here tomorrow and wants to meet u.

Asad - ( gets angry and says) who gave him permission to come here I don't want to meet him .


Najma -even I don't want to meet him I mean in this 9 years he has not even asked how we are and where we are but bhaijan ammi gave him permission to come and meet u so for ammi we have to tolerate him tomorrow .


Asad - ok I will try my best .

( Zoya & ayan r all so good friends they call each other rabbot & mona)
The next day rashid (Asad's father ) comes with ayan ,nikhat & nusat (Asad's step bro & sis ) asad greets them hugs ayan , nikhat & nusat . For asad ayan , nikhat & nusat were like real brother & sisters he never compared between them & Najma .

Ayan - bhaijan i wana speak to u alone


Asad - ok

asad takes him in his room & tells Najma to show nikhat & nusat the house Najma agrees and takes them while Rashid talks to dilshad ( Asad's mom)

ayan enters the room he asks him whether he is happy with zoya . Asad says he just considers zoya as his best friend . Ayan says i understand your condition bhaijan . Asad says zoya is not the girl I want to marry . Just then ayan notices some shadow at his back and turns to see zoya standing with tears in her eyes.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice ss...
Loved it...
Asad consider zoya only as a friend bt zoya loves him...
Zoya heard the convo b/w asad and ayaan
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
Asad consider zoya as his best friend only
Zoya like asad that's why asad mom want him to marry her
Plz update soon
Do pm me for next update
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks guys I was really nervous while posting . I am glad u guys liked it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Awesome writing, I like it
Poor Zoya, loving Asad, it must have been a shock to hear his comment. Curious to see how this turns out.

Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Thank u guys for the comments I really appriciate it . I wanted u guys to know that I will be updating 1 chapter in 1 day . Because this is the only option left for me cuz in some days I will be going to India for my studies away from my family 😭 and away from Indian Forum 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing start
plz pm me for updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely start...
asad doesnt want zoya as his life partner... is it bcz he considers her only best friend or bcz of her average looks ...
zoya heard the convo...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice.
interesting.
asad considers zoya only as a best friend
poor zoya
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice

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Asad says zoya is not the girl I want to marry . Just then ayan notices some shadow at his back and turns to see zoya standing with tears in her eyes.

For the next part like Zoya could be in the garden and in the BG mein you could add these

Pehle pyar ka pehla ghum

Pehli baar hain aankhein num

Pehla hai tanhaai ka ye mausam

Aa bhi jao warna ro denge hum

Then Asad could come and they could have a moment; like she may try to set him free but he says give me one chance we are friends I will try to make it work

What will she say? end it on a cliffy

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Sorry if you do not like the suggestion

Continue soon and plz add me to your pm list if there is one

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