#2 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 5-9 ! LINK NEW THREAD ! - Page 100

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: imcooldude

I also agree with Jas91 So Bano give a thought about miscarriage or abortion.

but looking at Zoya's mental condition abortion isn't good option.

So what about miscarriage


if anyone agree with me , plz hit like on this post


I understand ur POV yaar but even thinking about it, i cant think about abortion, myself being a woman cant accept that, but yes dont wirry Zoya wont give birth to that child
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Very well written part Banoji 👏

I loved the bonding between Dilshaad and Zoya. The way Asad looked after her during her asthma attack was do lovely.

The convo between Asad and Zoya in her room was beautifully penned. Love the concern asad shows for her.

Brilliant update dear. Loved it.


Thank you so much ChocoBerry ji !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it ! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Arey waah sis! 🤗

What a fantastic update it was!! ⭐️

"Mogambo sirf khush nahi, bohot khush hua!" 😆😃

Superb update!❤️

The way both Dilshaad and Zoya bonded! 👍🏼

Beautiful!

And zoya being upset with Asad for not informing about him going out! 😆

Typical wifey behaviour! But yet so cute! 🤣☺️

loved it!


Thanks meri 'kuch-mahinon-ki-choti' sis ! 🤗 😆
Ab wife hai toh wife ki tarah behave karegi na 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mona12345


Bano,

Sweet chapter.

Loved Dilsad - Zoya bonding. Zoya indeed did cast her warm love spell on Dilshad too.😃

Hope Asad's instinct is correct and Zoya gets well soon.😃

Also, I liked how he explained Zoya about te baby. It was cute.😳

Chandni❤️


Thanks Chandni ! ❤️
I really enjoyed writing the last scene with the baby 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

This was fabulous.
Asad had a embrassing moment🤣 saviour batao na🤣 🤣
U r having great sense of humour dear.
Loved whole dol/asad scene
Also dil/zoya ammi - beti bonding scene.
Cute fall on the bed scene .
Yup finally he anwered in a cute way.
He never failed to impress me❤️
Beautifully written


Bechara Asad 😕 😆
Awww Thank you Anitha !! ❤️
I'm glad you liked it !! 😳
I know ! Sometimes even i get in awe by his character 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Beautiful update...and a very long one😳...loved how Dilshad and Zoya bonded🤗...Zoya is so innocent and cute😳...Asad is a sweetheart as always🤗...loved the way he explained about the baby to Zoya😊...this story reminds me of a novel I've read recently and loved totally🤗...waiting for more😳...update soon😃


Thank you so much yaar ! I'm glad u r liking it !! 🤗 ❤️
Which novel ? I would be thrilled to read such a novel !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie


<font size="3" color="#0066cc">Chapter 7...</font>

<font size="3" color="#0066cc">Love the way asad care for zoya... its deep..</font>

<font size="3" color="#0066cc">so from Badi b... he learns the truth</font>

<font size="3" color="#0066cc">what happen to zoya ... very sad and disgusted with akram ...</font>

<font size="3" color="#0066cc">awesome👏👏</font>

<font size="3" color="#0066cc">when asad stand up for zoya... and asad is taking her</font>
<font size="3" color="#0066cc">home...to keep her save</font>


<font size="3" color="#003300">P.S I DO LIKE YOUR SENSE OF WRITING ...👏👏👏</font>
<font size="3" color="#003300">I WAS JUST GUESSING...😳😳😳</font>
<font size="3" color="#003300">MAYBE SHE IS RUNNING AWAY FROM HIPPO</font>
<font size="3" color="#003300">SO ACTING ...</font>
<font size="3" color="#003300">I REMEMBER A TAMIL MOVIE WATCHING SOMETHING</font>
<font size="3" color="#003300">SIMILAR .. SO GUESS ...IT🤣</font>
<font size="3" color="#003300">ERRR OKAY😉</font>
<font size="3"><font color="#003300">SILLY ME🤪</font></font>





Thank you so much Linsie !! 🤗 i'm glad u r liking it ! ❤️
Haha ok, no worries thanks 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

accha I need to unres thi bhi hai naa? :O


I'm waiting for that ! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Wow what an update. So cute.At first zoya is scared but then she feels relax and comfortable with dilshad's motherly touch. Love the dilshad zoya scene on next day. This is touched my heart. So beautiful, so pure, so cute and so emotional. The way zoya told dilshad ammi was so beautiful. Her longing for her mother finaly fulfill. Love the way dilshad feeding her and teaching cooking was so sweet beautiful. I re read dilshad zoya scene atleast 5 times till now.Also loved the way asad explained zoya that how the baby came inside her belly was very beautiful.But i still want zoya not give birth the child.Now waiting to more cute mother daughter and zoya najma bonding and also waiting for zoya's full recovery.Update next part ASAP.Thanks for pm. ❤️ Raj


I forgot to mention it but this part was dedicated tp u who wanted such bond between Zoya - Dilshad 😳 i'm glad that i could live up to ur expectations 😃 and the fact that u read it 5 times touched my heart deeply 😳
Dont worry Zoya won't give birth to the baby 😊
U'll get cute scenes, but about the recovery it wont be so soon 😕 actually that was the convept of this FF, i wanted to write how a psychiatrist falls for his beautiful but MENTAL patient and how his LOVE makes her recover 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So zoya wants to know how the baby is inside her
Asad ur a doctor u can't answer😆He only blushes
Zoya relaxes at dilshad touch
Asad and his ammi convo nice he don't think zoya is an 8 yr old she
So he leaves dilshad to work her magic on zoya
They bond we'll they cook together and the form a new relation
Mother-daughter😊
Asad in a trance seeing the women of his home enjoy
Love the answer he give zoya for the baby
It is a gift from god and him seeing her sad and attached the baby to her so she will be happy
Continue soon


Shame on u Asad, u cant answer to her simple question 😆 haha finally Asad gave her her answer that too, beautifuly
Thanks Anopama !! 😳

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