AsYa SS:Forgotten Melody Updated 08/01/2017 pg 103

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hydrogurl001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

love it so far! please do add me to your PM list if not there already!

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-Candz-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

RES

Awww I feel really special that you added me in your dedication...that is a rocking banner too BTW and I will UNRES as soon as I read it! 😃

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Okay I'm commenting after reading the first two chapters. I know the second chapter is a couple pages after this but since I read them both at once, I will comment on everything I read thus far.

First off, THANK YOU so much! OMG you added me in dedication to your story. I know you loyally read mine so thank you for that also! 😳

On the story, BNHH was one of my fav AsYa moments because it changed everything and I love how you're putting your own stamp on the scene and turning it into what you imagined it to be.

I love the well of emotion and the angst especially in the aftermath of their intoxication. You took the events of that night in a different direction but it makes it more emotional, because the night's events were so intimate! So then the bus accident events just makes it all the more angsty especially him running past her because in the show Zoya knew he ran past her to Tanveer and she never brought it up.

Great stuff so far! Good work! 😃 Looking forward to what happens next. 👍🏼

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Ridzi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

I love Asya but after reading your story I fell in love with them more than ever
First of all the banner is great...Loved it
Secondly your writing style is just so amazing. You write so beautifully that each word touched my heart
Thirdly the scene you described is what I needed in the serial but I don't think they could have shown the scene so perfectly like you did
Plz plz plz update soon
I really want to read more of it
And do pm me as I don't want to miss it

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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jazz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

OMG

Simply awosome

Read something goood after like ages

Brought old memories back

Amazing amazing job

Loved each line

I was jus like plzz hope it won't finish soon

I didn't even scroll my phone screen to check lol

Plzzz update soon plllxzzz

I read Mrilani's ss today as well

Lovely work

Two writings on that beautiful episode wow

We r lucky readers eh lol

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Oishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

wow.. thats a great start.. very well written.. eagerly waiting for the next part... ASYA's interaction with each other <3

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

That was so good. Absolutely amazing and so beautifully written.

Please update soon and please pm me for the next part.

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FarhaadkiMahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

wow .i always imagine thos type story after bnhh epi .
n u give such wonderfull story
update soon

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

it was a fantastic start...i loved it...asya r face to face now...i am really curious to know how they'll sort things out...
continue soon

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Aashka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Wow...! that was truly fab...! The way u have written too beautiful...! I want more...! And more..! And more...!

Dont stop and please update soon...!

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