Aur pyaar hogeya:SS part 11 on pg 126 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

nice update
so asad decides to find the truth and get justice
even if he dont believed rashid he believes his ammi
wow zoya and asad racking their brains to remember what
happened the bhang nite they got some flashes
and they both decides it is just attraction nothing more
oh the song played automatically in the morning šŸ˜†
she only have a month more in india y does it hurt asad
she will be leaving
continue soon




Thanks
Ya finally Asad started using his brain
Lets see how asya realises there love
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

My self-control broke down and I clicked on this story. You are really making it impossible for me to quit this forum.😵

I am in love with the idea of this story (Tanveerless AsYa's love story).
We don't agree on some things because I am judge the characters more harshly, but you are a very competent writer who I respect. I know you will write a good story, which will be logical and in-character.šŸ‘šŸ¼



Thank you so much for your wonderful comments
Ya v r not allowing u to quit this forum
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kajenilious

Wel wrtnd
so asya were detrmind to reveal d truth
nd bhang wala scene was cute as like as in d shw
cntnue soon



Thanks
I am glad that you liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Dear its an awesome part

Now Asad is determined to find the culprit
Both ASYA got memory of bhang night
But both are adamant to avoid thr feelings
Poor Zoya she feels she is a misfit
Asad felt bad when Zoya told him about her departure
I want more ASYA scenes dear
And pls make it a long update
pls update soon
Thanks for pm



It will be full of asya dear
They will realise there love
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fifi1297

Hey...very nice story...I liked it...

Very well written...superb...storyline z very good...
Awww...pooor zoya...shevz misfit...
Wow,...now asya will find real culprit...
Write more asya scenes...
This was an awsum update...
continue soon...
Pm me also...



Thanks
It will be full of asya how they solve the mystery & how they realise there love
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhisha

  • Very Nice Storyline i love it lot keep continue never give up coz u are best Writer in town ..šŸ‘



Thanks for the compliment dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 3

Asad & zoya was going in to orphanage. Un naturally zoya was silent. Asad knew zoya was worried about her visa. She has only one month in India. She has find her abbu with in these 30 days.
Asad: miss.farooqui are you ok?
Zoya: ha mr.khan
Asad: you seem to be lost.
Zoya: no mr.khan. I am fine.
Asad & zoya reached the orphanage. Zoya had tears when she entered. Almost 2 to 3 yrs she too stayed in an orphanage. If API & jiju was not there she don't know how her life would have been now.
Asad was a sponsor in that orphanage. It was a new information to zoya.
The manager welcomed both asad & zoya.

Manager: mr.khan. We are extremely sorry we searched every where. But that doll is not there. I am afraid I guess there is a chance that we might have lost in on the way.
Asad: thank you mam.
Asad & zoya got up.
Zoya: mr.khan I think we should check once more in KV. May be we will get it from some where.
Asad: ya once more we have to check. there is a chance that we may get it.
Zoya: mr.khan did you speak with the lawyer.
Asad: ya I spoke with him. Since I didn't go yesterday to court the court had given another day for hearing. That is 1 week later. Before that we should get some evidence that mr.rashid khan is innocent.
Zoya knew they have only one week time. They should do something fast.
Zoya: mr.khan is there any chance that we can bail him.
Asad: I spoke with the lawyer. He said unless we didn't get any evidence we can't get bail.
Zoya: mr.khan I am sure we will be able to get some evidence in a week.
Asad: let's go ms.farooqui
Zoya: mr.khan I want to spent some time here. I will go my own.
Asad: are you sure.
Zoya: ya I will manage mr.khan
Asad bid good bye to her. Zoya went towards the kids. She had got chocolates on the way. She started distributing to them. Kids surrounded her. Asad saw her from his car. He smiled at that site. With out his own knowledge his hands went to pocket to take his phone & he took her photo.

Zoya had gone in few streets near by the orphanage showing the pictures of her abbu. By noon time she had got exhausted. Today also she didn't get any information about her abbu. She went to a pani puri stall & she was eating pani puri. It was then she remembered she had the address of the house she went day before yesterday with asad. It seems to be her abbu's ancestral house. If not it may be some of his relatives. If she give this address in registration department she may be able to get the name of the owner of that house. May be he can help her to reach his abbu.

Zoya went directly to the register office. She met the sub register & explain the reason for her arrival. Sub register was a middle aged women. She was touched by the real reason for zoya's visit & she asked her to give a written application. Zoya gave the application. The registrar assured that she will inform about this in a week.
On the way back zoya was revealed. She could see the hope of getting her abbu in a week. It was then zoya remembered. One week! Only that much time they have to save rashid. Zoya was thinking a way to save rashid.

She was recollecting what all they saw in that gudiya factory. Rashid digging the grave of that women who got murdered in that factory. Asad saw this & he was furious. They found Raghu sighn's cell phone & the last number was rashid's. It was then it striked to zoya cell phone.

Once she reached KV she went to her room & took her mac book air. She started tracing rashid's & raghu's cell phone number. Zoya was waiting impatiently to get the location & the numbers they both had contacted that whole day. She was praying Allah to help her.

Asad came to KV in the evening & he informed dilshad about his visit to orphanage & his conversation with lawyer. Dilshad was really upset. Asad consoled her. He assured her that he will prove rashid's innocence. He went to his room.

Asad removed his shirt. Suddenly he heard zoya's voice.
Zoya: I got it mr.khan.
Zoya as usual barged in to asad's room. She was awestruck to see him shirtless. She forgot the purpose of her visit. She started drooling over him shamelessly. She was brought back by asad's voice.
Asad: what non sense is this ms.farooqui
Zoya: ha mr.khan why you were the shirt?
Asad: ji
Zoya: I mean iam sorry I didn't see any thing. I assure that. I didn't see your biceps or triceps.
Asad: ms.farooqui! What you got?
Zoya: six packs
Asad: ji?
Zoya: I mean I got a clue who could have trapped mr.rashid khan.
Asad: what?
Zoya: I will explain mr.khan. See this the call list of mr.rashid khan on that day.
Zoya gave that paper to asad.
Zoya: see this mr.khan before contacting reghu sighn he got a call immediately before it. I have marked that number.
Asad noticed that number which zoya had encircled.
Zoya: this is reghu sighn's call list. There is so many incoming & out going call to that number who had called rashid khan before he contacted reghu sighn.
Zoya showed the paper to asad. Asad compared two papers. Yes it's the same number.
Zoya: mr.khan the number belongs to one mrs.razia siddiqi.
No doubt asad was shocked!


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