#KaBhi- Dark Ecstasy. [NOTE ON PAGE 59]

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome start
It's really good
Plz continue soon
Do pm me for next update
Thanks

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@yum_immy

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Amazing start 😃
Keep it up 👍🏼
Do pm me when you next update 😳

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Very nice excited to read please PM me when u update and update soon

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

hey its interesting.. would love 2 read more continue soon n pm me

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Nice update. But i have a question. Is this a dark story. Pls say yes or no

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Naughty-Noshi

@Naughty-Noshi

Explorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
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Not Bad Noshi, Thats a good start for a first time. I love this idea and would love to read more 😊

thanks a lot for supporting me dear.
I wi try to post another chappy asap 😳

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Naughty-Noshi

@Naughty-Noshi

Explorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

You have got me hooked by the neck and my eyes glued to the screen,

The grammar is good the concept is ummm... mind...overtaking,

Love IT, LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE, its hard ti believe that this is your first time writing,

I love this kinda of concept, I remember when I wrote my first story, I was nervous as hell to post it, but yours is truly really captivating, please PM if you can and

UPDATE SOON😃

thanks dear
Such a lovely comment 😳
I know i got some freat grammatical error here but i am working on it and insha allah i will soon make hardly any in future updates.
It is my first time. Actually i was very scared you know to post here but then i felt lets give it a try.so i just posted it. And its so kind of you people to help me with comments. Thanks.

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Naughty-Noshi

@Naughty-Noshi

Explorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: maha2012
interesting😊
do pm me

thanks yar. 😳

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

i have seen the concept before slightly
different from yours...
but i must ... awesome...

now ... that good challenge

rude asad...

piss of zoya... i guess...