AsYa FS ~ 5 Days of a Road Trip *Completed* - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ok let me go there and will spam after taking a shower 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Mina di! Loving this new story! I wonder why I didnt get your PM earlier! I just got it for Part 3!
I had read the introduction on the FF forum long back, but the rest of the parts are amazing! When are you updating next? Cant wait to read the next part 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Mrina its a cute romantic update
I love it so much
Pls update soon
I already buddy u,but u didnt pm me
Pls accept my buddy request & do pm for next update
That kisses & hugs was mindblowing😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

@Mahima - Take your time! I know you're busy so unreserve whenever you get time! 😃




Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh

Awww... Awww... Awww... Awww

I swear I kept doing this throughout the update... It was that sweet... They are adorable!!
I loved the ride... It was so sweet.. Specially when she slept through the journey on his back... So romantic!!
The dhaba scene was cute.. Zoya is just so cute!!
I loved the hug and kiss... And the balcony moment was so,romantic and sweet... They sounded like a couple in love.. It was as if they have been together all their life...
Loved every word of it...
Looking forward to the next chapter... Update soon... And PM me please!!



@Nitya - Thank you so much for enjoying this FF! 😳
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosamale

You didnt pm me Mrina😡 once again😡

Leave it. ab tho ye teri aadat hogayi😭
Coming to the update, i was blushing throughout you know.
how i wish i had someone like Asad
I could only imagine KSG as this Asad😳
He will look really good as a photographer like in Teri Meri Love Stories😃


Nahi PM bheja meri maa!
Well, Raghuveer was the insipiration to this story! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..SheWolf..

lalala this kameeni is here :P 😆

So I just finished the first part and lol I actually dint expect that girl to be Zoe xD but she's sort of cool and independent and all and she's travelling on her own I like that and Asad is actually a cutie in this story :P give him to me and I'll live happily ever after with him and okay so they're in Jaipur and *ahem* in the same room.. lemme read aage xD
and for the second GIVE ME ASAD 😛 😆 I want him b/c he's so cute and aww that hug <3 and there these two are attracted to each other.. their journey and everything was so cute and lol haha Zoe wanted to touch him 😆 and now they're going to travel back together too! Yay xD psht make them fall in love :P already 😆
I sound like a psycho with my Asad chant but he's so cute and so sweet! He actually drove her to Mumbai in the middle of the night and they're stop at the dhaba was so cute 😆 sleepy Zoe was cute and Asad ashkkgfhjkjgjk AND THEY'RE BOTH SALMAN FANS. AND I LOVE IT!
and he admitted that he loves her :D haha and that hug and that kiss <3 and all those cute moments afterwards :') its so ashkkgddgj xD AND they're sharing a bed too ;) are they going to wake up all tangled in each others arms? ☺️ 😆
psht make them confess soon or I'm going to chori Asad ;P 😆


OMG! LOOK WHO COMMENTED!!!!! 😲

*pinches myself* 😵

W*F! NIDHI??? IS IT REALLY YOU???? 😲

🤣

Okay, I'm not giving you this Asad coz this Asad is a fragment of my imagination and not yours! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you all of you for your lovely comments! i have read them all and you guys have got a smile on my face.

A huge welcome to all my lovely New Readers! 🤗

I'm really low on time isliye quoting and replying to each and every comment will not be happening from now onwards.

Regarding the PMs, You guys are stalkers coz I still haven't PMed regarding Day 3 due to internet problems. I'll be PMing now! 😆

This Story will get over in another 2 Parts and an Epilogue to add onto so be happy and enjoy this romantic ride!

@Silent Readers, Daya karke ek comment kar diya karo!

Much Love to all of you! ❤️

Mrina
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 3...

Nice.. he is ready to leave her side...
Salman khan fan...
so sweet he holding from bike ride to stop
for food and continue..
asad realize he like her...
sweet hug and kiss...lovely
and then asad made his first move..
he hug her from behind...
share the bed... she trust him...

now confession ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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