AsYa FF ~ Zehnaseeb [Thread #1] - Page 65

Originally posted by: potternerd

Mrinalini I love you thanks for updating so fast 👏😊

Lovely update

Loved the cute convo😳

I loved how asad said...uh zoya kal bhi issi time call karoon to chalega...super cute 😳😃

Undoubtedly yours is the cutest fanfic in the forum at this time👏

It's a delightful read 😊

Keep going 👍🏼

Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA

excellent update soonish 😆

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

I love you too hun! ❤️ Anytime! 😳

i'm glad you loved the update! 😳 That's my favourite line too! 😉

THAT'S A HUGE COMPLIMENT DEAR! 😲 THANK YOU! 🤗

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Dear,

Pehle tou tell me are you alright? I mean you never give updates so fast, no that I'm complaining, I love to read them bus you rarely shower this sort f affection on us that's why I had to ask,😉.

Finally AsYa get to talk at least. I can see a very sweet & strong relationship building ahead between the two. I liked how they spoke about their likes but still dislikes are left lekin bechara how much could they talk in one go. So they get to see each other too. The pics were cool. Really loved them. Asad Miyah is jealous already? lol.

I love this Dilshad. Seriously she's too cute. I know is ki or Zoa ki khoob jamne wali hai. Both are adorable & will beat the crap oujt of Asad together.

Sooo... ab ap hum per dobara meherbani kab karien gi of updating.

Love lots..

Originally posted by: teju_KaBhi

commenting after 3 chap *nervous laugh*
the pace with which the story is going is just perfect.
oh i so loved the eagerness of dilshad to know about what anwar said, what zoya replied, why asad is so late :D
well this happens in real life too.
this two are so cute.
finally talked and finally saw each others pics also.
cont soon
loving this story and u more. 😳

Originally posted by: aicha99

Wow.. 3 updates in 4 days, it's a treat... & the convo was so sweet..

Loved it!

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187

Awesome Update..

Loved it..

AsYa phone conversation was Cute..

Continue soon..

Thnx for PM..

-Mariam-

Originally posted by: p_s05

""Kyun?", pouted Dilshad."

""Fine! As you like it!", replied Dilshad shrugging her shoulders."

And she is deliriously cute too. 😎

The 1st conversation: Realistic

Shy to initiate a conversation yet wanting to acquaint themselves further. 😳 Look forward to many more! 😉

"He quickly went to his Whatsapp and went to his contact list and clicked on Zoya's profile picture and smiled and blushed."

Whatsapp profile photos! ☺️ Glad you aren't technologically challenged Mr. Khan 😉 The pictures were cute! 😳

"She kept her phone aside and switched off her night lamp and snuggled into her cozy blanket and drifted off to sleep."

Originally posted by: jas91

what u updated & i hve no clue😲

why don't u PM me😭

maine toh part 2 bhi nahi padha😲

Originally posted by: jas91

part 2

Rashid reached home & Dillu bombarded him wid qstns😆

Rashid ka phone Zoya ne uthaya😃

loved their convo & Dillu & Asad was listening😳

Zoya complained about Zeenat🤣 & Asad supported her👍🏼

Rashid gave him Zoya's number & he is smiling seeing that☺️

lovely updt M👏