The Colour of Love II: #2 Chapter 16 Pg 111

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Oh goodness gracious me.

This is an amazingly written part. Sis, you wrote this when? And you've captured the moments so beautifully! As if I'm reliving the part from when Asad was living it.

Sis remarkable part yet again.

You've truly outdone yourself. And I guess it is good that you think it wasn't so good...imagine when you think it IS good, what sort of beauty would we be lucky enough to read?

MashaAllah Sis.

I'm in love with Zoya.

Coz I'm Asad.

Mera naam ishq.
Tera naam ishq.

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam
Tera naam

Mera naam...
ISHQ.

Mwah sis!

Love it so very much!!!

And love you more!!

Mwah for moo!

Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

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Saima Sis this was so beautiful and I really mean it. Why are you not happy with it?? It was awesome.

Finally Asad knows exactly what has been happening in her life and she even mentioned him. But am curious to know what was in the few pages that are missing in her diary.

Hope there aren't any big secrets that she is hiding from him too.

Thanks for the pm n waiting for the next update too.

Love you sis 🤗

Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago

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Amulya

@Amulya9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

hey saima... lovely update...Zoe ki final chapter of diary..its all about asad 😳 ..I hope seperation track khatam hogaya...make them meet soon...Zoya had gone through so much...all she needs now is asad's love n care.continue soon

Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome update..very well written..keep it up...😊

Thank u so much 😊

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Oh goodness gracious me.

This is an amazingly written part. Sis, you wrote this when? And you've captured the moments so beautifully! As if I'm reliving the part from when Asad was living it.

Sis remarkable part yet again.

You've truly outdone yourself. And I guess it is good that you think it wasn't so good...imagine when you think it IS good, what sort of beauty would we be lucky enough to read?

MashaAllah Sis.

I'm in love with Zoya.

Coz I'm Asad.

Mera naam ishq.
Tera naam ishq.

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam
Tera naam

Mera naam...
ISHQ.

Mwah sis!

Love it so very much!!!

And love you more!!

Mwah for moo!

Now it's my turn to day you are biased lol

Really...

Thank you Einstein, hope ur not being biased as I really not happy with it

Love u too

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Awesome part
thanx for pm

Thank you so much 😊

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Beautifully written...you immerse the reader into the story completely!

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: rajsmi
Beautifully written...you immerse the reader into the story completely!

Thank you

I appreciate your feedback 😊

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Amulya9
hey saima... lovely update...Zoe ki final chapter of diary..its all about asad 😳 ..I hope seperation track khatam hogaya...make them meet soon...Zoya had gone through so much...all she needs now is asad's love n care.continue soon

Thank you Amulya

Yes all she does need is love and affection

It can't be over as soon as that maybe another chapter or so before they do meet