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Posted: 11 years ago
hi swapno di😃
so sorry i was busy with studies and was unable to follow with story properly
now i caught up with prologue and 4 chapter,,wow amazing
u had done a superb work so far👏
their marriage,misunderstandings,accident,memory loss,new life,meeting...everything was perfect
asad acted as totally jerk after marriage...but poor zoya now lost her memory and also her only relations appi and jiju😭
now there is no one from her memory who know about her marriage
asad..how this guy gonna have tough phase
even zoya😭
update soon di
thanks for pms
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Posted: 11 years ago

This chapter is dedicated to ar-only-ar (Ani) for the best comment I have ever read for my story Ani you will cry after reading this chapter too I know that. Keep crying but don't leave reading. I just love you all. Bas! and Ms. Malik (SBanoMalik), who literally made me mad for this update.


Chapter 5


Saanson ne kahaan rukh mod liya
Koi raah nazar mein naa aaye
Dhadkan ne kahaan dil chhod diya
Kahaan chhode in jismon ne saaye
Yehi baar baar sochta hoon tanha main yahaan
Mere saath-saath chal raha hai yaadon ka dhuaan
Jo bheji thi duaa
Woh jaake aasmaan se yun takra gayi
Ki aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa


Zoya woke up late that morning. She looked around her room sleepily and then all that happened last night rushed back to her. She looked at the door, horrified. She only remembered that he was saying something very angrily but she did not hear it as she felt the darkness engulfed her. She jolted up to sitting position on her bed and scanned the room. No one was there, she sighed in relief, so he went from her door knowing she was not interested in him. Then she thought about Mark, thinking about him, she called Zerin but she did not pick up her call. Maybe she is busy with Mark. Zoya narrowed her eyes remembering something; she was near her hand bag and taking out the medicines when he was banging her door. Then how come she was in the bed, she looked here and there, her all things were placed orderly. She did not do it; she was clearly the messy person. Then who did it. She shrugged and went for shower.

Under shower she stood helplessly, tears made their way as she remembered she was all alone in a strange country. After her accident when she was back from her coma she was alone for two days after that never. Zerin or Mark was always there for her. When she was back from coma she first called her Aapi and Jeeju in US but no one picked up that call. Then she called their neighbor in New York and what her neighbor said took her world away from her. They said Anwar and Zeenat passed away about six months ago and their house was also sold. She did not have any place to go. Then she remembered Zerin, her best buddy in the University. Fortunately Zerin took the call and was here with Mark within two days. She lived in Los Angeles and was shifting to Australia with Mark as they were starting their farm together there. From hospital they took her to the Los Angeles, Zerin's place within 15 days, all Zoya's paper was lost and they had to contact to the embassy and they made the new papers as Zoya was a special case. Mark used some power there and they made Zoya's new passport and important papers again.


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After shower she stepped into her room. She wiped her tears as she was doing this for Mark. Who literally gave her the new name and made famous in this world. He and Zerin made her comfortable and now they are like family. She dried her hair and was ready for her day. She would start the work and complete it as soon as possible. She was taking her dress out from her suitcase when something fell from it. She took it and observed it; it was the journal which Zerin has bought that evening in Mumbai. When they were packing Zerin placed it to Zoya's suitcase as her suitcase was full. She smiled looking at it. Somewhere the journal made her calm inside. Zerin was not here but something that belongs to her with Zoya and this mere thing gave her strength. She again tried to call Zerin and then the note came within her sight.


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From Zoya's hotel Asad directly came here, the place where he felt loved, he felt peace. The place where they confessed unknowingly to each other! He looked around feeling the loud laugh they shared that night. He wanted to embrace her, to hold her but where were she. She was nowhere now correction she was everywhere but he was no longer anywhere in her life.

My dimples can kill anyone Mr. Khan...I like you Mr. Khan! Aap ke dil mein seena nehi patthar hain.

You are a mismatch for me Ms. Farooqui

His drowsy voice echoed in his ear and he whimpered loudly.

"I wanted to take back all this that night Zoya, I wanted to tell you that I was in love you only, I trust you, I...I wanted to make you mine again then why you left me? Did not I get my punishment enough? Then why do not you remember me, our love Zoya, why I just can't let you still, knowing that you do not love me anymore. Why Zoya why? Why can't I have a happy life with you? Who will give me the answer?"

