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I 'll confess actually. .am keeping a tab on this thread just in case u update between my breaks LoL
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Confess something*


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Badi baji, when will u update ? I hope not too late !



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Hello All,

Here's Chapter 17 for my story. Thank you all for liking what I write. Hope you like this part too. I have raised everyones hopes way too high and I hope I fare well here.


Juliet this ones for you and you know why 😉 Happy Reading.

Chapter 17

Asad opened his eyes with a splitting headache and the first thought that had crossed his mind was of Zoya. He remembered how she was being dragged away from him, how he had felt helpless holding onto her with every bit of power in him and then collapsing in her arms. He could vaguely remember noises around and Zoya trying to wake him up, shouting his name. He had gained consciousness in the early hours of morning and after a quick checkup with the doctor he was given thumbs up for his recovery. The doctor prescribed a few pain killers for his head ache and told the nurse to change the dressing on his head regularly.

With the first rays of the sun Zoya was up and ready to leave for the hospital. As she came down the stairs she saw Zeenat and Najma setting the breakfast table. She joined them and after a quick breakfast the three ladies left for the hospital. As soon as they entered Asad's room, Najma ran to his side and holding his hand cried out of happiness on seeing her Bhaijaan out of danger. Asad spent a good part of the next half hour trying to lighten Najma's mood. All this while he kept stealing glances of the one person that meant so much to him now.

Even though the previous evening he had collapsed in her arms Asad could remember Zoya at his side all throughout. He could remember her screaming and had a fair idea of what she had said. He could makeout from her voice how panicked she was and she had been repeating a few words over and over to him. It was strange but he could still feel the warmth of her hands holding tightly onto his as if, if she let go she would never be able to hold him again.

Seeing Asad awake and alright made her want to run to him, hold him in her arms and confess her feelings openly. She so desperately wanted to talk to him and ask him if he was alright but knew that Najma was more important. Being his younger sister she had a right to be with him first. Zoya sat on one of the couches and looked at the brother sister interact. She could see Asad look in her direction every once in a while and her cheeks would burn with the intensity in his eyes. After spending some more time with him, Najma left for her college. Asad asked his Ammi and Anwar also to return home to take rest and come back in the evening. After a quick Salaam and asking about his health Zeenat left with Anwar. Since Dilshaad would be busy with Asad it was now Zeenat who was looking after cooking for the all of them.

As soon as they all left and the door to his room shut Asad looked at Zoya. She was sitting with her eyes glued to the floor and playing with her fingers. Asad kept his eyes on her for the next few minutes looking at her intently, both sitting in the silence. The memories of what they had gone through made him want to hold her in his arms and never let go. After a few minutes he decided to break the silence between them.

"Are you alright?" Zoya looked at him and nodded her head "And you?" he shook his head in denial. Zoya looked confused and he understood she wanted to know what he meant.

"I was scared... Still am... What if something had happened? What if I had lost consciousness before the police arrived? What if I had lost you?" he finished in a whisper looked at her for answers. Zoya walked upto his bed and held his hand between hers in a firm grip. "I am fine Asad. You didn't let anything happen to me and I am sure you would have held on to me until you were sure I was out of danger." She smiled at him which he reciprocated and held onto her hand firmly. They sat around chatting about nothing in particular when they heard a knock at the door and the nurse came in to change his bandaging and administer his medicines. She removed the heavy bandage and Zoya moved around his bed to get a better look at his wound and Asad heard her hiss, as if she was in pain. Just the sight of his wound made her realize how much she loved him. It hurt her to see him in pain like this.

"Mrs. Khan you don't need to worry. It's not as bad as it looks." The nurse said while finishing the bandaging.

Zoya's eyes widened as she realized what the nurse had said and looked at Asad who was smiling from ear to ear. He bit his lip to stop himself from laughing out loud at the expression on Zoya's face. As soon as the nurse left Asad looked at Zoya with a wide smile on his face and an expression that clearly told her he was enjoying himself.

"I... I went to the office... to get this misunderstanding cleared but... But something happened and I couldn't get my name changed... will get it done now." She was just about to open the door when she heard him "Do you not want that too?" Zoya turned around and saw his expression had changed completely, instead of the goofy smile he now looked absolutely serious. Zoya looked at him for a long time and without saying anything walked back to the couch and sat down. They sat in silence again, just looking at each other every now and then. Soon Asad found himself dozing off to sleep. When she was sure that Asad was in deep sleep Zoya went about clearing the room and kept all his medicines in place. She knew how his OCD would be clawing at him to see so much mess around him.

