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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

*blush* blush*blush*..
Nd tht was fabulous updt bubble...
So so romantic nd amzng prt..

1st Congo for new thread..
Totally 11 threads..
Wow truly deserved..

Kya kahoon updt k baaremein..
Tht was perfect.. That's it..
She did wear jeans.. *face plam* hmph..
Iska kch nai ho sakta..
Loved zoya's confession..
Loved the way she did it..
Nd asad again confessed his feelings for her..
He not emotionally challenged anymore..

Hmmm Paris trip..
Fully month..

Hmm i wish u write more abt their married life iqra..

Nd its ended..
Evry gud thing comes to an end..
Plz plz soon strt another work..
Loll be waiting for ur pm..

Thnk u so mch sch a lvly story dear..
Thnks for the pm..

Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Resss

ITS HAD BEEN A BEAUTIFUL JOURNEY WID 'OUR LIVES ENTWINED'

THNK U BUBBLE FR GIVING ME THE OPPORTUNITY TO HIT LIKE LIKE TO EVERY CHAPPI..N GV MY BEST COMMENTS HERE...

TIS FF VL REMEMBERED BCZ OF MANY REASONS:

1. BEST PUNCH LINES EVER...

go n brush ur teeth..😲😆

if u want dowRy frm my father ..go n tell him straight...😆

MASHALLAH👏

2. I LOVE ZOYA MORE THN ASAD..

mean i love him so much..aftrall hz my ksg☺️..bt dis tym I was wid zoya..😳

3. AYAAN WID LOADS OF BRAINS..

i love ayaan here more thn any other ff..bcz he tried to sort thngs out in his isshtyle..😉

4. DEDICATION:

u dedicate whole ff to mahu only...😡 i hate u fr that..

N LAST BT NOT THE LEAST..

UR FRST 16+ WRK

ws teasing u constantly that u cnt wrt 16+ wrk..bt u dn it bubble...n its was so beautiful...👏

M SO PROUD OF U...🤗

NOW M WAITING FR UR NXT FF...BHULNA NH...😈

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Res fr my comment agn

I res this place only to scold u..

hw dare u think abt quitting...

😡

I told u dat u r a wrtr hu cn designed n wrt FFs..

huh..if u vl stop writng FFs on asad zoya(KABHI)...

vl nvr read or comment on ur OS, TS or even ss...

PROMISE..

vo b BLUE WALA...

😡😡

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

unres

i am so so so sorry bubba.. for being so late to unres my comment...

i am unresing it when the epilogue already got updated

anyway, coming to the update,

i am so so happy that you have dedicated this last chapter to us 😳😳😳

and you don't have to check the wow list... you didn't miss anyone 😆😆😆

the update was sooo ROMANTIC 😳😳☺️

the most awaited 16+ SR was there ☺️☺️

i am very proud of you bubba!! 👏👏

and talking about your decision of not writing FF's anymore... i would say, i am sure that we will once again get to read beautiful stories written by you when KSG comes back 😳😳😳

love you loads bubba 🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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Ankita Grover

@HoityToity

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

congo on new thread

lovely update

enjyed reading every bit of it

it ended 😲

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

The END 😭 😭
lovely update bubble..loved it Lot
SR 4lines me hogaya.. 😆 👏 .. main imagine karloongi...Imaginations pe Zor nahi 😉 ..woww Paris fr 1 month
wat should I say abt this update.. its perfect.. my babies got ..perfect ending..
the specialiality of this FF is ur cliffy endings, AAK's notes, ur comic sense n Zoya ki paagalpan fr singing, ur amazing writing skills...

Paradise is not a place,

its a state of mind !

And this was their paradise, their own special kind of Heaven; a perfect one indeed 👏 khushi ki aansu aying... y do u write so beautifully CQ

I vl miss u loads... 🤗 ur d first writer whom I got interacted wth..I love d way u interact with ur readers..ASYA confessed their lov after 10yrs.. OK let me confess now..

After KSG exit I decided 2 quit IF n abt 2 clear my inbox n there I saw pm's of this FF which I never read..I don't remember how I got ur Pm n how ur in my buddy list ..then I read this FF.. u know tbh I really slapped myself fr not opening ur msg..This FF stopped me from quitting IF..I never read any FF before I usually come here fr spoilers n pics..then I read all ur stories,, ASYA in Italy is my most favorite...mentally slapped myself so many times fr not reading this beautiful piece of ur work..
Ur one of d most talented writers..thu thu..n I'm ur big fan ..trust me
keep writing n pls pm me whenever u write... All d Best fr your exams...
🤗 ❤️ 🤗
P.S:thisz my longest post in IF 😉 I love u soo more Bubble

Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Congo fr d new thread 😊

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sonia555

@sonia555

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Congrats on the new thread bubba 🥳

Loved the update 😳😳😳

That is soo true loads of weird aunty's do that 🤔😆

They finally said it properly 😳😆😆

Gaffur said that 😲🤣

I thought his wife always tells him what to do and say 🤔😆

She couldn't have been the first one 😲😳

He loves her cucking frazily 😆

I'm sure i've heard this bit before 'I know I am lovable' 🤔😆

Naughty asad she was talking and he was touching her 😳😆

They kissed 😳😳

What has zoya done to MY Asad 😲

Less talking more doing 😲☺️🤣

He was staring at her like that 😲😳

Only zoya can wear jeans under her lehenga 😆

How lucky is this silly Zoya 😡🤣🤣

I still can't believe that you wrote all of this 😲☺️

What 😲 thank you 😲😆

Ooohhh he's taking her to paris 😳

And whaaattt zoya has a meeting with a ghost that wanted my baby 😡 😲🤣

What can they do in that one month ☺️

It seemed like he wanted to carry on 😳😆

Awww his notes are sooo cute 😳

Ohh so it's two months then what are they going to do in those two months?? 😲😳😆

Loved the last bit 😳😆

Now why did this have to be the last part

And awww you dedicated it to us lot 😳

You dedicated the whole story to maha 😡😆

So now you have to dedicate one to me and the rest of them will want a story dedicated to them so you can never stop writing now bubba 🤣

We'll give you a short break for you exams though 😆

And you better not leave us 😒

I'm going to read the epilogue now and there better be a you know what scene in it 😳😆

And now i'm shocked 😲😆

I wrote a long comment 😲🤣

Edited by sonia555 - 11 years ago

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Congrats on you new thread...

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-Genelia-

@-Genelia-

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Holy shit...

U ASS!!!!!!

U cmpltd ur story...wooobie

A perfect lovely end

Loved tht trick prt specially

Cngrts my darling

Love u

Btw vn r u postng ur new stry??

Waiting eagerly

Love u loads...

1 of d best stories uv written... Iv re-Read it quite a many times n i guess m goin to do tht again...

N u dare nt b honoured...

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