Thrd 5-The Butterflies!Chap-33A, Pg123, 9 May

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Juliet.. not fair.. you have got all of us thinking and worrying.. and it is past noon time in Australia.. and you have not yet found time to respond 😭

Request # 7

Hey Devika,

Sorry wasn't at home. Grocery shopping Sunday chores.

Look I wont answer anymore questions because most of you are wrong in the thought process.

The chapter title says it all - IT IS A LEAP OF FAITH for both.

Simple that answers it all.

No more clues. I will do my best to update but this update has a lot of folds. I need to put it strategically otherwise the charm is gone. I want the readers to be tied till the end.

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@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: anopama
u had to burst our bubble didnt u
u give us our 7 and some amazing romance and intimacy
and then u give us this 😭😭😭😭
asad receiving phone calls about his wife and then meeting the man
but he decides to beat the crap out of the man and put some trust in his wife
and then the news report omg omg really asad and cienna 2 days together
I JUST WANT TO KNOW DID HE GO ALL THE WAY WITH HER ?
poor zoya how will she handle his confession did he cheat or was he just
with her cuddling and whatever but I still think that is cheating
he heard her talking about divorce and he went and do that
like what the hell wrong with confrontations dont u see jumping to conclusions
make things go wrong.
oh zoya u must say y did I get a lawyer and fight for him if he did it
update plz now

I hold the same view as you in terms of cheating.

He did go with he. what he did you will have to find out.

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh
I love your story!! It is amazing... You are an truly gifted writer. I just love the twists and turns... The lovemaking... Their love... Their struggles... Everything is so beautifully written... I just want to read the next part now... I wish Asad didn't do the deed with Cienna but I guess he did... Looking forward to the next chapter... And you have 140 likes... :)
10 more to go!! Looks like we are getting an update on Monday!! :p

I hope so too I can write by Monday or Tuesday.

I take time to write I am usually not so quick with typing but if Monday is less stressful at work I will write it up.

I would post by Tuesday though.

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@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: princess101
OMG PLEASE TELLME ASAD DIDNT CHEAT!!!😭
IM SAD NOW

YAAR PLEASE DONT MAKE ASAD CHEAT IF HE DID THEN I DONT KNOW IF HE SHOULD BE FORGIVEN POOR ZOYA 😭

PLEASE TELL ME NOTHING HAPPENED PLEASEEE

POOR ZOYA

NOW ONTO OTHER THINGS

THAT WAS WRITTEN PHENOMENALLY

U ARE A AMZING WRITER

THANX FOR THE PM

AND I WANT A HUGE UPDATE FOR THIS SAD AND DEPRESSING UPDATE

I agree if Asad cheated the marriage should be over. He should not be forgiven.

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@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Juliet.. I read the update again only to find out if we get a clue of the current situation.. and yes those two days..

She deserves the truth Zafar... I want her to know the truth. It's her decision after that...Please!" Asad pleaded frantic. ...

This line got me thinking .. though I trust Asad would have not gone all the way to sleep with Cienna.. but he did go to her .. so it is quite disturbing ..😭I remembered your I don't like you.. the way Asad went to Tanveer in rage and was about to get kissed .. but Zoya had to come and slap him.. Yep I love your suprise element.. so eager to read more..

"Does that mean Cienna is lying."..." Why would she lie?" Screamed the reporters outside Mr.Khanna's office."No further questions? Thank you!" Mr.Khanna exited.

Zoya looked so overwhelmed, so vulnerable, so weak.

<font color="#ff0000">Again this got me thinking did Zoya get to know something ??</font> Even Zafar shouted at Asad How dare you do this to her ??

I was hoping you say that." Asad smiled but there was something unknown that lurked in his statement and his gaze was tormented. "Talk to me." Zoya coaxed kissing his chin lightly.

"Later. You should get some rest. You look exhausted."

Again your words convey that Asad was hurt and something was definitely bothering him.. He had to confess but feared about her reaction..

one more thought to add .. Did Asad go to Cienna only to get those snaps clicked to show Zoya that he will not be left alone when he got to hear about the divorce talk with Zafar ???

I am going crazy thinking about the next update now.. So Please update soon.. Request# 6 I think

PS - NO ONE WILL BUY MY STORY! I HAVE ABOUT 180 Readers who sometimes don't even press like. So I wont risk publishing😆

Asad is feeling guilty for putting Zoya through this. he didn't trust Zoya with Zafar initially so now tables have turned.
<div>Zoya had blind faith with she went public and spoke about Cienna. But she was vulnerable because it took her courage to believe him. Trust is not easy those photos of Asad and cienna disturbed her.

Yes he trying to tell her something. He will in the next update tell her everything. He did spend the two days with Cienna. The photos are not morphs. Asad did not know about those photos till it was published in the news. But he recognized the event when Cienna was in those compromising position with him.

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@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Please update yaar ... am getting a headache thinking about the update. I hope Asad didn't do it. Please 😭 😭😭😭 I don't want Zoya to go through any more pain. Asad I know is already suffering... Please 😭 😭 have some mercy on us...

Pain and suffering comes with turn of life. It is up to Asad if he can take that pain away from her and get her to believe again in his love. If Zoya can give him that trust.

Keep up your hope. I will say something to take your suffering and head ache away.

If you are in love, you oath to remain committed. Fidelity is mandatory.

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@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: ankitabaran
I m still clueless plz give the clue...how long we will wait buddy...i was happy then in previous update asad push the bar girl and said that she is not his zoya so he cannot love her and he also said that he is struck with zoya and not able to move on...so situation was same both the time according to Asad zoya was leaving Asad according to Asad...so why he did this in that point of time also zoya was very married to him only...why he cannot wait till their divorce...

Exactly, Asad has always been a man who claim to only belong to Zoya. So why would he cheat now. What is he guilty about?

But he said the photos are true. Cieanna is also not lying. So what is their story.

I repeat it is the test of Faith.

I will update soon dear. I just need time to write so much will reveal in the next update.

It is difficult to write that unless in a decent state of mind.

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Hi butterfly...
Dont know whr i res..
so this is my straight comment here..
Read this part twice... I must say u are always brilliant the way u explain their emotions..
This is more than that i had ever imagined..
Indeed u r very talented writer
I know this story is all about love n faith.
Kudos to u butterfly👏
Now im at loss of words butterfly..
Let me tell u - that You have once again succeeded in taking my breath away with this perfection 👍🏼
It was an absolute nail biting update.. I was like im sitting in the edge of seat while watching thriller movies, u created the hyperness in me...
I was really scared then i understand this is life, its test of love n trust..
As u said i have full faith in you and in the butterflies..
I know that no villians in this story but its just a bad n worst situation..
Now im curious to know how they will overcome from this..
Asad trusted his zoya in zafar n zoya matter - he handled oman nicely..
Now its zoya's turn..
Im so worried n sad but my butterflies completely trust mu asad n zoya..
I know that u wont break my butterflies - u will make them happy n proud...😳
'well said - 'It's not black or white nor is it fifty shades of grey. It is the test of time. It is the test of trust and Faith, about all the promises made.
The butterflies remained undeterred.''
Every scenes were beautiful butterfly..
Im craving to read the next part buddy..
Try to update soon...