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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2..

Dilshad sad.. all her fight end with mariam
running got back her strength
listening to Omar about zoya...the innocent most suffered one...

it take lot of strength to get asad say yes..
and he did for the sake of their mother..
save from from humiliation...

those days ..quiet common thing people will do...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3...

First of all sudden wedding..pretty scary

and zoya feel this big punishment...

at least their try to cheer up..

there few who care for her more and love..her

including her grandfather...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3 / 2

Zoya knowledge about wedding and relationship is nil...

to innocent...

is going to grow up from there to...😲

hmm ..this going to work out...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MsGrumpyShumpy

The plot seems nice but zoya shud be a lil more mature. She is 19 not 15. Dsnt matter how protected she was every person by the age of 19 matures automatically. So i hope u keep that in mind next time. Update soon.





hmm.. then is kind of hurting her and her emotions..
coz of the understanding she dont have...

hope there is a reason... or change going to happen..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farru786

NOTE:I can understand tat its difficult to digest tat in today's world where Der is soo much exposure about physical aspect of relationship its difficult to be unknown to such feelings but it happens I myself is an example of it I dint knew tat a man and women share such an intimate relationship until I was 20 its possible bcoz in my houz v hav never been exposed to any kind of physical intimacy as its considered forbidden in many Muslim families,mine being one so its on experience I am writing its a fact not just any liberty I am taking as a writer .zoya has been to girls school and colg for entire life.never had friends who would give her such info she is completely unaware of her outside surroundings wich the biggest challenge to asya's relationship in future.to understand zoya's character u need to keep this I'm mind.I hope its clear now if u have any doubts u can ask.
Thanks for ur comments.




hmm... okay agree... my understanding queit late to...
but went i look back other young ones much more advance then me..
their age.. i was still .. being innocent..😆😆

since u have valid answer... will accept it
thanks..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

hmm ..small tip make your fonts little bit bigger..
and keep some space...

will be easy to read...

no offense just suggestion
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Spamming your tread...

update soon...
😆
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Chapter 4...

Nice to know their married...
asad feel guilty... marrying someone so young

but made a vow... will give is best..

Omar.. most happiest man... the things he wanted to do for
zeenat fulfill through zoya..
he like asad..

Zoya .. all this to fast to handle..yet
when her friends got the news...she is getting married
their there to make it..
for teasing...

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