P.S. I LOVE YOU : ASYA OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello people! As I have already said, i'll be updating my ffs after 28th, but since I was getting bored, I wrote this One shot. Let me warn you before hand, its my first attempt at OS. Its a romantic cute little fiction on how asad says I love you to zoya. I hope you'll like it. And if you do, Bhagwaan ke lie, press like and leave your views. 😡 😡







It was almost 6 months of their marriage and asad being himself, had not said I LOVE YOU to zoya. Poor girl had tried all the nuskhas, but this pea headed, extremely sexy specimen was too rigid. Not that she didn't know it already, but come on, who doesn't want to hear the magical words from that one person who means world to you. The eye locks were at its peak and even the stupidest of man could tell the depth of their love. Don't misinterpret here, its just the words that were missing and not sex. Asad was hell of a man! But alas! Words were never a part of his dictionary. Zoya sometimes wondered if he carried a blank dictionary! Their life after marriage was changed. Phuppi was now ammi and zoya was zoya babhi. But two things remained same.. Zoya's love for pizza and asad's emotional defect.! Yes, you heard it right, DEFECT it was! Zoya had given up any hopes on him now. It wasn't a challenge, it was a BIRTH defect, That she had to live with. Don't take her wrong, she loved him and had accepted him with all his flaws, but she wanted him to word his feelings. With whom will he share if not zoya. She was his wife.

One more thing that would cause your eyeballs to jump out of your sockets is, asad started having Pizzas. Not as frequent as his wife, but he did have his share once in a week. That was a piece of success for zoya. And she was regaining her hopes and thought may be asad would get over his DEFECT as well.

Meetings were held and a final conclusion was made, thanks to tamatar. It was time to make mr. possessive ahmed khan , jealous. Jealousy was certainly man's biggest enemy! Oh god, why didn't she get this idea! And hey, where did najma get this idea from? She needed answers!

Anyways, a plan was made and it was time to execute. It was zoya's birthday and asad had taken her out for the dinner.

"hotel Royal blue"

He said to chauffer. He was dressed to kill. A black tuxedo was enhancing his looks to an extent that could cause an extinction of female species. And zoya was no behind. Her Persian blue gown did magic to her looks. Don't faint, Asad was changing, at a centipede spped though.!! Genes and gowns were allowed as long as he was with her. He looked at his wife, who resembled angels from heaven. His angel.

The eye lock. The world famous eye look.

Zoya peered deep inside his eyes. They held so much love, so much affection, that made her heart warm. Come on asad, just say it once. Just once'

"You look gorgeous." He whispered.

"Thanks." She blushed. Even after being married for 6 months, his words would make her RBCs rush.

"As much as I love your blush zoya, I really don't get why you still blush! I have seen you in and out of dresses! Haven't I?"

Asad smirked his sexy devilish smirk. And curse you RBC's

"Shut up!"

...

"this place is beautiful asad! Thanks!" Zoya looked around in awe. This seven star hotel in Bhopal was one of the best hotels in the country, And asad Ahmed Khan wanted nothing less than BEST for his wife.

"Lets go."

Smiling and entangling their hands, they took their seats. The Aura of the hotel was breathtaking. There was light music, balloons and..well.. Couples dancing.


The waiter, who apparently was a girl came to take their order. Her smile was widespread. As if, someone had stretched her lips and cursed them that they can never be normal again. And, zoya DID NOT like it. The only drawback of having a handsome husband. Get that smile off your face bitch!' Who the hell keeps girl waiters!' And asad's over friendly conversation was not helping either. What's the need of smiling in saying just three words- thin crust pizza, one drink and chicken salad'

Focus zoya. Its asad we need to make jealous.. Not the other way around!'

And, her stars were bright today. She saw farhaan waving her from the fifth row. Farhaan was her best friend of 19 years..her partner in crime. And today, he was here, again. For mission ASAD'

...



Asad had told her about his plans of her birthday and she knew they were coming to Royal blue. The plan was formulated and scripted by farhaan and najma and tadda! It was time to say action! To make your confusion clear, zoya had introduced farhaan to najma and he always came to the khan mansion when asad was out.

...


"FARHAAAN!!!!!!"

She screamed at the top of her voice making few heads turn back! Zoya ran as fast as her legs permitted and even before asad could say anything, zoya was in farhaan's arms. Oops.
Asad's eyes narrowed as his mind tried to comprehend what happened. The anger rose to a new height when the man hugged her back. Tightly. What the f**k?

Asad got up to break all the bones of that man when he saw zoya and him, coming to him. Hand in hand and zoya looked happy. Huh

"Asad! Look, farhaaN!"

Though, asad hated it, his courtesy forced him to atleast shake hand

"Mr. khan! Nice to meet you. Have heard a lot about you." Farhaan said, as a matter of fact.! He had lately heard about this certain mr. khan a lot!

"Strange, I have not heard anything about you!" He eyed his wife Duh, asad didn't like him, he couldn't pretend!

" That hurts zoe! I thought u loved me! But."

"WHAT???" It was asad's turn to scream!

"As a friend mr. khan! We are best friends! And you, bunny, I did tell him about you, but you see, he has this short term memory loss. AND by the way, you didn't even wish me!" she grumped, crossing her hands around her chest.

"Aww. Baby, happy birthday sweet heart!"

To say asad was not liking it would surely be an understatement. He was hating it! This chimpanzee looking man, had the guts to call his zoya baby' Bloody monster!

"Mr. khan aapko pata hai, few years back, farhaaan proposed me! Agar india nahi ati, I would have said yes to him!"