Open up Asad, share your feelings, and tell us what is bothering you, if you don't tell anyone what you feel then one day you will be all alone Asad.

When you don't have any answer then ask Allah! He will surely show you the way.

He remembered Dilshad's advice as she gave him each time he broke down. He pulled out his cell phone and called to the airport. He had to clear his head first!


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Few hours later

He came to Ajmeer Sharif to get his answer, to get an answer. Asad prayed "I do not know what love is, but know the difference between life and death, I may be breathing but not living. I have come to take my life back, and get my Zoya back, even though I do not know if she's in my destiny. But I want you to write her name along with my destiny. Four years a long time now I can't live without her even for a second. But I have faith in you, what you will show me I will follow that."

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The morning after nikaah


Asad was the first one as usual who woke up first and was prized with the best gift. Zoya clung to him as if she would lose if she did not hold him. He caressed her bare back sensually only to watch her frowning. He buried his face into her hair pulling her closer although it was not possible. She was already entangled with him. Zoya sighed in her sleep. At that time realization dawned upon him, she was in his arm and he did not tell her anything he knew about Tanveer, he did wrong to her and he did not rectify his wrong move and what he did to her. He just blamed him as he carried away with his desire. What if Zoya felt cheated after this action? His hold tightened unknowingly but the cell phone beeped. He took the call. It was from a privet no. He decided to cut the call but took it at last.

"Zoya's father is alive! He is none other than Gaffur Ahmed Siddique" the only line transferred through the call and it was cut. His eyes bulged with fury. He got up hastily and showered. Without informing anyone he just left for office.

He called the investigator to inform about this call. He was tensed. He did not believe what that mystery caller had said to him but he dreaded if it was truth then what would he do? The man, who destroyed his family, took his father away from them and made their life miserable. Could he forget it easily and give him and Zoya a chance to live their life ahead. Could he accept it so quickly? What would his ammi feel about this? Zoya how would he tell her now about it? What if she left him for her abbu? After all she was here only for her abbu. All these made him frustrated and his anger on him was increased with every second. But when last night incident coming through his mind and it made him enraged on Zoya too. She was the one who initiated that. He was going to clear everything and what she did? She kissed him and made him derailed. When he saw there in his office he just took out his frustration. That's it. His behavior only misunderstood by Zoya. She was so happy that day thinking that Asad had accepted her wholeheartedly but Asad's behavior confused her. The last straw was when she saw Tanu and Asad smiling together. Then she thought Asad regretted that he married to her. She took an instant decision and left the Khan Villa. Meanwhile Asad was clear from this inside war. He decided no matter what he could not leave his Zoya. It did not matter to him that she was Gaffur's daughter. She was his wife and she was his by then.


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Next morning after Waleema


Nazma, Dilshad, Zeenat sat on the couches of the living room. All could not sleep that night. The TV was on in low volume. They were not watching it just let it on for passing the wary time. A big accident was on the highway of Delhi and this news was showing as breaking news but no one paid attention to it. A dejected Asad entered the Khan Villa. He searched her everywhere but she just vanished in the air. Zeenat ran to him she was almost half frantic by that time. "Zoya" She asked to him. He nodded his head in negative, defeated. Zeenat was hysteric by that answer and slapped him hard. Asad hung his head low, second slap he got, but that pain was nothing what was in his mind. Zeenat left the house within half an hour with anguish and cursing herself to have faith on Asad. She cursed Asad for ruining her bachchi's life. She said that if Zoya did not love him like crazy then she would sue him for making her bachchi's life miserable.

Dilshad was furious and asked why he was acting like a jerk on his waleema. She just told him that he was exactly like his father. He did not care about others feeling, he only meant business. He was the blood owner of "Rashid Ahmed Khan."

Tanveer came down after her long sleep, and when she heard that Zoya left the house she faked tears. Thinking it as her game she went near Asad, placed her hand over his shoulder and said

"How can she do that? She actually does not value the bond of nikaah. How can she do that to you Jammy?"

