My Heart Beats For You!!! AsYa FF #3 - *FINAL UPDATE & EPILOGUE* - Page 90

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Posted: 10 years ago
Diii plz write a epilodze soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Aishwarya
That was a lovely n happy ending for such a wonderful story..👏
The journey was beautiful.. friendship love and all relations..🤗
I love the element of humor u add into the updates..😛
And a special thanks for introducing such a lovely fic🤗

So u have many other stories of asya and sahil to tell us..👍🏼
will be waiting for ur writings

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful ff loved every part of it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey all!!! 😃 Going through all your comments and feeling really happy reading it 😊 So yeah, I had no plans of writing an epilogue, and after seeing each and everyone of you requesting for an epilogue, I couldn't help but make an epilogue and post it...😊 So here you go...


Epilogue:

After 3 long years:

Asad was walking to and fro nervously, while Ayaan came to him.

"Dude, relax yaar!! Why are you this tensed like a student waiting for 10th results??" asked Ayaan munching his chips.

"Humeira, ask your husband to move away or he is going to get thrashed by me in some time!!" said Asad in a tensed tone.

Humeira snatched the chips packet from Ayaan, "Ayaan, you can't stay without irritating someone with your idiotic jokes?? And no eating in hospital!!"

"Idiotic jokes??" asked Ayaan angrily, "Keep in mind I am your husband!! If you speak too much, I will send you back to your Abbu only!!"

"Yeah yeah... you will!!" smirked Humeira, "I will leave your child with you only. You should only take care of him!!"

Just then Tanveer came over there and came to Asad.

"Asad, relax baba!!" comforted Tanveer, "There is nothing to get this much tensed about Zoya. Even I have undergone all this and given birth to a child. There is nothing to get scared!!"

Asad was still nervous hearing it, while Zainab too came to him; where she and Kabir had come a week before to be with Zoya for her labor.

"Asad beta, you are such a daring and confident man, and you are getting scared like a small boy for all this??" asked Zainab, "Even Zoya seemed fearless about all this."

"No Ammi...it's like..." stammered Asad, "I just can't see her in pain...she turned all pale while she went to the labor ward...she was screaming in pain...her tears..."

Asad said and sat at the chair being tensed, while Zainab was comforting him, and Ayaan was giving weird looks at all and standing with folded hands, staring at Asad.

Just then Farhaan and Nikhat came over there and came to Tanveer.

"What happened?? Zoya delivered??" asked Nikhat, "We both had gone to the mazaar."

"No Nikhat...the doctor didn't come out yet. But here one person is having high blood pressure since long" said Tanveer pointing out to Asad, while Nikhat was smiling looking at Asad.

"Oh God!!" said Farhaan and sat next to Asad, "Dude!! Relax yaar!! There is nothing to get this afraid, even I have crossed your stage Asad...chill..."

"Guys this is seriously too much!!" said Ayaan in an angry tone, while Imraan came over there, with Rashid, and Dilshaad.

"What is happening here??" asked Imraan, "Ayaan, why are you making noise?? Don't you know you must be quiet over here??"

"Then what dude??" asked Ayaan, "Asad's tension and everyone consoling him...isn't this a bit too much for his second child????"

Rashid smiled looking at Kabir hearing it, who was having Asad and Zoya's 1 and a half year old daughter with him. Others too giggled looking at Asad, along with Dilshaad who was standing with Zainab and smiling at Asad's state.

"Dude, we all have kids...even our wives had gone through this same stage" said Ayaan to Imraan, "Look at this fellow...it's their second kid and he is getting tensed like its Zoya's first ever labor!!"

Asad stared at Ayaan while Ayaan looked at him, "What?? You are scaring me?? One tight slap I would give you and you would end up in ICU now!!"

Asad looked down with a puppy face and including Ayaan all were silently laughing.

Just then, Asad turned at the ward door hearing the door open. They all rushed at the door.

"Congrats Asad!!" said Dr. Shilpa, "It's a boy!!"

