Thrd 5-The Butterflies!Chap-33A, Pg123, 9 May - Page 60

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Here I go.. As I mentioned, I read first three chapters of this story and so there goes my comment for them.. 😊

Chapter 1 :

The beginning scene with rain and her thoughts regarding how she wanted to wait for her prince charming but she was convinced by her family and she felt the jolt when he slipped the ring to her fingers and he had the question in his eyes...but just before Humeira entered , she was almost convinced that she had slowly fallen in love with HIM...😊 after their engagment..

Chapter 2 :

. I loved this update again.. the way he went after her and saved her.. well you sent me to dream land.. 😊She was so very happy to be in his arms and when he pushed her away, she felt awkward.. oh really Zoya ?? and the way he shouted at her and her comment about domineering husband forgetting what she was upto just few minutes before.. Amazing girl...😃

Chapter 3:

The way she asked if he loved somebody else and why he does not believe in love.. was cool.. and when she told just one question.. why don't you call off the wedding.. ?? It is not like you love me or want to be married to me.. .. beautifully written.. If only Zoya knew that he was already in love with her ... and later I also find you fascinating.. great just wow...If you marry me.. I am your king.. charming or not.. from Asad.. OMG he is definitely territorial...Now if you will follow me Ms. Farooqui.. I would like to get married... You are too good at your words...😊

On a serious note.. why don't you think of writing a novel ?? or may be atleast think of giving this story to any movie or TV show maker ?? You will become not only famous but more people will love you... Do give a thought..😊 and Good luck - how about you win a lottery and make a serial of my story. I will be more than thrilled. We can hire KSG and Surbhi😛

and YES UPDATE SOON 😊 ---- This is Request No 3.. 😊 First one was on First comment after previous update and second one was my last comment..

I am loving the reaction and your requests. I will try most definitely

Originally posted by: vinita459

Hey Juliet, Lovely update as usual. I know Asad might have not done anything but I am quite disappointed with him right now. One fight and he decided to go to another woman 😡
I hope things get clear between them soon. Looking forward to read the next chapter 😊

Originally posted by: anu040

Awesome... But plz update soon..

Hope asad didn't do anything stupid

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hey Devika,

Sorry wasn't at home. Grocery shopping Sunday chores.

No worries.. understandable..

Look I wont answer anymore questions because most of you are wrong in the thought process.

The chapter title says it all - IT IS A LEAP OF FAITH for both.

Simple that answers it all.

Well yes.. it answers.. you are the author and you know the story .. but we readers though understand certain things.. we are humans 😭 end up having negative thoughts .. what if ??

You know what I mean and what he got hooked to the story right now ??

No more clues. I will do my best to update but this update has a lot of folds. I need to put it strategically otherwise the charm is gone. I want the readers to be tied till the end.

That is perfectly fine .. don't give any clue and please write whatever you have planned for and I am sure we will enjoy reading it as you have planned to write...😊

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...

Juliet

u need to update

my brains are going crazy

i think i might be having a stroke

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wow tis is wonderfull...

did asad really do that...

eagerly waiting for zoya to react...

luv the way hw first zoya stood by asad n hw she trust him...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

LEAP OF FAITH...
i m taking... trusting u to clear the mess...