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Pori

@Pori

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

woo

amazing story!!!

sad ending but i liked it

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

loved the story...but i hate sad ending...

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

A great Os. Very emotional and well written. All love stories need not necessarily have happy e ndings. But in a way it is a happy ending as it is an end to Zoya's miserable married life. But I felt sorry for Haya. LOved the way you narrated the story and the ending.

Edited by jayasree.rao - 11 years ago

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

hey

nice story, plz continue it and complete it with happy ending

And U write really well😛

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: cale
hey
nice story, plz continue it and complete it with happy ending
And U write really well😛

It was am Os😊

she can't convert into happy story

I asked already😆 but thanx 4 ur comnt😃

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Nayab (Naha)

@janaa_way

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ammusjyoti
loved the story...but i hate sad ending...

Thank you dear

I know but some stories are meant to be that way only

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Nayab (Naha)

@janaa_way

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao
A great Os. Very emotional and well written. All love stories need not necessarily have happy e ndings. But in a way it is a happy ending as it is an end to Zoya's miserable married life. But I felt sorry for Haya. LOved the way you narrated the story and the ending.

Thank you so much jayasree

I like the way you tried to understand story, I can see you went into it and didn't read it just for the sake of reading!😊

And about Haya and other untouched topics... I have left it on readers and have given them the liberty to take things in their own way...