AsYa FF: Not Mine to Have *UPD*CHAPT.6 on pg.45 (18-9-14)

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

awesome update..

so zoya's fiancee is not the one..

zoya's blaberings were super cute..

update soon..

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Bubbles_buttons

@Bubbles_buttons

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Lovely update!
Amazing story line... I hate how u left that chapter in a cliff hanger! :(
Thanks for the pm and please continue soon!!

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

I'm glad that he's not going to fire her, but for how long is he going to stick with that decision.

Asad's seems as if he's warming up to her presence, maybe slowly getting his feelings under control whenever she's around her. Zoya however seems to have the opposite problem. Her fiancee sounds like a jerk now, I feel sorry for her that she can't even back out from the relationship because of family problems, I think this is the point where Asad will step in to rescue her.

Of course the car had to break down, poor clumsy Zoya, her feelings are making her go all wobbly and weak around him,

Looking forward to the next update,

Update when you can:)

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Javeria

@Surbhiholic55

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Oh zoya engagement did not broke. I was thinking too much 😆
Her fianc showing his true colors . Good for AsYa 😳
Car broke and AsYa fall omg
But why u stopped there 😭
Now continue soon please 😳

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904910

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Awesome Update..Hope Asad finds out Zoya is unhappy now..

I am a silent reader..U r an amazing writer..👏

Read all 4 updates today...waiting for next update...

pl pm me .😳

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

nice story
i hav sent u buddy request
plz accept it
and plz pm me next part

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Hey Dear,

The part was really nice. Finally we get to know the reason Zoya was so upset. I really want to punch the guy whose trapping her. I hope she gets a way out soon without ruining her family.

Oh ho Asad couldn't fire her this time as well. Well I think he should understand that its nature's way of telling him that this shouldn't be happening. I don't think he'll be able to be over her if she goes away. Instead he'll pine to see her even if that meant from a distance.

soo.. now Zoe too realizes his physical appease. well I can hope for things to get interesting with being left in a romantic rainy night.

Update soon.

Love..

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-Candz-

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Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

Heyyy, Congrats on becoming and IF sizzlerz🥳

Thanks!

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

I'm glad that he's not going to fire her, but for how long is he going to stick with that decision.

Asad's seems as if he's warming up to her presence, maybe slowly getting his feelings under control whenever she's around her. Zoya however seems to have the opposite problem. Her fiancee sounds like a jerk now, I feel sorry for her that she can't even back out from the relationship because of family problems, I think this is the point where Asad will step in to rescue her.

Of course the car had to break down, poor clumsy Zoya, her feelings are making her go all wobbly and weak around him,

Looking forward to the next update,
Update when you can:)

I'm glad you liked it. This might be a turning point for them both 😉

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-Candz-

@-Candz-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: p_s05
Zoe's fiance is a male chauvinistic, morality deprived character.

Stranded in extreme weather conditions - Is this Mangalpur reloaded - a contemporary spin... ☺️

Emotions and awareness are soaring equally - Intriguing

"She yelped when he rolled over and was now hovered over her, the rain beating against his back, "Stop apologizing." He said gruffly and her words halted as she nodded. She looked at him, getting caught in his stare and then her eyes involuntarily dropped to his lips. She gulped."

Fascinating development!

The last fraction of the chapter was charming, anticipate the next update.

Thank you! 😳

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-Candz-

@-Candz-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: imcooldude
its cool update (atlist for me)

Zoya's wedding called-off & the way YOU're developing AsYa's relationship; its amazing.

Just onething to ask: izn't there Tamatar(najma) in your story?

thanX for PM and update next chapter soon

Her wedding hasn't been called off! She's still engaged but her fiancee isn't as nice as she thought. Yes there is a Najma in this story and stay tuned because there might just be Ayaan making an appearance later on too. 😃