Sanam & Aahil - A Drabble

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Salam All


Ok, so I read Einstein's (Farz) post 'Last Night - My Take'


To understand it fully I watched a couple of episodes, so saw Sanam and Ahil together.

Reading the post by Einstein and then seeing the three episodes a little inspiration came my way and hey presto...I came up with this Drabble, a little exaggerated but still.

I hope you like it

Lots of Love
Saima


I had never seen such intensity, his eyes captivated me.

His hold was strong, but his hands said a lot more, they were possessive and eager like never before.

As the distance grew shorter my heart beat faster, hitting hard against my chest. I wanted to him to stop I wanted to scream out but today my words failed me, I couldn't reach out

His sweet breath played with my senses as his passion so raw created havoc within me. How could one man's do so much, how could I let myself lose control.

His feather light stokes, his urgent kisses take my breath away. I let him touch, I let him hold, I let him get away with too much if truth be told.

He was not a friend or lover, he was the man who took away the key to my happiness and burnt everything to ashes

Then why today am I standing here not hating, not stopping or running away, instead I fall victim to his overbearing charm.

Am I falling in love with the enemy, can it this be real.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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mine

Sis.




If I got you to watch a few episodes...you got me to ship this couple even more.

Sis such amazing prose!

I mean...for someone who's only watched like a few episodes you are able to capture the essence that is Sanam and Aahil...and that to me is an amazing feat!

I love it so very much...I keep redaing iit and am actually picturing them in it, coz that's how vividli descriptive your amazing drabble is!

And sure you say this is it...nothing more...BUT sis...I know there should be more.


There simply must.


I insist.


I love you for writing on Sanam and Aahil and I love you for giving the show now a shot! Oh well a few episodes of it...


Love you so very much, I honestly don't think I'll ever get tired of saying it...though you might!


I hope me and the other readers get to read more from you, and that too on SaAhil!


Mwahhh
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You even shared the link to my post!! Why, you so sweet, Sis!


Love you!
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Beautiful Sis and I see someone is so happy to have fianlly got what they wanted 😆 😆😆


Zoyas emotions were well captured and loved the last line "Falling in love with the enemy"


Hope you have got insperation to write on these two too and hope we are treated to more of your works even if they are on a different couple.


Love you Sis and the Chota Babu too 😉
Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

You even shared the link to my post!! Why, you so sweet, Sis!


Love you!


Love you more

And credit to this Drabble does go to you...as it was reading yours that finally got me to watch a few episodes and then the inspiration came

Mwah
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Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

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Beautiful Sis and I see someone is so happy to have fianlly got what they wanted 😆 😆😆


Zoyas emotions were well captured and loved the last line "Falling in love with the enemy"


Hope you have got insperation to write on these two too and hope we are treated to more of your works even if they are on a different couple.


Love you Sis and the Chota Babu too 😉


Firstly, thank you so much

Secondly, I love you so much

Thirdly, lol yes my Einstein got her spot

And lastly, are you crazy! Nope, never, nahi, nada...I am not writing anymore...after TMI and TCL II complete that's me done sister!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for the pm I never watch serials - only KSG drew me like a magnet lol so know very little about what is happening it is lovely people like you that pull me here we'll written drabble thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Not talking to a certain someone.
But certain someone makes a fair point! Write!

Sis!

Please?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You girl!! Hats off! 👏
Awesome stuff this is!

You have written so well! The emotions and the inner feelings were very well described. Loved reading it. The essence has been captured so well! Amazing!
Farz, you gotta be credited for this. That post of yours was certainly great stuff.😳

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