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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Mine
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Hahaha hilarious 😆
Choti behen boldiya 😆 😆
Khala ki tho hawa nikhalgai 😆

Arey.. Kiss nai hua... !!!!

Lolll actually car mein band hai 😆
Thy all r crazy people.. Yes including Asya 😆

Awesome updt
Loved it

Continue soon


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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm part.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Cont asap.
T.c.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

Chapter 13

Zoya is damn adorable.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: imcooldude

thank-u for PM&HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY

AWSOME UPDATE
ENJOY READING IT
LOVED:SHAMELESS ASAD

UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR


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Posted: 11 years ago

Will put up a note soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

Chapter 13 B

The extended family is annoying. 😵 A hilarious chapter though. 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

AsYa and their never ending woes! 🤣

Jungle, just for a kiss.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Amazing update Aashka ,,

I liked the rain scene and how he grabbed her to jungle for kiss ❤️
Loved it !!
Continue sooon 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys! Back again! I guess it's a bit of bore this chapter but it's needed as now the story has finally starting to reach the end! 😆 Anyways do read and temme how was it!
Chapter 14:

"Asad open the door!" Zoya said.

"I... I.. I can't find the damn keys!" he exclaimed shocked.

"i'm sure it must be in your pocket! Stop fooling around!" she said angrily.

"I swear it's not there.." he exclaimed still in shock.

"Wait lemme check!" she said as she came forward to check his pants.

"What happened?" she asked as he suddenly jerked behind.

"We have an audience and you would be touching inappropriate places." He reminded me.

"But the key!"

"I don't we'll look around... It must be here somewhere.." he said as he started walking towards the car.

The window banged..

Zoya looked up to see the old lady angrily knocking on the window and gesturing to open the door.

"Asad... You may need to communicate here..." she said uncertainly as she called out to him seeing them angry and grumpy.

Asad through sign language managed to communicate that they had lost the key and were searching for it.

Luckily they were able to open the windows after a lot of search for the right switch which allowed them to open the window even when the car was locked.

"Hayee Allah! Hume kitne saalon tak aise rakhne ka socch rakha hai?" khala asked irritatedly.

"Ji khala hum abhi phone lagayenge aur ammi se kehdenge ki voh iss gaadi ki doosri chaabi bhijva de." He replied as he fished in his pocket for his phone.

"Zoya you have my phone?" he asked cautiously.

"Oh Gawd! Not again Asad! And why would i keep it?" she asked exasperatedly.

"Yeh kya baat kar rahe ho tum dono?" khala asked.

"Ji... Voh kuch nahi..." Zoya stammered.

"It's in the car!" he said as he was walking to the other side to get it when Shafaq picked it up and thinking Zoya to be Asad gave it to her.

"Mera phone..." Asad shouted when he saw his phone in her hand.

"Great! When did you start lying?" he asked frustrated.

"Excuse me! I did not lie and FYI she passed it to me!" she replied back angrily.

"Ok bab.. i mean relax Zoya..." he said as he tried calming his angry lioness but she seemed to be in no mood to give in.

They called Dilshaad and asked her to send a key with the driver explaining the reason.

The extra car had arrived for them to be taken back however the trio stuck in the car would have to wait for the key as the other driver was on his way but had been delayed due to a tree falling thus blocking the entire road stretch.

Zoya had the urge to go in that car leaving the trio and also Asad with them!

Why did he have to shout at her unnecessarily in front of them? And the look on shafaq's face made her want to bang that girl's face on some tree! At first she was surpirsed and then she seemed very happy.

Zoya had decided that enough is enough! This time she wouldn't give in easliy and would see what he would do convince her.

By the time the extra key reached it was nearing 8 and it was still raining heavily.

Now that they had 2 cars they decided that they would go separately so that everyone could sit comfortably.

Once again Shafaq wanted to be in his car and Zoya being angry with him did not bother to come up to his defence and decided to go with those Khala's.

"Zoe, what did I do?" he asked as he pulled her aside when the khala's were moving into the bigger car.

"Nothing" she simply said before walking off.

Luckily one of the driver's had noticed a small hotel a few kilometres away so they quickly made their way.

Throughout the journey Shafaq left no chance to get all touchy with him and was almost sitting on his lap.

Frustrated, he couldn't take it anymore and sat beside the driver.

"Asad aap yahaan par bhi baith sakte the, na? Yahan par kaafi jagah hai." She purred.

"Main yahi theek hoon."

Soon they reached the hotel and since both Asad and Zoya were wet they managed to get hold of another pair of clothes.

