#2-AsYa FF: BITFSBH-Part 30 on Page 114 on 5th Nov- PMs Later :) - Page 47

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

its an awesome update

Originally posted by: saku19

wow. loved it. Thank u😊

i like this bromance and sismance. Asad has learned who he has married to n how he sud not mess wid her😆

nice update. Thank u😊

thanks for the pm.😃 Welcome😃

update soon.

i liked zoya's mom because i used to watch punaar vivaah😊 She really luks like Zoya's mom n since Palak is childhood Zoya it can be useful to show flashback in photos😊

Originally posted by: jas91

Awesome part Juhi👏 Thank u😊

Zoya explained 2 Asad & Naj wny she 's angry wid HNN😊 Dat scene was one of d most important part of dis update where Zoya's inner thoughts abt people r shown😊

Asya went 2 colg 2 taught princi gud lesn👍🏼 Dat Princi was too much🥱

Nuzat has still not changed I just hate her😡 She is d youngest n cannot bear Zoya's taunts even if she id one who started them😡

Don't know why Asya & Naj forgave her soon🤢 They did not forgave her soon n Nuzhat has really changed now. Gul wud hv shown Zoya forgiving Nuzhat on d day itself wen Tanveer's gang was exposed in SM n she wud hv said d boring Gul type dialogue such as 'U r like younger sister so u don't need to ask for forgiveness. I am not at all angry wid u'. Gul wud hv even shown Zoya hugging Nuzhat n her even saying a shayari in SM. I hate Gul for ruining Zoya's character. So, Zoya had not forgiven Nuzhat so soon than wat Gul wud hv shown.

except her all realized their mistake & doesn't badmouth Zoya😡😡 Nuzhat saw Zoya as a bitchy type college girl who troubles innocent n shy college girls which is much seen in d shows. Zoya is not those type of girls but a girl who cannot tolerate anyone's crap.

Humi talked wid Naj & girls bcame frnds😊 SM girls finally realized how Najma may hv felt wen they ignored her😔

Bromance & Sismance was hilarious🤣 Asad has learnt who he has married n how he sud not mess wid her🤣

finally Zoya's parents & Zain Alisha came⭐️ They shifted to India⭐️

Khan's goes 2 meet them😛 Even Ayaan went to meet them😛

ZA pulls Ayaan's leg & embarrass him about GF 😆 Bechaara Ayaan has realized dat they r Zoya's niece n nephew😆

promo is cool finally Asya wedding SR☺️

& zoya asked 2 go 2 paris🥳 Yes, SR vl happen on their remarriage night😳

will d twist come after they come back from HM🤔 Yes, d twist vl come after honeymoon n many shocking secrets vl be revealed before Zoya being attacked😉

btw nice choice 4 Zoya's parents😉 They r Haseena n Chand 4m Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani who played d vampire couple😉

continue soon😃

Originally posted by: jas91

Originally posted by: jas91

Originally posted by: hkajen

Awesome update

Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi

Awesome update
continue soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

sismance n bromance 🤣 AsYaan vs MaYa🤣

lovely update... Thank u😊 especially the college scene...n romance ... Glad u liked it😃

continue soon...excitedly waiting for the wedding rituals SR n honeymoon too😳

A/N: This part will reveal Zoya's past nature which will again be seen in later parts after a shocking twist in the story.

Part 23(A)

Asad, Zoya n Najma r showing Ayaan, Alisha n Zain d secret rooms in their house. Zoya takes them to d secret room thru d cupboard where she had kept Tanveer tied.

"Dis is d room where Zoya had kept Tanveer. I remember dis as I talked wid Zoya on Skype," said Ayaan.

"Who is Tanveer?" asked Alisha.

"Beta, Tanveer is d name of a chudail who troubled some good people a lot but ur Zoya was very smart n brave. She kidnapped her n kept her tied on dat chair," replied Najma.

"Dis is so amazing, Khala. Wat did dat chudail do?" asked Zain.

Asad, Zoya, Najma n Ayaan did not know wat to say.

"Beta, dat chudail came in d form of a human being n ur Asad Khalu's childhood friend but she showed her real face n troubled everyone. She was creating problems in our life n bringing tears in some people's eyes. But now she is in jail," replied Ayaan.

"Dat chudail sud remain in jail only," said Alisha.

They came out of dat room n then Zoya showed them d secret room under d couch.

"Zoya, dis room is nice for doing romance," said Najma wid a smile.

"Asad had told me d same thing," blurted Zoya accidentally.

Zoya realized wat she said n got embarrassed while others including Asad started laughing. Asad smirks @ Zoya amusingly while she is still embarrassed.

"Bhaijaan, I never knew u cud think like dat. But after seeing Zoya, anything is possible," teased Ayaan wid a laugh.