After arranging his room and sitting there just looking at him sleep so peacefully for the last hour or so Zoya got up and walked to the window. She had been leaning against it for quite some while when she felt his presence right behind her. She felt her heartbeat accelerate because of his closeness. Without turning around she spoke to him "You should stay in bed Asad, the doctor has advised that you take complete rest for the next couple of days."

She felt him take a step closer to her until she could feel his chest almost touching her back. "I am where I should be...close to you he whispered." In a split second Zoya turned around and wrapped her arms around him in a tight embrace burying her face in his chest and taking deep breaths to inhale as much of his sent as she could. Asad reciprocated and held her close to himself.

Their bodies flush against each other both could hear the room fill with the sounds of their ragged breathing. Asad buried his face in her hair and felt relief wash over him as he took in the familiar fruity smell of her shampoo. He ran his hand through her hair surprised at how soft they were.

Zoya looked up in his eyes and could see unadulterated passion in them. She lift her hands and caressed his cheeks and saw him closing his eyes and lean in to her touch.

She called his name softly and as soon as he opened his eyes Zoya held his face firmly between her hands and pulled him closer. Asad could see her eyes fill with desire and let her lead the way. Soon he could feel her breath on his lips and it took every bit of self control in him not to kiss her. She looked in his eyes and as softly as she had called his name she said what he wanted to hear. Very softly she whispered "I Love You Asad." And then she sealed his lips with hers.

Asad sighed against her lips in contentment at hearing her confession. Zoya felt his hold tighten around her waist and then felt him respond to her kiss. His lips came firm against hers, demanding and encouraging all at the same time. A kiss that had started as her confession was now a symbol of their passion. Asad caressed her lips with his tongue and she felt a shiver run down her spine. She opened up to him and as soon as he entered her they both felt bolts of electricity shake their bodies from within. With raw need Asad tasted every corner of her mouth caressing her tongue with his encouraging it to indulge in and fulfill with him the most primitive of desires. Zoya soon responded with equal passion showing him what he meant to her. She ran her hands all over his back pulling him closer and encouraging him further.

Asad removed his lips from hers and continued kissing her all over her face slowly moving towards her jaw and after placing feather light kisses all along her jaw line he dipped his head further settling his lips on the column of her neck. He showered her neck with open mouthed kisses. Zoya's eyes rolled back and she moaned his name and moved her head to the other side giving him more access. Zoya felt her stomach summersault due to the sensations that his lips left on her skin. She tried pulling him even closer and then she felt herself being lifted in the air. She immediately wrapped her legs around his waist and wasn't surprised to feel his arousal against her. Where Zoya moaned his name with need because of their contact, Asad growled wanting to be closer to her.

She felt the cold wall hit her back and only then realized that he had pinned her against the wall. They looked deep into each others eyes with so much love that it was becoming unbearable for either to keep away. Asad claimed her lips again in a fierce kiss which they broke only when they realized they needed to breathe. Asad released his hold on her and let her settle her feet back on the floor. Resting their foreheads together both tried to calm their hearts. He looked into her eyes and in a soft whisper confessed his feelings again "I Love You Zoya." And as if she had been replying to this statement for a long time, she very softly replied with an "I Love You too."

They stood embracing each other for a long time relishing the feeling of truly being together. They broke their hug only when they heard a knock at the door. Asad went to sit on his bed and Zoya proceeded to open the door. A nurse came in with his lunch and afternoon medicines. Zoya arranged his meal and fed him while he rested his back against the headboard. As soon as he was done eating he told her to go and eat too. Zoya grabbed a quick sandwich and a bottle of juice for lunch and quickly went back to the room. She saw him sitting and reading the news paper. She snatched the paper out of his hands and ordered him to sleep which he was more than happy to follow. The pain killers were making him groggy again.

Zoya had just turned around wanting to go and sit on the couch when she felt herself being pulled with full force and she fell on his chest. Asad laughed heartily at her bewildered expression. Zoya smacked him on his arm and told him to let her go to which he shook his head "I like it like this." He whispered in her ear. She felt goose bumps all over her body. The intimacy that they were now sharing was creating chaos within her, where her heart wanted to just let go and live all these moments, relishing every second of their closeness, her mind held her back telling her it was not correct, there had to be a line drawn in their relationship. Zoya struggled to get out of his hold but Asad was not having any of it. After struggling for what felt like ages Zoya looked at him in the eyes and whispered "What do you want?" "A kiss" he whispered back and moved forward to claim her lips into a soft kiss.

