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Trying!!!😃
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😊Hey, y'all!!! (By the way I'm not from Texas)😆 Here I am with chapter 2 hope y'all like it!!!😃
Chapter 2-A Conversation with
Him?

"Marry me Zoya... Marry me-----"
"ZOYA WAKE UP!!!" I quickly open up my to see who waked me up from my beautiful dream. I ope
n them only to reveal a blurry image of Haider. I rub my eyes, yawn, and yell at Haider real loud for disturbing my lovely dream!!!
"Allah miya what's wrong with you Haider, why did you wake me up!!!" Only to be yelled right back by him!
"Zoe there's nothing wrong with me, there's something wrong with you!!! Today is the first day of college, don't you have to get ready!!! Shit!!! I forgot!!! Allah miya what's wrong with me, how could I forget!!! I take a look at t
he clock and even before Haider could say anything else, I make a dash towards the bathroom!!!
"You are such a crazy girl, chutki!!!" I could hear Haider bhaijaan say.
"I heard that bhaijaan!!!" I yell from the bathroom!
Quickly, I get ready and head downstairs.
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"Zoya beti, hurry up!!! "Your brothers are waiting for you in the car!" My mom practically screams!!!
"What!!! But I'm hungry!!!" I whine.
"Well you should've thought about that earlier when you were off in your own world while sleeping right?!!!"Says my dad.
"Fine!" I say in my best annoying nineteen year old voice!
I head for our car where my two brothers are impatiently waiting. I make a mental note to not say anything in the car or my brothers will yell at me again for making them late.
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Quietly I sit in the passenger seat next to my brother Haider, while he drives, way above the speed limit breaking a hundred traffic laws to reach college!!! I almost made it without talking but like always Ayaan has to piss me off!!!
"You know I was right you do have big feet, if you can't even rush fast enough to reach college on time!!!" Ayaan says.
I try my best to ignore him and Haider also gives me a look to ignore him, but he keeps on blabbering mean things to me!!! Finally when I can't take it anymore I give him a bloody hell of a reply!!!
"You know what I do have big feet but you have a hell of a big mouth if you don't shut up!!!" I yell right in his face!!!
Ayaan was just about to give me a hard time once more but luckily Haider bhaijaan comes to my rescue!
"Ayaan I think we've reached and, great we still have ten minutes to spare!!!" Haider says with a hint of a taunt in his voice. Ayaan gives a "I'll get you back" look to Haider and I, gets off, and angrily slams the door! After Ayaan's little scene, Haider and I make way into the gates of Princeton and search to find our friends.
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Haider finally found his friends, so he
left, but I'm still trying to spot my gang. Suddenly I hear a loud sound. I turn around and see... ASAD AHMED KHAN kneeling down!!! Allah miya he looks even more hot up close!!!My hands become really sweaty and I already feel my whole body getting drenched in sweat. But then a question popped in my mind. Why is he kneeling down?!!! I wipe my sweaty palms off and perceive the whole picture properly. Asad is kneeling down, on the university grounds, in front of me, with books all over. Oh, duh Zoya, he dropped his books, that's where the noise came from, and is kneeling down to pick them up. I quickly give myself a face palm and start helping Asad picking up his books. I extend my hand towards one of his books while I feel my hand with his, and feel a spark ignite!!! We both go through a long staring session and I don't know, I think there was something wrong with my ear but I could hear a song playing (mithwa ishq pe zohir nahi)! After about three seconds of our staring session he picks up his books and extends his hand for a handshake! I gladly accept it and introduce myself while vigorously shaking his hands.
"Hi my name is Zoya Farooqui!"
"Asad, Asad Ahmed Khan, thanks."
I again start to fret and
feel nervous, and my nervousness is not a good thing, I'm warning you!!!
"No problemo, sorry I meant problem so anyways it was nic- I mean it was amazing to meet you! So I should really find my friends because if I don't they'll kill me!!! I mean they won't kill me because obviously they aren't murders! Wait actually when we were little we did play a murder game, so I guess they can be called murders. But they aren't really murders in real life!!! So when I mean kill I acctually mean they'll be really mad at me, and when I mean mad they wont talk to me for many days and then our parents will get involved. For your information when my parents get invloved it is not a good thing. Yeah, but still we are best friends and they care for me a lot!!! When I say a lot,
I really mean a lot like oddles, and oodles!!! Hey didn't oodles sound like noodles? Do you like noodles? Anyways, I mean like if something happens to me they'll all get sentimental!!! Hey, don't you think that sentimental is such a weird and bazaar word? It's like sen-ti-men-tal, hey I just realized the word mental is in the world sentimental!!! HA HA HA isn't that funny!!!"
I go on and on with my rambling, like talking about the history of lollipops and other crazy stuff!!!While Asad is probably giving me a "what is wrong with you women" look!!! Finally I decided to give my reason for my continuous rambling.
"Um, I'm sorry for my rambling it's just that when I'm really nervous I tend to ramble and talk really really fast!"
I was just about to turn and w
alk away but my crush just has to give me another opportunity to get stuck in a nervous situation again!!!
"So you're nervous because of me huh?" He asks with a tint of mockery!
I was sweating all of over when suddenly the bell came to save my day!!! "I think I should go!" I said after the bell rang, and ran away to the first day speech of the principal. I'm glad that I barely survived with my first conversation with him!!!

