AsYa FF: Not Mine to Have *UPD*CHAPT.6 on pg.45 (18-9-14)

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-Candz-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-
Ooh, good one, Candz! :D

I like the twist with the rain and stuff. ;) I wonder if they're going to kiss or not - either way is fine by me! <3

Uh-oh, Zoya's fiance sounds awful. I bet Asad'll help her outta this mess, though! :)

Continue soon!

-Fari.

Thanks Fari! 🤗

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-Candz-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: friendsall
awesome...but got confused if zoya married dat guy or not!!!!!!!! would u update tonite?

No they are not married yet, just engaged! Hope that clears the confusion!

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-Candz-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

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PrettYSmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Caught up on ur recent updates and I am loving it..the way the story is turning up...the unwanted encounters and moments are only but addig fuel to the ongoing fire...cant wait for the fire to happen at her end as well...it has started I see that...now it needs to grow...

Keep up the good work and ur stellar skills at writing!!!😊

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ak020203

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

its getting mutual now.. Nice..

Thanks for the update

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Candy nice update. Chotu sa tha but I believe something is better than nothing 😉

I can understand football fever, though I don't follow it everyone else in my home does. So my home too looks no less than a mad house whenever their favorite team plays.

The almost kiss ☺️ had me like that and then sharing the blanket had me like

NO NO NO! He's letting her go? Oh Asad don't make that mistake, you'll be miserable not seeing her and she will be lost without your support.

I know the separation is only going to make them realize what they mean to each other and help them understand their feelings better. So am ready for whatever you have planned for the story.

Waiting for the next update 😃

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PrettYSmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Finally u updated. ..

Yes, it was super short. ..but super good. .

Awesome. ..both are equally attracted to each other.. ..
Hmmm. ..intresting. .

OMG! !...precape. .asad fired zoya?. ..nooo. ..but dat too was needed.. .will be intresting to c how they meet again.. .

Plllzzz update ur other fictions. ...specially the dark obssessive love.. ..

Will be waiting. ..thaank u.. ..