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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

hey that was very nice update

omg how he was shocked to see her in his room...
haww asad telling lie to momma...
very bad..
zoya is always smart...
lovely
oh so cute...
lovd how cutely she haressses him...
oh so zoya is preparing a surprise dance for him...
hmmm good one!!!
oye hoye zoya and asad loves so much...
obvio each other..
owwie zoya performed on fevicol?
really?
oh god!
she is surely to b sent to a good mental asyylum
oye hoye asad missing her
hm
superb update
lovd it so much
owwie i will b missing its so much
bt still lovely update
awesome
amazing


LoL a lil bit lies suits Asad soemtimes 😆
Thanks Ridhi ,,
glad that you liked it 😳
LoL she will love to go to assylum only if Asad is with her 😆
Even I am gonna miss it ,,
but its end time now !
2 more to go 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hiya don ji im here with my stupid comment plz bear few mins😳 😆
I dont know where to start & how to start bcz this update is indeed a romantic part ☺️
Believe me it bought goose bumps on me😳 😆
He was surprised to see her in his bed 😲-😆 zoya AAK can do anything in this world🤣🤣
Loved their sleeping position❤️ legs were tangled left arm was wrapped around his waist her hairs were slightly tingling his arm her lips touched his neck😳
Aww how Asad let out audible gasp❤️
Yah really that was the best mrng ever for him😳😆
That dowry wala sill joke were cute😆
Loved when they both claimed thier hubby / wifey rights😆 so much improvement in them..😃
Aww she felt his hot breath over her lips ☺️
Her cheeks flushed a dark shade of pink ☺️ 😳
and that KISS AWW SCENE😳 bubba..
His kisses were impatient & sloppy, even wanting more😳 u really made me blush ☺️ by these sweet sweet lines😆
She breathed heavily🤣🤣 aww he kissed every part of her exposed skin😳 u drived me crazy already see im started to imagine wild now 😆
Seriously i loved their mrng romantic encounter ☺️
Bubba😡 u such an evil queen😈 y u made dil mom enter in wrong time? Do u want to see my guru ji danda😈 😆
Oh ho lol he & his woh actually😆 poor zoya felt like babging her head on some wall🤣🤣
zoya its ur high time to realize the truth ie something can never change - 😆 he is really buddu yaar😊
Loved how u described zoya's beauty in that dark purple skirt😳
Zoya did bhangra over punjabi number😳 her surprise dance performance was cute😳
Fevicol se song😃 for the 1st time im hearing this song name.. Is that song really good?😆
Poor asad ☺️ - though he covered his face with his hands couldn't stop himself from looking her through his fingers🤣🤣
Im feeling sad for asad friends- poor them😆 couldn't catch even a single glimpse of her dance 😆
Mr.Possesive ahmed khan😃
Ufff yah she was surely did some MAGIC on him 😆 poor he mumbled under his breath😳 groaned in frustration ☺️
Aww even the pillow was having her strawberry fragrant😳
Plz bubba dont show ur evil power on asad - plz let them enjoy their SR (16 romance) soon
Bcz he already groaning in frustration😆
I must say that u r indeed a very talented evil😈 writer😳😆
Love u buddy.. 🤗
Ani❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--


That was romance 😳😆
Aww really ?? thank You soo mucchh ,,
I am honored that you liked it 😃
I just thought to bring some change by bringing Dilshad 😆😆
Yah my Asad is poor ..,,
hah ayah she finally did as she had promised earlier 😳😆
Will try updating sooon ,,
hope u r doing well ??

ROMANCE 😲 it was HOT bubble☺️
yup...i am quiet well😊 counting last days of hospital🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it bubble
pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

Hiya don ji im here with my stupid comment plz bear few mins😳 😆
I dont know where to start & how to start bcz this update is indeed a romantic part ☺️
Believe me it bought goose bumps on me😳 😆
He was surprised to see her in his bed 😲-😆 zoya AAK can do anything in this world🤣🤣
Loved their sleeping position❤️ legs were tangled left arm was wrapped around his waist her hairs were slightly tingling his arm her lips touched his neck😳
Aww how Asad let out audible gasp❤️
Yah really that was the best mrng ever for him😳😆
That dowry wala sill joke were cute😆
Loved when they both claimed thier hubby / wifey rights😆 so much improvement in them..😃
Aww she felt his hot breath over her lips ☺️
Her cheeks flushed a dark shade of pink ☺️ 😳
and that KISS AWW SCENE😳 bubba..
His kisses were impatient & sloppy, even wanting more😳 u really made me blush ☺️ by these sweet sweet lines😆
She breathed heavily🤣🤣 aww he kissed every part of her exposed skin😳 u drived me crazy already see im started to imagine wild now 😆
Seriously i loved their mrng romantic encounter ☺️
Bubba😡 u such an evil queen😈 y u made dil mom enter in wrong time? Do u want to see my guru ji danda😈 😆
Oh ho lol he & his woh actually😆 poor zoya felt like babging her head on some wall🤣🤣
zoya its ur high time to realize the truth ie something can never change - 😆 he is really buddu yaar😊
Loved how u described zoya's beauty in that dark purple skirt😳
Zoya did bhangra over punjabi number😳 her surprise dance performance was cute😳
Fevicol se song😃 for the 1st time im hearing this song name.. Is that song really good?😆
Poor asad ☺️ - though he covered his face with his hands couldn't stop himself from looking her through his fingers🤣🤣
Im feeling sad for asad friends- poor them😆 couldn't catch even a single glimpse of her dance 😆
Mr.Possesive ahmed khan😃
Ufff yah she was surely did some MAGIC on him 😆 poor he mumbled under his breath😳 groaned in frustration ☺️
Aww even the pillow was having her strawberry fragrant😳
Plz bubba dont show ur evil power on asad - plz let them enjoy their SR (16 romance) soon
Bcz he already groaning in frustration😆
I must say that u r indeed a very talented evil😈 writer😳😆
Love u buddy.. 🤗
Ani❤️


Ani u have almost wrote a comment as long as my chapter 🤓😆
but I am still loving it as it is ur comment ,,
thank You soo muchhh for this longest and lovely comment
I love you for this 🤗
and I am honored that you liked it .,,
and I don't know where to start from because its very long ?? 🤔😆
It really means alot to me Ani ,,
thanks for taking out ur time for me ,,
I am surely gonna let them enjoy their SR without any complications 😳😆
haha yah that I am 😎😆
Love you tooo Ani !
Updating in 10 mins !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety003

ROMANCE 😲 it was HOT bubble☺️
yup...i am quiet well😊 counting last days of hospital🥱


haha okie it was hot ☺️😆
Aww thats goood ,,
stay healthy and happy 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TaiLung

loved it bubble

pls update soon


Thanks ,,
glad that you liked it (:
Updating in 10 mins !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--


I will write but maybe OS or TSs only ,,
FF I don't know !
Actually my exams are coming near soo want to concentrate on them only (:
and I am not ready for exams at all LoL


OS and TS will do.. till u complete ur exam...or take a break for studies.. then back with a bang dear
FF.. Oon ur semester break.. what say...

update in 10 minuites...

so surprise... it is...😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82


OS and TS will do.. till u complete ur exam...or take a break for studies.. then back with a bang dear
FF.. Oon ur semester break.. what say...

update in 10 minuites...

so surprise... it is...😳😳


haha yah but I don't think qubool hai will last until my semester break 😆
Yup I am done writing so thought to post it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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