AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread 10 - Chapter 33 Updated 7th April

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#471

such a beautiful update bubbleee..😳😳

i love tis aunty n dat gal teasing...asad was so pissed off...bechara..apne character k mara...😆

obvio..asad(ksg) alwys breathtaking in blacks..

hw qh mehendi function was totally in my mind...wen was really tis update..

grand entry of my bouy...ayaan ws alwys there to save asad fr thz embarrassing situations..

huh..bechara..nobody gave him bhav..wen his handsome brother was there... 😆

haww kha gyi inki tameez tahzeeb...bubble asad gt out of control..his hormone made him shameless...he strted flirting wid gals..😲

You have got your personal doctor at home Mrs Khan.'

aww...offcourse hez personal doc for his wife..☺️

yeey he cudnt found it..nw he had to fulfill her all wishes...

ohooo..😳 nw thy vl gt married agn...

n she vl go to paris on their honeymoon...☺️ worlds' most romantic place...

'Then we can use my account after that.

she offered him to use hr account..her tiny miny account...😆 as if she was talking abt her..piggy bank. aaww so cutie...nw dis is my zoya...👏

Bhaijaan don't worry I won't tell Ami that she is wasting money on all this.' Ayaan said proudly as he did notice Zoya coming through his window in the morning.

wat a catch..shabash ayaan miyaan..tussi te cha gye...😎😆😆

haaye asad saw zoya..hu stood there wid bare back..☺️

'You can put zero there because I am never going to leave you or make it billions so I can make sure that you can never leave me.' She said with a evil grin and he let out a soft chuckle at her evil tone.

nw dis is my fav portion of tis update.I really love dis ff fr so many reasons...

n its punch lines/ dialogues are definitely one of the reason of my love to dis ff

she gv her so logical point...👏

He held the first pair of dori on her waist line near her hips

☺️ haaayeee..she ws melting down bcz of her 5 dories...😳

bubble u choose the rite tym fr their nikaah...bcz thy alreay talking abt the nite wen zoya vl show hw much she loves him...their SR.☺️

nw thy are so ready to strt their nw journey ..of love..trust...togetherness...

i thought tis wud b the perfect pic fr tis update..

FLAWLESS AND BEAUTIFUL UPDATE BUBBLE👏

bt m feeling so sad that tis ff is going to end...

thnk abt new concept ...varna anki aur mai...heeehaaa😈

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago

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sonia555

@sonia555

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Loved it bubba 😳

Haha some old lady pulled his cheeks 😆

I wanted zoya to be there so she could punch that girl 🤔🤣🤣

Hawww they called ayaan a monkey 😲🤣

Now humaira should have punched ayaan for what he said 😆

Awww zoya was jealous 😳

Bechara asad

Awww he was feeding her 😳😆

Is she a little kid?? 😆😆

She wants to go to paris for their honeymoon ☺️🤣

Haha ayaan saw her 😆

Hahaha make it billions so he doesn't leave her 😆😆😆

Awww he's sooo cute 😳

The dori bit...5 doris 😳😳😳

He should have just kissed her then 😳

Pleaseee update soon 😳

Edited by sonia555 - 11 years ago

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Hey Bubba 😳😳

i know that i haven't unres'd my previous comment, but i will unres that too 😳😳

pakka promise 😳😃

coming to the update,

the ladies are so lucky!! atleast they got to touch Asad's cheeks 😳😆😆

but the scene was superb!! 👏

and i love Ayaan..he is sooo cute 😳😳

i loved jealous Zoya too 😳😳

and in this case, i am missing my Sameer

awww😳😳😳 Zoya baby ko Paris jaana hai 😳😳😳

mujhe bhi

the Doris 😳

jisne bhi ye dori wale kapde banaye hai, usko meri taraf se bada wala Thank You 😳😳😳😆😆

Mahu, thanks for asking for a dori wala scene... we got 5 coz of that 😉😆

now chup chap, give a shower romance 😳😳

Awesome update Bubba!! 👏

loved each and every bit of it!! 😳😳

m going to miss this story like anything 😭

love you loads!!

Ankita 🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

res

unres

i know i am very late in my comments... what to do... work ..

asad didnt sneak in... hmm.. what to do...??

your asad is always very strict... do u know.

ididnt read the italy one.. but the rest of ur stores i have read..

ayaat.. and the start of that story... he is always.. stiff.. and so manly too. with a ego.. and bit dominating...

so in ur next story.. i want zoya to rock the world... and asad can be saying yes.. to zoya...

after all we all are feminist...😆 atleast in our story we can make our man walk the way we show...

to the update.. now..

ayaan...😡😡...

mehindi... nice.. u didnt tell the color was dark.. as to explain the love...😛😛

then the dori scene... so the wedding is in the night...

loved the dialogue about the amount.. isnt... to be clear... asad has to pay that amount.. if he want to leave zoya.. right.. so that is a muslim custom..isnt...

now i am waiting for the wedding... and dont end without an 16 + update dear...

curious to know how u will pen it...😳😳

regarding the previous chat.. QH.. is over for most of us.. isnt..

but the forum is here.. and most of us will be here... to read what you write...

keep writing...

will be waiting

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

FINALLY!!!!

RES FOR MAHA, ANI, AKS, AISH, MALI

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

res

for

mali😳

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treasure11

@treasure11

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Hayeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!☺️

That auntyy and thosee girls were reallyy irritatingg 😡

Thank godd! Ayann came and fought till the endd 🤣🤣

He was hilariouss too!!🤣🤣

Personal docter huh...☺️

I loved how he was feeding herr 😳and they were so casual bout it 😳

He is gonna take her to pariss 😳

Tiny winy accountt 😲sounds as if she is offering her piggy bank 🤣🤣

I wished they could meet at night ☺️but ayaannn 😡🤣🤣

Now comes the five doris ☺️right frm her waist band ☺️

I thought he would like her in such clothes in their personal room ☺️

He still had a fear that she dosen't like him 😡after her wait for 10 yrsss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He can but I cannott waitt how she would tell bout her lovee ☺️So noww updateee soonnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

Edited by treasure11 - 11 years ago

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-RM-

@-RM-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

Haha Ayaan 😆

Asad-Zoya cant stop teasing each other at all! :P

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Maahi

@-Bubble-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

res

unres

hate u coz u ending it very soon 😭
well
sweet caring husband.. really luvd it 👍🏼 😳
sweetly written.. ❤️

hope u'll come back wd some new stories on Zaya 😉

update soon 😊

Edited by -KitKit- - 11 years ago