AsYa (KaBhi) FF Chance One In A Milion Thread #3

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Chahat, it was such a nice story.. But please give us an epilogue and clarify the reason Zoya went to the Dr..

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Wht u ending ths ff...plz plz plz do write more new ffs and plz write epilogue...plz
T.c.

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Wow last update of one chance in a million

Even though I don't read Hindi it was a very draining chapter

I felt the angst of asad so we got the story of his pass

So sharia was born in a brothel and she came to the orphanage at 15 to escape that life

So they become frenz and abbujani married them later

She was contented in life and all she wanted was a child

So asad did things by the books and did his check up and learn he can't be a father

Then he learned she is pregnant and showed her his reports he thought she was unfaithful

But she wasn't the baby was his it was his one chance but she killed her self out of guilt

So he only married zoya just to be a father to her child but he ended up falling in love

Zoya understand asad but she just want the last mark of Tariq out of her life

So she decided to go ahead with the abortion and told asad that Allah will also give them their chance in a million too to be parents

We definitely needs and epilogue for this story to see them be given there chance

Beautiful story

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het27

@het27

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

So finally Asad has told everything to Zoya

Saira OMG what a painful past n so is Asad's as their past are connected

I loved the way Zoya being immature about many things in the story but when it came to take Asad's care she was very mature

So she finally decided to get and abortion and Asad too is by her side

They are all set to take that One In A Million Chance.

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Madamji Epilogue jaldi dena

N then start a new story

BTW did not comment on my last comment

Me going bananas

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: het27

Gone bananas kya?

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: -RM-
So she aborted the child? :|

Lovely story it was :)
Epilogue?

They have gone to the clinic

Now will she won't she?

Thank you

Yup epilogue hai

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA
Superb update dear 👏 👏
U portrait every emotion so beautifully. ...
Feeling really bad for asad...how much he had suffered in his life 😭 😭 ...
Did zoya abort the child?????? 😕 ...
Why did u end up here?????.
Atleast give us one more part or epilogue. ...plzzz 😊 ...
Waiting for ur next story...
Thanks for pm... .

Thank you so much

Zoya n Asad have gone to the clinic now whether they abort or not wo toh Epilogue mein hi reveal hoga

Yup epilogue hai na

Next story I am very confused which one to write

Should I create a poll like Az07?

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aYASHIKA

@aYASHIKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Thank you so much
Zoya n Asad have gone to the clinic now whether they abort or not wo toh Epilogue mein hi reveal hoga
Yup epilogue hai na
Next story I am very confused which one to write
Should I create a poll like Az07?

Yup... create poll
I know we gonna love all ur ideas bt we will pick up one.. 😊