#2 AsYa FF- Not meant for love???? THREAD 3 link done. - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Niyati
I am hooked with this story...I liked the concept too much...
Want to know how this mystery unfolds infront of haider.

Much love🤗
Swapno
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Niyati

I am hooked with this story...I liked the concept too much...
Want to know how this mystery unfolds infront of haider.

Much love🤗
Swapno

thankss dear, it means a lot to me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wah wah!!!! Kya story hai?????
Superbbb!!! Dii
Awesome...
This is something really new!!!!
Omg!!!! So naaz does everything for zoya!!!

I really feel bad for such people who are in this field...

Thanks for the pm
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heya buddies!!
thanks to all fr loving it...
niya, riddhi, gowtu,linsie, delena, rosy, arzoo, reema di n all who do daily comment n likes. Muahsss dears
AsYa FF- Not meant for love

credits:"niya_789" & "immortallove (reema di)"
CHAPTER 3 A

zoya got shocked feeling manly grip on her.
she turned n saw some unknown man wanting to kiss her.
zoya:"help..." "leave me" wen the man felt heavy thud on his face, asad came to rescue her.
asad:"khala yahan aao, " she called fr shabana while holding that man's collar.
shabana:"kya hua sahab"all girls came there including naaz.
asad:"mene yahan aana tha fir ye yahan kese" he shouted to core.
naaz saw the other man n left with open mouth. She recognized him
shabana:"lgta he ye galat kamre me aa gaya, maaf krna" the man left frm there n soo all. Naaz stood there.
shabana:"chal na customer wait kr ra hoga"
naaz:"baaji 2 min zoya se bt..." shabana jerked her out.
shabana:"bdi mushkil se to ek customer tika he uske paas or tu, bd me bt kr lio," naaz wantef to talk zoya as soon as possible.
ROOM
zoya stood beside wall scared, asad came to her.
asad:"u ok" zoya hugged him tightly "mujhe le jao yahan se, plzzz"
asad:"shhh..." he wiped her tears "me kisi ko tumhe haath ni lagane dunga, bharosa he na mujhpe" zoya noded in yes.
asad:"hum kal bhaag jaenge"
night was not long asad slept seprate.
in mrng
zoya woke up n saw him:"he dint took my advantage, i admire him, allah ap meri bhi madad krte he" she smiled looking sleepy asad on couch.
asad woke up n left,
zoya was getting ready with happiness fr 1 time wen naaz flew in.
naaz:"zoya tum asad ke saath kain ni ja ri ho smjhi" zoya looked her in disbelief.
zoya:"lekin kyun apaa"
in car
asad:"kyunki me use barbad kr dunga" he said to ashfaq.
naaz:"zoya vo admi jo kal tumhare saath tha, jisse tumhe asad ne bachaya vo uska dost tha" zoya shook in disbelief.
zoya:"appa ap ye kya keh ri he"
ashfaq:"asad maza aa gaya bewkoof bhi bn gai" both gigled.
zoya:"apa me samaj gai ap yahi reh jaengi islie ap mujhe asad ke khilaf bhadka rai he na" naaz hit hard by her words.
naaz:"bus ye umid nai thi tumse" n she left crying.
KHAN VILLA
rashid:"breakfast kr lo asad" he joined haider, dilshad n rashid.
dilshad:"kahan the puri raat"
asad:"asfaq ke ghar" all noded.
rashid:"haan haider tum chutki ke baare me or kya bta reh the."
haider started describing her beauty, fun, love fr all. It took asad's heart away.
asad:"koi tasveer" he immediately asked.
haider:"ye ri tb vo 8 saal ki thi" asad's eyes let open that preety face with dimples,
all got busy n asad kept it in his pocket. N left to room.
rashid:"whydont u join our company haider" he agreed to his offer.
asad:"chutki, naam to thoda alag he lekin ab to apko dekhna he huzur, allah jaane vo manzar kb aaega"
"magar usse pehle ek badla he jo pura krna he"
at night
asad n zoya ran frm bar n they reached khan villa. Asad hid her in outhouse, where no 1 use to come.
she was in outhouse n asad in backyard with ashfaq.
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not yet completed, check below
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CHAPTER 3 B
zoya:"he is soo nice man, i slapped him even then he helped me" she smiled relaxing her body on bed.
backyard
asad:"i m not soo nice, ri8 ashfaq" he smiled "ki mujhe koi bhi maar ke jae or me chup chap apni insult jhelun" he smirked. "me use itna dard dunga ki vo taumar us dard me jalegi" ashfaq hi fied.
ashfaq:"miah khaali kamar padak ke maza ni aaya..." asad grew with anger.
asad:"tu use haath bhi ni lagaega, only i have right to ruin her, to obliterate her body, to thrust in her, to xpoilt her that much that she only remembers me.. Asad ahmad khan" his eyes went bloodshot.
zoya:"asad ahmad khan, he is my god who helped me, the only man i can trust after my brother" her eyes filled with tears at thought of haider.
amaan:"asad nai tu aisa nai krega mera dost bigdava he lekin darinda nai, ashfaq tune isme iska saath dia" he came to bckyard n opposed their ideas.
asad:"common amaan dnt forget pleasure is wat every man lives for" he gulped drink in a go.
amaan:"asad sirf ek thappad ke lie tu uski saari zindagi khtm ni kr skta samjha"
ashfaq:"lgta he tujhe usse mohbt ho gai he" asad stood up n slapped ashfaq ti8
asad:
"she is mine, n remember she is not meant for love
zoya:"i think now love can touch me" she smiled unknwn of future pains n wrapped her in blankets.
amaan:"asad ye pagal pan he, plzz aisa kuch mt kr"
asad:"ja yahan se amaan agar mera saath ni de skta to nikal ja yahan se" he jerked amaan on floor.
BAR
naaz:"zoya ko kese smjhao ki asad jhuta he, vo admi uska dost he, allah uski madad krna" she raised her hands in prayer.
shabana:"naaz milne de use tang tod dungi chutanki ki, allah kasam dubara bahar nikalne ki koshish ni karegi," naaz was confused.
naaz:"zoya ke lie dono or narak, itne galat uske saath hi kyun, nai me aisa nai hone dungi" she decided to run away frm there.
KHAN VILLA
asad:"or kuch btaie apni chutki ke baare me" he was in love with the description n talks of chutki that haider always told.
rashid:"lgta he asad ko chutki pasand aa gai" he blushed and others including haider 😆
haider:"asad miah abi to sirf bato se ye haal he, pta he vo behad khoobsurat he" asad again blushed, "pta he ek baar uske schul me ek ladke ne use tang kia, tb vo karib 15 saal ki thi, to usne use jutiyun se mara tha or mere paas lai, or boli "bhaijaan ise doctor ke paas le jao" and all 😆
asad:"gussa bhi lekin kisi ko dard me ni dekh skti" all looked to him after his statement "i mean bdi bahadur thi"
haider:"thi nai aj bhi hogi" his eyes took tears.
asad:"dnt wry hum chutki ko mil kr dhundenge" asad holded his hands.
dilshad:"haan tbi to asad ko chutki milegi" all 😆
asad shyed n went to room.
he slept on bed. "allah wats hpning to me. Sirf kissi ke baare me janke aisa lg ra he, jese use janta hun" he stood up "kaisi hogi vo, fool si nazuk, taaron si sundar, allah jaldi vo mil jae, chutki mohbt ho ri he iss janwar ko tumse" bt then his eyes grew dark. "maaf krna lekin tumse pehle koi or meri bahon me hoga, nishani mohbt nai nafrat hogi, tumhare saath pyaar se ek hounga, magar use barbad krna he"
he took her childhood photo. "bachpan me itni khoobsurat thi to ab to" "chutki ki mohbt se pehle zoya ki barbadi" he hugged chutki's photo.
naaz kept on running so that she could tell zoya abt asad's true face.
. She was running wen faal hard bt carey arms took her. She saw them which dint saw lust bt kind of belongingness.
done!! Hope ull like it
sorry if its short.
next update by saturday
Love
niyati

