From eye of a fan turned critic of QH

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Disappointment is an understatement for today's episode, I just can't believe I was once an ardent fan of the same show.
Unwanted scenes:
1. Tannu monologue before the mirror, obsolutely not required.
2. Zoya talk with Tanveer, do we need it? I didn't think so.
3. Asad receiving guests and talking to Zoya on phone, didn't add much value.

Under baked scenes:
1. Razia, Zoya and Humaira convo, CVs should have given this scene more screen space with better dialogues to make it more impactful.
2. Shireen's sensible question deserved little bit more comforting response from Khan sisters.
3. Reducing Asad and Haider to mere eye candies with one liners.

Badly executed scenes:
1. Billi seemlessly tying up Razia and having enough time throwing her in bath tub to die before Asad arrived but she was not able to manage breaking the cell phone before going down for Nikah.
2. Billi hiding cell phone in her shoe and limping to gain unwanted attention ...choli could have been a better option for it.
3. Red color water in the bath tub, is that for screen impact or MUMMANI dress color was being faded into the water?

My take on how the episode should have been shot:

Scene 1. Mummani walking past Tannu's room to lure her and the scene continues as is until MUMMANI tricked and recorded the confession, Tannu trips Razia and while she is busy tying Razia's mouth, Razia sneekily grabs the phone and forwards confession to Humaira's cell and then puts back the cell on floor, Tannu manages to lock Razia in bathroom to die and comes out and destroy the phone and go down stairs in style for nikah with atmost content that she has won the game.

Scene 2. Razia is at verge of death and remembers the flashback with Zoya and Humzie. FB: Razia apologizes to Zoya that she did what ever she did to protect Humaira but now that both sisters are happy, she too has come to terms with reality and now she want to help them in their cause in getting evidence against Tannu to protect the family.

Scene 3. Humzie shows confession video to Zoya and at the same time they notice Tannu waking down the steps, they get alarmed of Razia's safety and calls her back but as they can't reach her via phone, both rushes upstairs and rescues Razia.

Scene 4. Zoya informs Asad about evidence via phone, Quazi sahab asks if he is ready to take Billi as his wife and Asad responds saying No and the billi revelation follows as per the precap.

How difficult it is to make the episode a bit sensible than creating unwanted drama ...anyways ...I am just being a critic I guess.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The writers have never handled the Tanveer character well...EVER. The constant need to make her the smartest person in the room has managed to ruin the story and its main players! And I don't get it - Tanveer has to be the worst written character on ANY television show and Amrapali the worst actress...why so much love for her?
Oh well at least she is exposed tomorrow. Can she go to jail this time?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: delena90

The writers have never handled the Tanveer character well...EVER. The constant need to make her the smartest person in the room has managed to ruin the story and its main players! And I don't get it - Tanveer has to be the worst written character on ANY television show and Amrapali the worst actress...why so much love for her?

Oh well at least she is exposed tomorrow. Can she go to jail this time?


CVs Billi obsession is beyond my comprehension but to be fair to CVs, billi character in the beginning as a catalyst for ASYA love made sense but then she was stretched beyond need and now she is undisputed lead of QH against viewers wishes.

She may go to jail for a brief period but only to escape and kill ASYA and to continue her perennial presence through the generation leap ...in other words, I have a hunch that Billi continues to be part of QH until last day of its airing even if it mean QH takes generation after generation leap.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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^I disagree with you, delena, about Amrapali being a bad actress. I think she's an amazing actress! Her character, though needs some work.
But your plot for today's episode is 10x better than what it truly was. I don't get how hard it is to put together a sensible episode, but I'm not in their shoes I guess...still they could have done a better job, for sure!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well i loved today's episode😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I feel you... I read thru the entire post and I was like this is so much better that what I actually watched in the episode!
The Billi walking with the phone in the shoe was absolutely ridiculous... Why would someone even think of something like this? Elementary kids might have better imagination then the actual scriptwriters of QH - I think I sound mean but truly.. Or maybe they are experiencing the writer's block syndrome, giving them the benefit of doubt.

And I totally agree with Del.

The Tanveer fascination has made her the main focus and everything else revolves around her. The last time I checked, Tanveer wasn't the one involved in the murder of Zoya's mother. And instead of Razia, Tanveer has become the main antagonist in playing with the lives of the protagonist and their family.

So who's the main player here? Tanveer is and would always be..





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Agree whole heartedly what you said.
Don't know what sound more pathetic today, Asad receiving guests, 5 feet petite Tanveer man handling 6 feet stout Razia, Tanveer keeping cell phone in shoes instead of places used by most women, in choli or bottom's rolled up pouch..
They surely could have elaborated the scene where Razia made pact with Zoya and Humaira, but they think we love Tanveer.
Now Amrapali is making Tanveer intolerable or Tanveer is making Amrapali intolerable, Razia has gone through repeated tracks but Alkaji still leave us with awe, so I would say Amrapali is making Tanveer cringe worthy with repeated over used expressions. And they made Tanveer super power (yawn..)
The serial surpassing idiocies by leaps and bounds so much that most of us have turned from fans to critics. Keep up same game PH, and you wont have even critics in us soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved ur post
ur description abt scene is awesome 😃
QH need a good script writer and good director 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved your take. Alas you are not the writer.
But I liked yesterday's episode. Brains, logic keep aside, at least I was not treated to Jaanu Nikaah. And that made me like the episode.

Time is running out. They don't have time for the leads or razia or others.

I;m glad Tannu would be exposed tmrw. And i will have a relaxing weekend.

Still expecting good writing and logic from this team. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am little confused with Gul. QH had amazing first 9 months, if she could put together such a beautiful show in the beginning then why this derailment now? It is not that she don't have the skill in her but looks like on purpose she is making joke out of her own show.

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