As he let her go Zoya got up and ran her hands all over herself, first to set her hair right and then to smooth her dress out. Asad smiled looking at her fussing over herself. As she turned around she again felt a tug at her arm and she turned around faking anger "Now what?" she asked in a stern voice. Asad smiled wide at her reaction and pulling her closer to his bed he held her hand "When do we tell Ammi and Aapi about us?" Zoya smiled back at him and he could see her cheeks turning pink. "Phoophi already knows." She told him. Asad shot up in his bed and looked at her. Zoya could see how shocked he was and then went ahead to explain how she had gone to get her name changed when Dilshaad stopped her. She told him in detail her conversation with Dilshaad and how she had confessed her feelings.

"So, Phoophi is the first one who knew about my feelings for you. I confessed to her even before I did to you." Zoya smiled at him

Asad shook his head from side to side "No you confessed to me first." He looked at her expression change from happy to confused and her nose scrunch up in confusion. Asad chuckled at her expression and pulled at her nose and then laughed out loud when she smacked his hand away. He held her hands and shifted a little on the bed making place for her to sit next to him. As Zoya sat down he told her how he was able to hear faint sounds around him and on concentrating he could hear her confessing her love and holding his hand in a tight grip. "I remember almost every word you said..." He told her in a whisper. Zoya's eyes widened and she told him that they were on their way to the hospital at that time and that he had been unconscious for a long time. Asad looked in her eyes and placing a kiss on her forehead said "I will never be able to shut you out Zoya. No matter what, my sixth sense will always keep me connected to you. I love you so much." Saying that he pulled her closer, encircling his arms around her and very gently he held onto her. She smiled at his confession and wrapped her arms around him "I love you too." She whispered back.

P.S. Ab batao was this update worth the wait or not (grinning wide and my cheeks hurt now)




P.S.S. As a writer I expect all my readers to show some love, so please hit the like button and leave a comment behind as to what you think the chapter was like. Guys seriously it helps me in writing further and tells me the story is being liked. Please, I request all of you to hit the like button and leave a comment behind whether positive or negative. I would really like to know your thoughts.

Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago
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Mine
Yay...first spot but so late in feeding back...ooops 😳

Sorry ChocoBerry I fell asleep.

The chapter was amazing, I totally loved it

Awakening and stirring his primitive desires oh la la

Seriously this has to be one of the best make out sessions I have read

Their little moment after their great encounter was so cute.

Mwah

Love u Sis
Edited by Saima-Syed - 11 years ago
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Res 😃
Unres ! 😳

Arey badi baji, maak kardo na ! Late huyi kyon ki aaj classes thi 🤢 cant wait for the 6th (scholar year ends ! )
Abhi mere paas zyada time nahi hai toh main (bina bakwaas 👏 😆 ) kiye comment de hi deti hoon 😳
Lekin aisa kabhi ho sakta hai ke main bakwaas na karoon ? 😲 😆 dekha bina chahte hue hi bakWaas ho jaati hai ! 😆
Chalo bohot ho gaya, ab comment ! 🥳

Yes the update was worth the wAit ! ☺️
Awww cutie Najma worried for her Bhaijaan ! 😳 🤗
My Zoya toh she just wanted to rush in his zrms bur had to wait ! 😳 patience is a virtue ! 😉 😆
Just loved how much she's worried for him and how the nurse called her Mrs. Khan !
After ☺️ ... Finally they confessed ! ❤️
The thing i just loved was when Asad told her that he had heard each of her words when he was uncounscious ! 👏
Truly loved this update !! Thank you badi baji ! ❤️


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Mera comment meri bakwaas se kam hai ! 😭 😆
Acha ab main chalti hoon, sorry for late unres 😳
Edited by SBanoMalik - 11 years ago
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Tesss

PHEWWW.. me finally gets to COMMEeeNNTTT 😲 😆

Pehele moo meetha for the new thread 😳



back to the update ...

oww oww owww Asad is fine and AsYa cuddling :')

khushi ke asson thu thu thu :')

Felt Dilshad's behaviour uncalled for .. IMO
also felt a bit of awkward when Zoya was allowed to enter and see Asad at the last...

But but but Alls Well That Ends Well...

p.s. when are they getting married? 😆

cant wait to read more of romance Ha Ha!!!

👏

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mere taraf se pizza for u and all ur friends 😆
cause u dedicated chapter 15 to me 😲 😆 😆

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Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago
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Aww. I loved it a lot

It was awesome,

Cute,

Beautifully written,

Super Sweet,

Continue soon

Thanks for Pm..
Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago

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