AsYa FF - Across The Shadows - Chapter One To Three - Page 66

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

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CHAPPI 2

fab update bubble...👏

oh gal..m in love wid dis ff nw...😳

3 thngs tk my whole ATTENTION ..🤓

1. he ws in his home town..bt cnt go to his own house n meet his family..😲

2. he strtrd FALLING fr zoya.that he cudnt stopped himself to click her pics..😳

3. VICTIM or SURVIVOR🤔

it was Germany then he would have drove his own sports car and have reached home in five minutes

omg..m imagining KSG nw...driving a sports car.. 😳

Bubble plz i want u to show him driving a SPORTS CAR in the story.plzzz😛

mmm...as i said earlier...he ws in his HOME TOWN..he was in mumbai aftr 10 long years..n he DIDNT want to go home..kyu..bhy😲🤔


a girl sitting on the opposite side of a lake which made his world stop for a few seconds. It wasn't much of a water full of lake but a smaller one with greenery from all sides but what caught his eyes was the beautiful girl sitting beside it.

I imagined the whole scenery while reading it..n it was so beautiful..hy gal frm whr u gt the idea of CREATING tis scene...its simply beautiful n elegant..😳

"MashAllah !" He exclaimed while admiring her beauty and he was unable to blink his eyes just to make sure that the view won't lost from his eyes

kya baat hai..his frst wrds fr zoya were...DIES IST INTERSSANT...nw MASHALLAH...mmm..❤️☺️

She was dressed in a red strapless, silky gown which hardly covered her bosoms with her hair straightly falling on her shoulders and naked arms hugging her knees lightly. The only jewel she wore was a diamond ring in her middle finger.

she was looking damn BEAUTIFUL..undoubtedly...asad ka pagal hona jayaz hai..😳😉😆

he clicked PICS of her..hmm..☺️

zoya was unknown fr him..he cudnt saw her in TEARS..n tried to calm her down...❤️

he gv her the LESSON what he tk frm his own life...


I know its difficult but its on you if you want to live as a VICTIM or a SURVIVOR. You are still a victim if you are letting them destroy you. You cannot change that person or your past, you can only change yourself so try doing that.


damn...asad is a VICTIM...or sumthng like that...bcz he was telling thngs wat he learnt frm his own life...😲🤔

WHAT THE f**k😲


hu RUINED zoya life..y she alwys thnk negative...😒

he wanted to FOLLOW that beautiful gal..bt ye unki tameez tehzeeb ki limit se bhar hai...😆


VISHAL tk him to zoya's success party..😉.

asad found her so DIFFERENT frm lst nite..😳

thy both were dumbstruck bcz of obvious reasons ...n atlst knw their NAMES nw...😃

dis gal hvng MASK on her face of happiness...she is all alone deep inside her heart...

loads of questions are in my mind...🤔


m gtng desperate to knw their DARK PART of their life...which is ruining their present..compelled thm to stay alone ...evn aftr being so successful...in their respective careers..

update soon bubble...

LIEBE DICH..mwah😳

Shreya😉

p.s. i want 18+ stuff in dis ff nw...


Really ?? r u seriously loving it because I am not sure about it anymore 🥱
haha I never said that he is in his hometown 😉😆
he will deffo drive sports car but not now in later chapter maybe !
Aww Thanks Shreya 😳
I am honored that you liked it !!
I will try my best to come up to ur expectations ,,
and u will get all ur answers sooon 😆
Will deffo try updating soon 😳
haaaww now I am damn sure that u have gone mad 😲😆

LoL liibe dich ouch ❤️😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: snehasya

The season for falling in love has begin asad with his own past leaving away from family and zoya is running away from past I hope they find peace in each other

Sports car ahaaan I love this speedy asad thanks for pm
I am already dreaming and drooling over sexy asad ahemad khan in spots car update soon


Thanks Sneha 😊
I am honored that you liked it !!
they will find peace in each other only ❤️
he will drive sports car also in later updates ,,
Will deffo try updating soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks 😊
I am honored that you liked it !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mooumi

Awesome update dear...really lvd it thoroughly... Continue soon


Thanks 😊
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Will deffo try updating soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

Awesome update
Loved it Thanks for the pm


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Loved it and the new name

So asad the workaholic
So they met before the party nice
And he was mesmerized by her he have never seen a woman look so beautiful especially in red
He admire her curves he strapless gown😉
He gives her some amazing advice
So when once before did he had this similar feelings he got after meeting her
Oh he wants to know her name don't worry will find it out soon
So he don't want to go to the party
Vishal drags him to meet zoya his new item
Asad and zoya both shocked to see the stranger from the nite before
On hearing his name she know him his name speak for himself
So wonder what his next question will be
Continue


Thanks 😊
I am honored that you liked it !!
well he had these feelings once before but when that u will get to know later 😆
his next question won't be that much special ,,
Will deffo try updating soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Fanatastic update Bubble darling

I love it

Their first encounter was mind blowing👏👏👏

You wrote the full view very very detailed

Anjaane mein Asad ne Zoya ki madad ki😃

Asad is flattered cause of the beauty in front of him😳

And he took her pics too😳

Zoya too open up to him unknowingly😛

And when they met at the party haye Allah marjaava😳

Pls update soon darling

Thanks for pm


Thanks 😊
I am honored that you liked it !!
really ?? yeah I tried to make it different ,,
Will deffo try updating soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for Update.

I am sorry for lately commenting you due to my Internet have some problem.
It was very Interesting part and Asad(KSG) drives his sport car.
He was impressed by Zoya on one sight,Zoya'sbehaviour was very different.
Asad(KSG) was very nice character.The conversation of ASYA(KABHI) was very nice.
Please update next part soon,I am waiting here.
______________________
(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY)
PRIYAKABHI.


Thanks 😊
I am honored that you liked it !!
its ok I understand internet issues ,,
Will deffo try updating soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82

what is zoya past... i.e hurting her so much...

loved the meet...

asad is already bitten by zoya...

what is vishal- zoya equation...here...

waiting to know more..

awesome update


Thanks Kalyani 😊
I am honored that you liked it !!
you will get a glimpse of her past in next update ,,
they are just friends from Zoya's side !
Will deffo try updating soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

Great start of the ff dear...

Loved both the parts ...


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