"Ya Allah!" Shafaq thought to herself as she was ogling shamelessly at Asad as he was changing.

"Itna accha hai unka body, mann karta hai kha jaon! Humeira kitni lucky hai! Kaash mera nikaah Asad se hota!" she thought to herself as she continued staring unknown at the pair of angry eyes that were eyeing her.

"Khala!" Zoya called out hoping Shafaq would get the hint and back off.

"Haan kya hua?" she lazily called out from the other room.

"Kuch nahi... Mujhe Shafaq kahin nazar main nahin aa rahi thi isilye maine soch woh shayad aapke saath ho." She said as she smirked at Shafaq's irritated face before leaving to gather outside the room for dinner.

"Bhaiya yahan par khaana milega kya?" Zoya asked the receptionist.

Suddenly she was pulled back by somebody and was being dragged towards the lift.

"Allah Miya, what's wrong with you Asad?" she asked angrily as she tried calming her frantic heartbeats.

"Can I ask you the same thing? I mean what were you doing outside there at this time?" he asked seriously as he locked her into his room.

"Mujhe bhook lagi thi toh main receptionist wale se poochne gayi thi!" she replied as if it was the most obvious thing in the world!

"Ya Allah! Save me! And help this girl by giving her some brains!" he prayed dramatically.

"Why trouble Allah for that? I'm sure your darling Shafaq must be boasting with all the brains of the world!" she said angrily.

"Zoya! Stop being kiddish! And it's not safe to ask anyone for food! What if they mix something and give?" he asked annoyed at her behaviour.

"Toh?! Why do you care?"

"Zoya!" he warned.

"Asad! And even i know my name!"

"Stop it! I have said sorry and you are dragging it unecessarily!"

"I'm not! You're!

"You!" he said as he pulled her closer by her waist.

"Stop it! Not now!" she said as she blushed.

The next day morning they finally reached Bhopal to see all the festivities in full swing.

The house swarming with people like bees and everyone running around.

"Yeh phool yahi lagaane hai aur yeh tokri mujhe de dena."

"Aree bhaijaan yeh lagaya kyun nahi hain? Laiye, mujhe dijiye!"

"Arey! Aa gaye! Chalo jaldi jao aur naashta karlo! Asad beta tum bhi naashta karke jao!" Razia ordered.

"Ji nahi khala. Mujhe chalna chahiye! Allah Hafiz!" he said as he walked back to the car.

"Razia, tumhe toh sachme ek bohot accha hai damaad mila hai! Par voh jo ladki thi uske saath voh mujhe bilkul pasand nahi aayi!" khala said.

"Aise kuch nahi hai! Voh meri behen jaisi hai aur bohot hi acchi hai!" Humeira replied angrily.

"Humeira shaant ho jao! Main baat karungi khala se! Jao!" Razia told her in a bid to calm her down.

"Ya allah! Humeira, sir ko dhak toh lo?! Aur yeh kaisi behudgi hai? Na salaam na koi tameez? Meri gulaabo toh hai badi pyaari si! Zara seekho kuch!" she said angrily and shocked.

Humeira just walked out knowing it qould be futile talking to her.

"Aap bhethiye! Tab tak main aapke liye naashta bhejti hoon!" Razia said as she too escaped from her sister's devilish ideas.

In the evening:

All the guests had assembled to witness one of the most grand engagement of the year. Humeira looked splendid in her velvet lehanga with heavy embroidery work and asad looking devilishly handsome though not matching.

Zoya wore one of her lehangas as she looked like an angel as she walked around smilingly in her creamish white lehanga with a net pattern.

"Humeira, relax!"

"What relax? You be in my position and then you'll understand!"

"Someone call Zoya! Only she can help her calm down."

"Zoya! Where were you? I need you! I'm feeling nervous."

"Relax humi! Take a deep breath."

Humeira took a deep breath as everyone watched amused that the same advice given few seconds back was discarded and now she was doing the same.

"Ab just enjoy the ceremony! Finally your dream is coming true!" Zoya said with a hint of pain in her voice.

"You plan to murder everyone here with your looks? Love asad!" he had typed it to zoya.

She smiled as she blushed when Asad winked at her.

Had she lost it? Here he is getting engaged and she is nicely flirting with him? What was she doing? Soon they would get married and probably have a few kids but what about her? What would she do?

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That's all for today! Will be hopefully updating soon! Do leave behind your precious comments and likes! Will get back to the remaining comments!

Thank you all so far for co-operating! A few more weeks and you guys will get faster and longer updates!


Aashka

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