She informed her already pissed off asad. Poor farhaan had to chew his lips to stop himself from laughing his head off, seeing asad chocking on his drink. Without waiting for his response, farhaan played the next step and asked zoya to dance with him. Asad for a moment did not react,Zoya's words had hurt him somewhere. Thinking zoya with other man, made him feel as if someone had sucked his life out of him. Was she not happy with him? Was he not worthy of being a husband? Damn, the night was taking a wrong direction. And to add to his wounds, farhaan asked if he was enjoying himself, and if zoya could dance with him. Solute to his audacity!

"Oh yes of course. Why not."

Asad gave him one of his fake smiles.
He was absolutely loving this night. His wife hugging and laughing with some other man, who apparently is her best friend, who is destroying his date on HIS wife's birthday, his wife tells him she would have married this douche bag, were one of his favorite scenes to witness. Only if he could Kill him.

...


Zoya and farhaan were having hard time controlling themselves. From the look of it, farhaan knew hewould be murdered if didn't stop anytime soon. The dance was after the cheeks kiss he was going to give zoya, but if he dared kissing her, asad would have surely buried him alive.

They went to the dancing area, and danced. Too close for asad's comfort level. He curled his upper lip to keep himself from screaming his head off. His mind whirling with thoughts that only made him assume the worst. The feeling of jealousy was slowly growing into his skin, filling his blood. Making his eyes go dark, and his mouth became a straight line.

Farhaan kept his hands on her waist, pulling her towards him. The song was not helping either, nazaro se nazare mili to' was one of his favourite songs. Damn the D.J . Zoya slowly moved in sync with farhaan and laughed when he said something.


"Is he looking at us" She asked him. He twirled her and brought her near him

"Honey, everyone is looking at us" He answered.

"And? How does he look?"

She really wanted to see his expression, wanted to know whether he felt jealous, just as she did when a few min. ago.

"Babe, if you dont stop, I'll be dead. And zoe, m still unmarried, have mercy!" zoya laughed again.

"Oh don't worry bunny, He wont kill you"

"It doesn't seem so! If eyes could kill, zoe m telling you, wait till he finds me alone..plus he has got this amazing 6 packs, I don't even have one!"

They kept whispering and asad kept scrambling the tissues. And then, was the disaster!

DHAAGE TOD LAAUN CHAANDANI SE NOOR KE

The D.J changed the song. There was no way in hell was he going to let ANYONE dance on this song with HIS zoya. It was THEIR SONG. Seeing farhaan bending down, he guessed the obvious and that was it. f**k courtesy.


He took quick and ferocious steps and pulled zoya towards him.

"Excuse us please"

He glared at farhaan, giving him enough hint that if he didn't back off now, he'll wee the worst of him and then his deadly glares turned to zoya


His mouth began to form the words his mind was screaming.

"So I see you are having fun without me,"

his voice was dark and the acid was practically dripping from the corners of his mouth.

"Yes asad, farhaan is too good! You.."

"I don't want to know how good he is. Zoya this was our night! You ruined it."

"I ruined it? Mr. khan He is my best friend, I was just having my time with him, I like him, Big deal?"

"Big deal? I hate seeing you with him, leave him, I hate seeing you with any other man but me! Is it that tough to get? Don't you know it already?" He was angry now.

"I don't Know Asad. You never told me. You never say anything."

"Zoya we are married, you are my wife"

"Marriage is not just MAKING LOVE ASAD. You never said about your feelings, you never said you loved me. Why " She said in an equally pissed tone.

Asad pulled her into a tight embrace and without wasting any second, dipped his head to reach her lips.

The hands of time stopped as their lips moved together as one. His lips were soft and urgent on her as he tried to express all that he felt for her. His mouth tasted so minty and zoya was elated. His lips smiled against hers, then he pulled away from the kiss. She gazed into his eyes that spoke volumes and it was then when she realized no one could ever love her more than him, and she didn't care anymore if he said it or not. Asad ever so lightly kissed her forehead and said I love you'.


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eshita
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres

wow that was so cute
lovely os
u knw i was just controlling myself , damn i laughed so much
it was so so so cute
hehe poor zoe
wow confession on bday
haye everything was well except this emotionally challenged personlatity
😆
n the jealousy game
by god it was so good!
poor farhan
their conversations were so funny
hehe bt i loved it so much
haye aak changed!
eating pizza was definetly his thing bt still
lovely
i really loved it so much
it was
superb
fantastic
fabulous
splendid
magical
lovely
awesome
amazing
loved it so much
n if thats ur 1st one , god , u will rock it
this was so good one
keep writing n yes dont forget to pm me!

Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Such s beautiful wrk dear

Asad is alwys best in his jelly mode..😆
Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was CUTE OS..
Loved Jealous Asad..





-Mariam-
Edited by Mariam.2187 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww... suchha a cute O.S.!

I loved it so so so so so very mcuh!!! And P.S I love jealous asad!! 😆

Please do write more like this! I seriously loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THE LAST KISS!!!!

One of the cutest recent O.S!!! 😳😳😳

Claps for u 👏

I loved farhaan here! Lol, he was funny!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey ,
Words that come to me after reading this os are - WOW ! BRILLIANT ! SO ARTICULATE !
Indeed a fab job ! Loved it ! 😃👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WoW cute and romantic OS!!!
Loved it :)
Do write more os' s
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a cute and lovely os...
Asya are adorable...
I always love jealous wala asad...
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow its so beautiful OS dear
Pls update ur other stories too especially Dark shadows
The jealous wala Asad is a treat to read😃
Thanks for pm

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