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG

Asad want to take revenge.. and his friend also helped him..
Zoya started to trust him.. and did she falling in love..??

poor naaz.. zoya misunderstood her.. but what abt Zoya..?? who is going to help her..


is Asad really going to force her.. only to take a revenge.. i hate his friend asfaq but aman is good

and here he fell in love with chutki childhood pic..

this man is so confusing..

who is helping naaz..??

continue soon




Edited by ImmortalLove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
i really really want asad to realize his mistake...he's blind in his revenge...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanx for the pm
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ya Allah...
Ya kya hogaya..
Asad wants to take revenge ? !

Itna -vely kyon dikhrahi ho meri baby ko :( :(

but tht was awesome prt niyati..
Loved it..

Hhhwww woh asad k plan tha ki kisi aur k bejhe nd rescue kare..

Aaaww naaz.. Poor soul..
Em feeling so sry for her..
Zoya doesn believed her..

So asad mila k chutki se pyar horaha haiii..
Mmm intrstng..

Zoya blindly trusting him nd he wants to cheat her..
Hp haider ll find soon his chutki..

So naaz nd haider k meet honewala hai..

Ajeeb baat hai..
Ek hi insaan ek taraf kisise beintehaa mohabbat karta hai.. Aur doosri taraf ksisi aur se Nafrat.. Woh bhi choti galti k wazah se..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Continue soon..
Thnks for the pm

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