#KaBhi- Dark Ecstasy. [NOTE ON PAGE 59] - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Dear,
Finally I read all the 3 chapters now.
Okay so the story so far is really nice. So Zoya has run away from her home to protect her parents from bad names & misery & ended up with the monster. Well Asad is really behaving like one. He's being too harsh on her. I get it that his car has been damaged but still he could have done something else other than making her his slave & the nerve of him to get it signed by her. Seriously, I can understand he has a motive behind it & he is attracted to Zoya too but still he's being a jerk for now.
Poor Zoe can't help herself. I wonder when her parents will search her so what would happen? I feel so sad for her cause she's staying here as I know Asad won't let her go away from him.
Lets see how it goes from here & how their interactions change from scary to romantic. long way, I know.
Love..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well I read all the 3 chapters in one go right now ..

Its very interesting,

Wonderful

and Unique..

Loved it .

Asad and his Ego..

Zoya and her Jackie chan stunts...

Continue soon...

And pm me for the next update ..

Thanks for Scrap.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for Update.
It was very nice part.
Finally,Zoya said her name to Asad(KSG).
she agreed to sign on papers,it was interesting.
Please update next part soon,I am waiting here.
______________________
(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY)
PRIYAKABHI.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part dear
but if zoya will be his slave,then how will she pay back those 2 lakhs without doing a job
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sammy4u

nice part dear

but if zoya will be his slave,then how will she pay back those 2 lakhs without doing a job

thats his trick you will soon come to know 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good job dear
It was nice
Update soon
Pm me thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
please dont make asad a Casanova who makes women his slaves ..and tjen uses them...i know asad will eventually fall in love with zoya with this sends a bad message that you can humiliate girls and tjen you fall in love with one of your slave and she too cant resist you and then the monster becomes good person please ot detrogratery for a women pls pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor zoya... teach him a lesson for his big ego...

he is so mean...

errr...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ican

please dont make asad a Casanova who makes women his slaves ..and tjen uses them...i know asad will eventually fall in love with zoya with this sends a bad message that you can humiliate girls and tjen you fall in love with one of your slave and she too cant resist you and then the monster becomes good person please ot detrogratery for a women pls pls

ican its nice to know your pov here. But dear thats not what my story is about. I am too socially responsible person. I would really like if you could just wait a little and see the story getting unfold.

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