Everyone rejoiced at the news and Asad's joy knew no bounds.

"Asad!! Congrats!!" complimented Rashid and hugged Asad.

"I have become a naana once again!!!" said Kabir to Zainab with a wide smile, and she too said, "And me naani again!!!"

"Dr. Shilpa, May I come and see Zoya??" asked Asad.

"Yeah... in sometime you sure can!!" said Dr. Shilpa and left the place.

***

In some time, all of them were in the ward with Asad sitting next to Zoya and looking at their new born baby boy. They both were fondling with the kid.

"Looks just like you!!" said Zoya, while Asad smiled looking at his little son.

"So what is the name of this boy??" asked Dilshaad smiling.

"First child I named after Asad's Ammi, Sameera,; and now our son..." said Zoya, while Kabir finished it,"Ajmal?? Asad's Abbu's name??"

"Yes!!" said Zoya smiling, while Asad kissed on Zoya's forehead hearing it and all were equally happy at it.

"Abbu, give Sameera to me" said Zoya and Kabir handed over Sameera to Zoya.

Zoya took Sameera's hand and made her catch the hand of her little brother who was in Asad's arms.

"Wowww!! Perfect family!!!" complimented Ayaan, "Guys, one pic!!"

Asad and Zoya were having their two kids in their hands and fondling them, while Asad and Zoya smiled at each other, meeting their heads and looked into each other's eyes.

So, yes!! Hope you all enjoyed this epilogue...So all are still together and nothing has changed...Ayaan's antics...their friendship...Asad and Zoya's love...❤️ With this I am ending this story!! Looking forward to your comments!! 😊

Note: I am going for a vacation to India and would be less active for about a week. So, hope you all give me time to update my other stories and please do not mind if I don't reply to your pms immediately. 😊

Edited by --Aishwarya-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Aishwarya... 😊
Thanx for the PM... 😛
Well This was a Beautiful👏 , Fabulous⭐️
And Well Concluded part...👏
AsYa's Nikaah's part was Very Good Aish...😃 , Zoya remembering her life's precious moments...just before she say ' Qubool Hai ' To Asad were very nostalgic..😳👏
All the friends...getting together here on thi big day...celebrating the love of AsYa and also their strong friendship...😳
Every couple complementing...their better halves was also cute..😆
Well Tanveer's news...everybody knew tht except Asad...but usko kisne bataya..yeh mujhe kisi ne nahi bataya...😕
Rashid's proposal to Dilshaad infront of her sister Zainub was funny... 😛
Ayaan's true character came out here in full form after soo soo long...and even Tannu looked...in a mood...also..got refreshed of the initial lovely days of this FF... 👏
Well Aishwarya...what will happn to that Pent house which was Kabir's and were all of these friends started living together...and even started their journey also na... 😕 I would have like a closure to that also... 😳
Baki sab Badhiya hai... 😳
BRILLIANT story Aishwarya...Loved it completely... 👏

I will not miss this story because...whenever I will remember like reading this story..I will come again on this thread..and read the story again... 😳 That is how I admire this story...of Yours..😉

for this story...
Continue soon with your other stories... 😃

Hey Mayur!!! Thanks for your very big comment and so happy reading it. 😊

About Kabir's penthouse, its can be understood that now the friends can't stay in that house after being married, and Kabir does have properties over there as we had seen earlier that he is a rich and well-off person 😊...then about Tanveer's pregnancy news reaching Asad, I didn't think it was necessary to show Asad knowing it as since his better half knew it, he would obviously get to know 😉

And its really sweet of you that you said that you will read my story whenever you miss it...means a lot...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres
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Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its very good story
U r a wonderful writers
See u and tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful story
I gonna miss it 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
well i was also shocked when asad was hyperventilating..it was their second kid in 3 years...ayan nd his comments...i love them...
loved the epilogue
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Posted: 10 years ago
that was a beautiful ending and nice epilogue
thanks for the pm

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