Yup you guessed it I'm done with chapter 2!!! 😆How did y'all like it!!! 😕Once again, sorry for my errors!😭Want a update soon? 😃Well you know what to do comment and like away!!!😳 Hey you guys was that long enough, I tried to but I was sort of busy cause it's my last day of spring break!!!😡








Edited by Ami34 - 11 years ago
-AsYaHolic- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great yaar
Update soon
thanks for the pm 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the PM and this was awesome and cute,
a breath of fresh air, its great that you've chosen a different setting,
college and teenage angst makes for a beautiful backdrop 😳
Now I really want to know what Asad's thinking about
blabber-mouth-nervous Zoya. Is he in the same classes as her?
That would be great.
Keep writing my dear 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
HEY DEAR

I JUST GOT TO READ YOUR STORY
AND GUESS WHAT, IT WAS AMAZING😳
BUT TOO SHORT 😭

PLZ UPDATE SOON AND DO MAKE IT AS LONG AS YOU CAN
COS I LOOOVE LONG UPDATES

PLZ PM ME NEXT PART
ALL THE BEST
Edited by nilorina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg tht was super cute
Loved it sooo much
Haha tht exactly me lol :)
Sentimental isnt tht funny
No but ur convos are lol
Continue really really quickly now
Cant w8 :)
Ami34 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MissReadingFaye

Thanks for the PM and this was awesome and cute,

a breath of fresh air, its great that you've chosen a different setting,
college and teenage angst makes for a beautiful backdrop 😳
Now I really want to know what Asad's thinking about
blabber-mouth-nervous Zoya. Is he in the same classes as her?
That would be great.
Keep writing my dear 😳



Thanks!!!😳

We shall see what Asad is thinking pretty soon!!!😆

Yup Asad will be in the same classes as Zoya!!!😉

Sure will!!! 😃

Ami34 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SprinklesOfLove

Omg tht was super cute
Loved it sooo much
Haha tht exactly me lol :)
Sentimental isnt tht funny
No but ur convos are lol
Continue really really quickly now
Cant w8 :)



Thanks!!!😃

Yup that's me also!!!😳

Really, I thought my conversations were pretty cheesy?😕

I'll try!!!⭐️

Edited by Ami34 - 11 years ago
Ami34 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilorina

HEY DEAR


I JUST GOT TO READ YOUR STORY
AND GUESS WHAT, IT WAS AMAZING😳
BUT TOO SHORT 😭

PLZ UPDATE SOON AND DO MAKE IT AS LONG AS YOU CAN
COS I LOOOVE LONG UPDATES

PLZ PM ME NEXT PART
ALL THE BEST



Thanks!!!😃

Sorry!!!😭

I'll try!! 😊

Sure thing!!!⭐️
Ami34 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ruby794

Great yaar

Update soon
thanks for the pm 😃



Thanks!!!😳

I'll try!!!⭐️

Thanks for reading!!!😃

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