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Posted: 11 years ago
oh god i m really touched by ur responses... Ill update today
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Awesome!

Please Pm me when u update!

ill pm u for sure
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Niyati r u busy or something

its been so long u updted

i was busy dear... Bt now ill update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

didu
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plz update na!

ill try to update soon
n gosh u started :p
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Originally posted by: riddhi1206

<font size="6">update bhi kardo
please update it didu!
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me single font me samaj sakti hun :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

i was busy dear... Bt now ill update


OK but plz updt soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
jas u 2... Well ill update
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Finally update is here.
credits in last post.
AsYa FF- Hona tha pyaar???

credits: "niya sweety"
CHAPTER 18 A

morning.
sunrays make her wake. As she opened her eyes she saw a naked man standing infront of her. He was asad. She got scared.
she checked her clothes n her body. Asad 🤣
asad:"jangali billiyon a shikar me nai krta" n she 😡
zoya:"tum yahan kya kar reh ho, guards gurds" some guards came bt not not even touched him. "wat the hell, take him out, ri8 now" while asad smirked, guards stood with head down.
asad:"ye mujhe kuch nai karenge moti" n he lied on her bed.
zoya:"dadu, dadu" dadu came in. "dekhie dadu ye aa gaya, ise bahar nikalie" she chuckled in anger. Asad wore his shirt n greeted dadu.
asad:"salaam dadu" dadu softly brushed his hairs.
zoya:"ye sab kya ho ra he"...
FLASHBACK
when asad was thrown out. He sat there till midni8. Dadu had a habit of mrng walk at 4. Then he saw asad sleeping out.
dadu:"beta kaun ho tum" his voice made asad wake.
asad:"dadu salaam me asad hun mo... Zoya ka shauhar, usne mujhe bahar nikal dia" dadu 😆
dadu:"are beta vo bht ziddi he, use manana itna asaan nai" asad huffed.
dadu was bound he couldnt tell him how much zoya cared for him, he was bound with her sake.
asad:"ab mujhe nai lejaenge"
dadu:"beta ye tumhara hi ghar he chalo" they went in.
NOW
dadu:"zoya aj tumhara radiation treatment (look i dont know much abt medical so if mistake plz forgive me) he, tum ya to isse puri tarah theek ho jaogi ya fir.." dadu got tears.
zoya:"dadu ap bhi na, jo allah ne socha he use kaun badal sakta he. Chalie" they came out n saw asad in car.
zoya:"tum kahan aa reh ho"
asad:"madam muft ki roti me nai todta, thoda kaam kr ra hun, chalie" dadu stopped zoya frm arguing n they left.
her treatment was done. Bt reports were to come after 4 days,
zoya came out n was about to fall cz of hard operation wen asad holded her n took her in his arms.
zoya:"choro mujhe"
asad:"ab hili na to ek thappad lagega" zoya made puppy face n went with him. Dadu came after them.
zoya was in room. "ya allah plz asad ko mujhse dur kro, vrna mere jaane..." she stopped fr the first time. Now she was hoping for life.
after 3 days
in evening dadu n asad were having tea.
dadu:"asad use bta do tum usse kitna pyaar krte ho" asad drooped his glass.
asad:"pyaar.. Dadu mene kabhi socha hi nai"
dadu:"to jao beta use btao"
asad went to zoya. She was in backyard fleeing cool air wen asad distracted her.
asad:"zoya mujhe kuch kehna tha" she turned n polietely nodded.
asad:"zoya I LOVE U" she just stood with no words.
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Not yet completed, check below
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Credits:"reema di"
CHAPTER 18 B
Zoya was confused, she dint know how to react at his confession.
asad:"moti serious kyun ho gai i was just kidding" he 😆 "shakal dekh apni zara," he 🤣 zoya relaxed as that was only a simple joke.
she can never bear his love going in vain, if she goes.
zoya:"duniya badal jaegi tu apna kaminapan mt chorio" she kicked him n left.
asad was laughing wen suddenly tears took his eyes.
asad:"i really love u zoya, or ye sach he. Bt u dont love me, so i'l never let u knw my feeling" he was crying wen a hand of love was brushed on his head.
asad:"dadu aap" dadu sat beside him.
dadu:"kya karoge beta, use kabi nai bataoge"
asad:"vo mujhe dekhna tak nai chahti, ek baar use theek hote dekh lun, fir chup chap uski zindagi se chala jaunga" dadu took him in his embrace.
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zoya sat blank on bed.
zoya:"allah kya me itni buri hun ki asad ko aj tak mujhse mohbat nai hui..." she smiled "me janti hun meri zindgi kam he lekin agar vo mujhse mohbt krta to, ap bhi mujhe bakshke. Lekin ab..." she cried.
suddenly the room went dark. N some sound effects started there. She slowly movely out of bed.
zoya:"asad,, dadu, ap he kya" she could hear footsteps. She was unavle to see her own hands.
asad entered. Bt was silent.
zoya:"is this u asad" asad lighted lighter n show her his head with blood.
zoya:"ye tumhe kya hua"
asad:"me mar chuka hun zoya" zoya felt scary as well as upset.
zoya:"dimag kharab he tumhara" she threw pillow on him.
asad:"khidki se bahar dekho meri laash" zoya just ran to window, n could see blood profusing frm a body bt couldnt clealy see whose dat.
zoya:"ye ..k... Kya bakwaas he" she started going to her bed.
asad:"me mar gaya hun zoya .." zoya was not scared of him bt of darkness n body that she saw.. Even this ghost was not visible.
he approached her.
he approached her. Zoya:"asad naiii" she was left in horror bt then realised lights r on n asad n dadu standing 🤣.
zoya ran to asad, asad thought he is going to get a slap. Bt much to his surprise zoya hugged her tight.,
zoya:"as...asad koi kaha tum ma..." she sobbed. Asad hugged her back n smiled at her innocense, bt very next moment she realised it was a prank.
she tightly slapped him, "ye mazak tha, dadu dont u know i m scared of dark then also" asad touched his cheek in pain.
asad:"isse better to mar hi jata" zoya again slapped him. "ab kya kia, mare hi jaa ri he"
zoya:"bolna asan he na mar jata, kitna mushkil he karna jante ho" she cried "apno ka dard socho tumhare jaane ke baad." asad was left moaned "kitna dard hota he jab apno ko khud se dur krna hota he" she cried hard n hugged dadu.
just then asad's phone rang,
asad:"wat?? R u serious, i mean i dont bealive it yaar!! Thanks bye." asad kept phone n took zoya in his arms.
asad:"tu bilkul theek ho gai zoya, abi doc. Mark ne btaya,, r u absolutely f9 now" zoya was confused happy.
dadu:"kya sach.. Ya allah tera shukriya" he came to zoya, asad kept her down n dadu hugged her," meri bachchi theek he" zoya was filled with joy.
they were busy in their talks wen zoya realised asad was no where.
zoya:"dadu asad kahan he"
dadu:"vo gaya zoya, hamesha ke lie," then he narrated wat he told him.
zoya was shocked that he love her. She smiled inwardly n decided to go to his love before he leaves.

PRECAP: asya high voltage romance...
done!! Do like n comment.
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Update for
RIDDHI, ASHWARIYA, JAS
Edited by KaBhilove07 - 11 years ago

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