AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread 10 - Chapter 33 Updated 7th April

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Poulami Sarkar

@v.s.k_fangirl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Thanks ,,
I am honored that you liked it (:
Will try updating sooon !!

bubble after this pls write a new one😊

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BeIndependent

@BeIndependent

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#402

that was a very romantic & Hottt update...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

asad's way of showing his right on her..☺️☺️
his woh actually ll nvr end..😆😆
oh no..finally mr. khan was in his good mood.😳...but first zoya stopped him.😡..then ayaan se bache toh dillu moma came..😡..n then bubble ka mood kharab hua n she put a break on der romance..😆😆😆

omg poor asad's frnd ...not allowed to see zoya's fevicol dance..😆😆

awesome update..n im happy it was not d last one..😳

update soon .. thanks for pm..😃

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Sorry for the late comments dear

I was busy last days

I loved this update

It was awsome

I like their early morning romance

Pls update soon

Thanks for the pm😳

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Sansanana

@Sansanana

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

You Wrote A lil 16+...I juz Cant belev it...It was amazing☺️

I loved both the updates

Update soon

Really Sorry for the small comment

Juz a lil busy

Love you🤗

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: aksasya

Thank You soo muchh Aks 🤗

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: aksasya

I LOVED IT...😳

Thanks ,,

glad that you liked it (:

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: sweety003
🥳congratulations for new thread bubble🥳

awesome update 👏👏👏

zoya's prank 🤣 she is soo stupid sometimes😆 bachara asad like me😉 ...got heart attack for a minute

how come ayan used his brain on right time😲😆

awwh even i am thinking asad 🤔who made her doctor his angry justified koi aisa bi kartha he kya???😆

asad feeling guilty ...bachara

zoya you are so sweet 😳 they're sleeping in same bed 😳

sorry for late comment bubble😔

lov u...sweety❤️

Thank You soo mucchhh buddy .,,

sorry for the late response got busy with something yesterday

I am honored that you liked it ,,

Yah my poor Asad finallt confessed and she woke up saying I forgot everything

I just thought to make Ayaan useful for once 🤔😆

Zoya AAK can do anything in this world 😎

Yup they are sleeping in same bed and by now I am sure u know what happened on the bed 😳😆

No need for sorry ,,

Love you tooo !

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: kals82
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unres..

asad thought her to be a dream... and then their sleeping position... so cute..

their hormone started working...🥳🤪...atlast...

specially for asad... the way he silenced her was amazing... and zoya giving up to his ministrations...

dilshad.. habab me haddi... no problem.. any ways nikkah is right there..
then the sangeet.. she danced for that. and he enjoyed.. yet restricted his friends... so possesive.. and at the same he has grown...

then the night... asad learn something from zoya... sneak into her room... and u have the right to sneak into her too...🤣...🤣...🤣...🤣...🤣...instead of sleeping and dreaming...😉😉

or zoya dear.. u r always the bold one.. take the lead... and show ur man... what should be done...

after all u r a couple...

zoya dont delay.. already u r late... remember.. about ur kids...

awesome update... bubble...
the story coming to an end soon...

i am sure u have another plot in ur mind...by now...😊

Yah finally harmones started working ,,

I just wanted it to work before their second wedding soo Zoya won't be surprised by him when the right time comes 😆

Yup nikaah is coming soo they shouldn't waste the money ,,

Ya Allah ! my readers will deffo get a heartattack if Asad sneaked inside her room 😲😆

LoL Zoya ain't doing anything like this ,,

let her rest for 2 days atleast 😆

Thanks ,,

glad that you liked it !

Yah its coming to an end hopefully 2 more to go 😳

plots are many but I guess I am not gonna continue writing ,,

this is my last story hopefully !

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: Amulya9

🤗

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#410

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
wow fabulous...
zoya is trying to ask forgiveness from asad...
n asad is very happy with the importance zoya is giving him...
wow zoya dance on fevicol se n his friends are not allowed to watch the dance...
asya are so cute...
wonderfull n beautifully writen...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Thanks ,,

glad that you liked it (:

haha yah finally she did dance on it LoL

it means alot to me ,,

Will try updating soon !