SaHil FF - The Phoenix - Chapter 8 - Page 14

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_HealeR_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome start ! Please continue ..

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t1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow! That was written so well! And loved how the song came into play
The way you described the scene was great because I could visualise it all!
Continue soon!!

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_Lavender_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Lovely chapter😳 Update soon😊

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lastdesire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Plzzz do pm me weneva u update...m totally hooked...jealous ahil vl b a treat 2 read...

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Silvy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Awsome Continue SOON.
I Love It.
;-)

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Pasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

how nicely you write.!!! Awesome start... Please pm me if you can...

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Lubana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow..awesome..please update soon😃

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Zanutix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Okay.. this is the first time I'm reading a story with Asad and Zoya NOT as OTP, and I LOVE IT!

We've got 3 sizzling scenes so far - the 'falling in his arms' one, the 'dori' scene and the epic 'face off'. Also, a little bit of a precap.

And you! You constructed a captivating story on it! Which includes Khan Villa and Rehaan-Sanam!

Please do continue soon!

I'm reading SaHil FFs already! Haha!

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Sabz13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Wow ! That was great! Please write more soon ^_^

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Brilliant brilliant brilliant!!!

You're such a natural at this!!!

And the story kinda runs in tandem with the show too! Well of course you went on further...but my oh my...what amazing storyline this is!!!!

You've got me all hooked and happily so!!!

Mwahhh!!!!

Awesome!!!!