Asad jerked his shoulder this time. He was no longer in the devastated posture now. His eyes spitted fire to her. Tanveer did not realize why Asad was behaving like this. She tried to plaster a worried face over her but got the shock of her life. Asad had slapped her with all his might, so hard that she almost tripped. "Jam.." She said placing her hand over her right cheek but before she could continue he roared. "Don't you dare to say anything about My Zoya with your filthy mouth, what you did to me I know everything." Tanveer was astounded; her eyes went wide with horror whereas Dilshad and Nazma remained silent.

"Asad?" Dilshad tried to intervene.

"No Ammi! You know nothing about her. She wanted to kill my Zoya that night of our Sangeet. She is the one who is trying to come between us." Asad said in one go.

Dilshad was shocked to hear that "what you are saying Asad? Are you out of your mind? She is your best friend, why would she do that?"

"Khala, Jammy is mad now. He cannot think straight. You believe me na I could not stoop so low khala" She cried bitterly. Another sound echoed in the living room of Khan Villa. Nazma and Dilshad stood there, shocked.

"Now also say that you are not carrying a child in your womb without marrying someone" Asad said dangerously low tone.

"But she is married" Nazma blurted. Tanveer was so shocked that could not think anything what to say.

"No! She is not married. She is carrying a child whose father is a certain Imraan and she used my name as the father of her child." Asad roared again.

Dilshad sat on the couch with a thud. Tanveer again tried to convince Dilshad. Just that time the investigator entered into the living room with police.

"Police?" Nazma gasped. Tanveer whipped her head towards them. She was horrified to the core. "I did nothing, I swear" She said loudly. But the investigator put the proof infront of everyone one by one.

Police dragged her to the van but Tanveer protested every time. When she saw no way to escape, she blurted everything what she did in this house to send Zoya away from him, from this house. At last she dropped the bomb saying that Zoya was the daughter of none other than Gaffur Ahmed Siddique. Police took her from here. Dilshad and Nazma held onto each other trying to absorb the new information what Tanveer had said. But Asad stood there without any emotion playing on his face.

"Asad what she said, Asad! Asad!!" Dilshad and rushed to him as Asad's feet gave away and he broke down. All the truth hurt him so badly beyond repaired.

Their life turned upside down from this one incident.


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Zoya took the note and opened it but that time Zerin picked up the call and she could not read it. She placed it again on the table. Zerin informed about Mark in a hurry as doctors were taking him for last checkup. After finishing the call she went out for her work. Asad Ahmed Khan did not stir her much as she thought he was away from her path as she had said to him that she was not interested in him. She went to the office and started her work did not thinking too much about the incident.


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So that's for today! Make any sense? Well I don't know what I wrote. This chapter was not in my plan but it came in this way! Hope you all like it. This story is going to have mostly flashbacks. Flashback will come necessarily with the flow of the story, mostly reminisced by Asad. One more thing you will feel bored sometimes as I will take help from the real story from the show.

Now tell me how you all find it? Share your views with me also. Please do like and comment.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sadia 🤗

sorry dear busy with weekend
so tanveer deserved for her work ..why zoya even not told her to aapi ,, maybe she dont want
to hurt them😕
zoya was not read that note...oh my asad i cant see him like this 😭
you said she does not gain her memory so waiting for new love to blossom...😳
waiting for next update...

Edited by aniha20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
happy story bana tu isskoo!!! I am done with feeling sad and bad!! >:(

^ yea raha apka comment! >:(
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Posted: 11 years ago

I WAS STUDYING SO HARD, SO HARD TO THE FREAKING CORE, I HAD MY BINDER OPEN MY NOTEBOOKS WERE OPEN MY MUSIC BLARING THROUGH THE SPEAKERS I WAS SO INTO IT,

But then I decided to take a 5 minute break and come online to see this, really???? I swear this story will be the reason why I failed math, I'm not even kidding
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Posted: 11 years ago
abey mereko delete karne ka socha bhi na tune 😡, toh i will come in your dreams and and and will cry 😆
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Edited by KaBhilove07 - 11 years ago
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The loot ressy messy 😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
di i m sorry for not catching it.. Bt tomorow ill unress all. I eagerly waited for ur work
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Very beautiful update dear!! 😊
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