Asad hits Ayaan annoyingly on d head.

"Najma, y u told dis in front of kids?" asked Zoya.

"V r not kids okay," said Zain.

"Don't tell us kids," said Alisha.

Everyone's eyes became wide.

"Zoya, wat does they eat?" asked Asad amusingly.

"Pizza," replied Alisha n Zain 2gthr.

"Zoya, u also eat pizza a lot," said Najma.

"Dats y she is also mischievous like them," said Ayaan.

Others except Zoya laugh. Zoya hits Ayaan annoyingly on his head.

"Ayaan, go n move dat painting," said Zoya.

"Why?" asked Ayaan.

"Move it na," said Zoya.

Ayaan moved d couch n was shocked to see a sliding door.

"Secret room again?" asked Ayaan shockingly.

"Yes," replied Zoya wid a smile n pressed some numbers to open door.

All went inside. Ayaan, Alisha n Zain were amazed to see d room.

"R we done wid seeing d secret rooms?" asked Ayaan.

"Not yet," replied Najma.

Asad, Zoya n Najma shows Ayaan, Alisha n Zain some more secret room n spots. They r amazed to see them. They then come out in d hall.

"Ammi, v hv seen some secret rooms n secret spots," said Alisha.

"In one secret room, Zoya has kidnapped a chudail," said Zain.

All started laughing.

"V need to go now," said Dilshad.

"Well, v vl meet soon," said Zahira.

Asad called d driver of Dilshad's car.

"Y r u calling d driver?" asked Dilshad.

"Cuz I am taking Zoya to watch cricket in my car," replied Asad.

Everyone smiles after hearing dis.

Scene shifts to AsYa @ d cricket stadium watching cricket while eating popcorn.

"Asad, now Dhoni's batting is coming," said Zoya happily.

"Now u vl pay attention to Dhoni only," said Asad.

"Jealous," said Zoya wid a grin.

"Jealous, my foot," said Asad.

"Six," said Zoya happily standing up as Dhoni hits a six.

"Sit now otherwise d back persons vl shout," said Asad making her sit.

After d match got over, Asad drove to a park. They brought sandwich 4m one of d stalls n sat on a park bench.

"Asad, I want u to know more abt me. U always wanted everything perfect n a perfect wife. But there is nothing like perfect. Its just misconception," said Zoya.

"I know Zoya," said Asad, "I was always thinking dat I am perfect n I want everything to be in perfection. Some people used to call me Mr. Perfect. But later I realized dat I was nowhere perfect in reality but a bad example in d name of a man. I hv realized dat there is nothing like perfect. Perfection is a big misconception n v only mess if v follow dat."

"Asad, u know I was not always like I am now," said Zoya.

"Means?" asked Asad.

"Till a year ago, I was cold n akdu type like u some of d times," said Zoya.

"I can't believe it," said Asad.

"Its true," said Zoya, "But I was not too much of dat like u were. I was not even regressive n judgemental like u. D childhood incident affected me a lot n it still affects me now sometimes. As I earlier said, I used to hardly wear girly clothes. I only used to wear girly clothes like dress, skirt, gown, salwar-suit, saree during namaaz, festivals, parties, etc. Otherwise, I wore t-shirts, shirts, vest, jerseys, jackets, shorts, trousers, jeans most of d times. I hardly used to do make-up. I am still d same but now I wear all types of clothes. I did not used to talk much wid people other than my family n friends. For my family n friends, I used to very cheerful n friendly but for others I used be a little cold, arrogant n unfriendly. Unfriendly means I used to talk properly but I did not used to get close to them. I used to get very angry some of d times if someone talked nonsense n stupid like I used to get angry wid u for ur earlier attitude. Wen our problems got worse, I hated u like anything cuz I cud not believe dat such persons exist in d world. Glad dat u hv changed now n started thinking properly. I never wanted to fall in love as I did not wanted someone to ruin my life like dat monster ruined my ammi's life. I used to be very cold n akdu wid most of d boys. Some boys were my friends but I never had a boyfriend. Only in group studies, play n dance competition, I wud work wid boys. I was modern but not like those girly type of girls who wud drool over guys. I only used to hv fun n talk cheerfully wid my family n my friends. Wid others, I used to talk normally even smiling very hardly. If someone messed wid me, I always wanted to teach him or her a lesson. Sometimes, I did right but sometimes I used to do more than required. I used to even hurt people sometimes by being a little mean n bitchy if I did not liked them or if I was irritated wid them. But every time, I did it wid reason not like u who hurt me in d past widout any reason. Ur reasons were always stupid n U did not even had manners to talk wid a girl properly. U even fought wid a girl who according to u was abt to be married. U said dat no one talked to u like dat before which I found rude. I understood dat u r a hypocrite. V sud not hv such ridiculous attitude. U even made a guest dat also a female guest uncomfortable in d house as if I was a criminal. Well cumn to me, even wid my family n friends I did not used to be as cheerful n bubbly as I am now. 10 months ago, wen I returned 4m Paris, my parents used to tell me to change myself a little. Ammi n di used to buy me a lot of girly clothes teln me dat wearing them some of d times vl not ruin my tomboy image n as I vl be a fashion designer, I sud wear all kinds of clothes. Initially, I resisted but then I started wearing girly clothes too along wid d usual types of clothes I wore. Even during fashion course n internship, I did not wore girly clothes. I wore girly clothes only while doing modelling for some fashion designers which was part of d course n internship. My parents even told me to change my cold attitude n try to be friends wid people. If not being friends but at least I sud be friendly wid people before becoming a fashion designer n starting my career. I was not much loud n messy earlier. I used to spread my things much less than I do now. During these 10 months, I changed a lot. But I am not entirely changed n never will. I can still get angry like I got angry wid u for ur mistakes. I did not got close to Nikhat, Nuzhat n Humeira cuz they never got close to their own sister Najma in collge. I felt as if they r only in their own world not caring to know abt others. Still, I vl patch-up wid them now n try to be friendly wid them. U remember very well wat I did wid Tanveer. I can't be great to people like her. I hope u still like me after knowing so much things abt me."

