AsYa Story-UNRECOGNIZED EMOTIONS-Thread 5- Parts 18-19

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Awesome update Loved it Thanks for the pm

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Young And Horny!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

A hope for many more threads to come. What did you say last thread? In your dreams.😆

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Young And Horny!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Congratulations and Celebrations!

How am I so late this time

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

I just simply Loved these lines Anki,

Life is not a Fairy Tale and I am no princess either. Neither do I own any magic wand nor do I need any.

Such range of emotions in this chapter. I found angst with Asad moved away and Zoya is behind waiting I presume with no definite answer if he would come for her.

Atif and Zeenat are a funny team. I loved imagining Zoya's exasperation.

Asad and Dilshad, another wonderful heart touching scene, it was letting it go and coming to terms with Asad knowing the truth.

Mum is the word with these two scenes.

Loved Zoya how she wanted an email from Asad on her birthday, fighting your desire, your want and need to be with that someone, hoping he misses her just as much, remembers her just as much.

Beautiful feel honestly.

Last scene, I smiled and then I smiled wide, and you know why that is. Asad is back Baby!

Lovely Update Anki, Fabulous attempt in bringing so many emotions and tying them together in one chapter.😃

Looking forward to the next one, I have a feeling it will be my most loved chapter for this update.

Muawh Thanks for my mention👍🏼😛 I was looking for my name going MA DURGA ! Did Anki forget me.😆

I am just shameless aren't I ! haha!🤗

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Urvi Saini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Awesome update

You have 100 likes already.

Update soon

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Congrats for the new thread!!
And thank so much fir mentioning me and my stupid demand!!
Its not needed if u dont want it !! I just mean to make people smile by stupid demands or some words and these things have hurted a few people too!!
If its u then I am sorry!!
But u know I love you and ur fictions!!

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

I hope ur fine too!!
bas ab mat kahin pe sar dekar maarna apna okk!!
LoL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20
Congrats for the new thread!!
And thank so much fir mentioning me and my stupid demand!!
Its not needed if u dont want it !! I just mean to make people smile by stupid demands or some words and these things have hurted a few people too!!
If its u then I am sorry!!
But u know I love you and ur fictions!!

Thanks a lot Apurva 😛

C'mon!! it wasn't only you who had asked me for a kiss... it's almost eveyone 😆

but you did it the most 😳

but i couldn't fulfill that...

so i should be the one saying sorry, not you...

nope... you didn't 😊

thanks buddy 🤗