ASYA ff..only for you(part 10 updated pg.24)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome to qubool hai forum😊
Plz continue it soon very intresting concept.
I would love to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's a really sad ff
But do cont very nicely written

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Welcome to the forum
Really sad prologue 😭
Pls do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

Welcome to the forum

Really sad prologue😭
Pls do continue

thanku dear ..il update in cmg two day's 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kabhi-forever

Welcome to qubool hai forum😊

Plz continue it soon very intresting concept.
I would love to read more.

thanku dear
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Nice concept
Plz continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note: there is no abbu track in the story, zoya an gaffur are noway related

Dilshad and najma stay in sm wit rashid as dilshad forgives him and stays wit him in sm along side shirin &fly

asad hates rashid an still not able to forgive him he stays in kv alone though he vists sm to meet his mother and sis, smetimes they cme to stay wit asad for few days

zoya is not an orphan she stays wit her parents, sis and bro in newyork.she has a joint family wit her uncle aunty their children and her grandparents.

Tanveer is daughter of gaffur and raziya an elder sis of humeria .she is evil lke her mom


character sketch:

asad ahmed khan: similar to his character in the show, have looks to die for and loves zoya who is his life.

zoya farooqui; bubbly girl the most pampered in home whose is engaged to akram coz of her family wil but later falls in love wit asad.

zeenat and Anwar are zoya parents .zyra and haider are sibling's of zoya.


chahat zoya's best friend more like a sis to her.

tanveer: asad's best friend who loves asad and not close to any of the khan sibling not even her sis humeria coz she lives in her own world.
Edited by smj7 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice character sketch
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1:
after the funeral of asad ,zoya obliged to go to sm wit dilshad den zeenat took her to her room and made her lie down.

zoya loved taking pic's of hers and asad,their entire room was filled wit numerous photo frames of zoya&asad their happy times and photos wit dil and najma.

few hours later:

zoya: asad dnt go,plz asad ,she was murmuring in the sleep den suddenly she woke up and starting walking towards asad study room.
laxmi her maid stopped zoya

laxmi: mam plz dnt go their mam,u need rest
zoya jerked her hand away and opened the study room which was totally messed up and blood stains of asad it was in that room they found him lying down in pool of bloodafter seeing it zoya fainted an feel down .zeenat came running and took back to her room put her to bed
(*on the phone)
anwar: zeenat u brng zoya to our guest house in bopal if she vl be wit her family she vl feel good then vl take her back to new york
zeenat: zoya is nt ready to listen anwar ,she is sleeping il talk to her

anwar: ok allahafiz
zeenat:allahafiz

zeenat walks back to zoya's room
zoya wake up have smething ,hw long vl u be lke this plz i beg u
listening to zeenat she got an followed her to dinning table

at the dinning table:

zeenat:plz eat somethg zoya
zoya was oly playing wit her food den she got up and sat on the couch
zeenat walked to her and kneeled in front of her she took her hands in hers
zeenat: zoya cme wit us to new york i cnt leave u alone her like dis
zoya: no ammi i cnt leave asad alone here ,i need to be wit him
zeenat: but he is not here zoya he left u baby(crying)
zoya: no ammi asad can never leave me he is here oly u knw na he gets angry fast ,he is angry wit me aftr smetime he vl cme back(sobbing)
zeenat: he wnt zoya plz baby cme wit us
zoya: then ask him to cme back ammi i vl never fight wit him ask him to cme back

zeenat 's heart cried seeing zoya in that condition and den she went to the maid telling she was gng to her house to meet anwar and wil cme back in an hour an she left
door bel rang the maid opened the door it was rashid he came to meet zoya

zoya: wat happen abbu
ra: zoya asad's post mortem report has cme and it says...
z: wat its says
re: it was not a muder it was suicide!
zya felt her world turn upside down she cldnt imagine asad leaving her and gng away

z: it is wrng asad cannot commit suicide why vl he do so????????
ra: the last time i saw him was day before yesteday wen he came to take dilshad 's signatures to transfer all his property on ur name..but at dat time i dint knw dat he was thinking of smethng lke dis.

zoya cldnt believe her hears she just stood numb..
ra: i dint tel dis to anyone ,plz dnt tel to dilshad she wnt be able to handle it saying dis rashid left the hme.

zoya silently walked to her..she saw his photo and started shouting hw could you do dis to me ,y did u leave me..u promised me to stay wit forever then wat happen asad y did u leave me???????????crying she got up went to his wardrobe an removed his favorite suit she wore it and hugged it tightly to feel his presence his love...
she put her hands in the pocket and found a note written by asad...


dat was part 1 i knw it was sad😭 bt cmg updates vl be happy flashback of asad and zoya love story😳plzzz do comment and like ,criticism also welcomed but plz comment...🤢🤢.

for pms buddy me!

Edited by smj7 - 11 years ago

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