"Of course I like u. In fact, I like u even more after knowing so much things abt u," said Asad wid a smile, "I can't believe u were similar to me in many things."

"Dats y, u reminded of my earlier self wen I met u but I was not horrible, regressive n judgemental like u. I used to just maintain distance wid people," said Zoya.

They finished their sandwiches.

"But u used to talk wid me 4m d time u came home," said Asad.

"I was trying to be ur friend as u r ammi's son. I thought dat u r not bad and u vl talk to me after some time but I was wrong. Then I only used to talk to irritate u or prove u wrong or prove dat I am better than u. I cud not believe dat u r ammi's son."

Just then Nikhat, Nuzhat n Humeira entered d park. They saw Asad n Zoya 4m far n smiled. They went near them. Asad n Zoya lukd @ them shockingly.

"Asad bhaijaan, Zoya, v know v hv hurted both of u a lot especially Zoya. V r really sorry for it," said Humeira.

"Zoya bhabhi, I wish v wud hv tried to know d reason behind ur problems instead of blaming u all d time," said Nuzhat.

"Wateva may hv happened between both of u, v hope it never happens again. V don't know wat happened but v wish both of u to always remain 2gthr," said Nikhat.

Asad n Zoya lukd @ each other n then again lukd @ them.

"Its good dat u hv realized ur mistakes. I am ready to patch-up wid 3 of u," said Zoya.

"Date mans u forgave us?" asked Nuzhat happily.

"Yes," replied Zoya wid a smile.

Nikhat n Humeira also smiled.

"Never hurt anyone like dat again," said Asad.

"Yes bhaijaan," said Humeira.

"V may not be able to come to both of ur wedding rituals but v vl come to d wedding," said Nikhat wid a smile.

"V vl be very happy," said Asad wid a smile.

Zoya hugged d girls one by one happily.

After Asad n Zoya returns home, they r surprised to see Zoya's family.

"U all here?" asked Zoya surprisingly.

"V vl be here till ur Walima," replied Zeenat wid a smile.

Asad n Zoya lukd @ each other @ d mention of Walima'.

"I am very happy to see all of u here," said Asad wid a smile.

"2mrw is both of urs engagement," said Zameer.

"Engagement means where Khala n Khalu vl make each other wear rings na?" asked Zain.

"Yes," replied Najma wid a smile, "U both learn so much so soon."

Cuz v r smart, Tamatar Aunty," said Alisha.

"Dat v can see very well," said Asad wid a smile.

"Thank God, they did not asked abt Walima," whispered Zoya to Asad.

"Yes other v all wud hv been embarrassed," whispered Asad.

At night, Asad n Zoya were in their balcony in their night clothes.

"4m 2mrw, there vl be a new start of our life," said Asad wid a smile.

"After our nikaah, I am ready to our relation on d next level. Dat means, v vl hv our Walima on d next evening of our nikaah," said Zoya wid a smile, "V hv already delayed a lot."
Asad becomes happy hearing wat she said.

"Glad dat u r ready to trust me," said Asad wid a smile.

"I still trust u but I want to do it only after our remarriage. Our 1^st night of our 1^st nikaah was messed up but dis time, it vl be a very beautiful night," said Zoya wid a smile.

"I vl make sure dat v vl make dat night very beautiful," said Asad wid a smile.

"Me too," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Lets go to sleep now," said Asad wid a smile.

They went to their bed n slept in each others' arms.

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