2#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala :AsYa FF(Ch6-10|#3Link pg1)

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars
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I need to catch up. I missed out few updates! Lemme read first...comment will follow!😳

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Chapter 7
It was cute and romantic. She is slowly surely falling for him. Hmm..Sadz is here!😆 Oh...i guess I know who is her BF! Great going!😉

Haaha! But nay she isnt like HER at all.. But yaa.. she had to grace my fiction sooner or later toh yea bhi thik hai 😆

Chapter 8
Why are they so cute? I mean, seriously man! :(
He took her in his arms to her bed..and kissed her on forehead...She went to take a sneak0peak and there goes the kiss again!😳 I am surely gonna get diabetes...😆

Hai naa? They are too sweet to be even fiction I believe 😆

The Kachori part... Good old days of Qubool hai and our very own AsYa! How jealous she got and how lovingly he was smirking at her cuteness...I have a big grin on my face right now. Can't get the image out of my head!

Am glad you caught that haan! I added the kachorie thingy after stalking the CG 😆 Thanks.

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars
Like a parent he rained her with affection, maybe that was all he did whole his life.

He was never our Bhaijan, but our Abbu, Bhabiii

So true that is! 👏 One of the most important things I love and respect about the Asad Ahmed Khan!

Thank you! This is also the main reason why I loved Asad. He was a father to all, himself having none..

"Tumne sahi kaha tha Rabbert, babbar sher ki tarah gurrate rehte hai! Grr!"
"Kuch kaha apne?"

Old memories!

"Nahi toh!! Kisne kaha?.. Main toh khet mein abhi tak haal chala raha hoon.."

So hilarious!🤣
He is still so affectionate towards her. They are still kids and I still love them & I still want the next update now!

And they will forever remain KIDS.. 😆 they did until the last... they do in my heart.. and they always will remain kids.. 😊

These four chaps were wonderful Ankie. I could imagine all those scenes and now I miss Asad-Ayan and MaBurt so much. Qubool Hai used to be the best in all ways! Well, we still have memories and wonderful fictions on the forum like this which will keep QH alive always...
Update soon. And I really really loved reading the chapters...Great job!👍🏼

thank you so very much lovely.. these are one of my initial favourite edits.. the fiction is based mainly on the fond memories i of the show that I loved so much... 😳 am glad you guys loved it and unbiasedly have encouraged it to grow till here... 😳 THANK YOU.

Thank you Thank you so much for the lovely comment! One of the bestest comments i ever got. 😳

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: subhkisonu
What I liked the most in this part is Ayaan Zoya interaction😊
I wanted to see this in our QH very very much, but we didn't get it muchyou fullfilled my wish😊.
Thank you🤗
And in this part Ayaan reminded me of Rishabh instead of VM😳.
And Asad's reaction after seeing the mess😆.
I am mentioning again that I am loving the way you are mixing past and present👏.
Love❤️

Ammm,., yes i had old Ayaan scenes playing in my mind when i wrote this 🤣 😆

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: swapno
Ankie...
Don't you dare to stop writing on AsYa ... they will always remain happy and content in our world like this

Coming to the update...loved it thoroughly though it was an emotional chapter but last segment swells my heart away...Haye how cute...So presenting you the cutest Asad ever...

Love you as always...by the way finally I found Asad in the flashback...😉
Update soonish.
🤗

Yes sweety am not gonna stop writing until my muse refuses to co-operate with me 😆

ATAYAYAYAYAYAYA my fav avis.. I love u so much 🤗

p.s. When r u starting one?

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
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aisa face kyun banaya apne? btw hello 😳

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
aisa face kyun banaya apne? btw hello 😳

Hello Ankie and sorry for not spamming and reading ur updates 😔
coz mujhe aajakal time nahi mil raha hain yeh FF padhne ka

pata nahi mein kab padh paunga itne saare pms ab

me exams are starting from 3 😭 🤢

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: -Dynamite-
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"Asad rolled his eyes as he pinched the bridge of his nose." Gosh the little things Asad use to do, I miss it all :( ... ps nice, you're very observant :')

Apko aaj pata chala? 😆 more than an year and half i have spent the 24/7 hours of my life reading and understanding the characters of this drama.. 😆 yea kya.. give me any episode randomly i'll tell you a blooper in it 😆 p.s. dont take that seriously 🤣

and ruffling Ayaan's hair 😆 😆 ... this is what makes a great FF writer; knowing your favorite characters inside out and incorporating their characteristics into your writing... nice job for all the work you've done so far 👍🏼

THANKS Love! like I said, this story is based on the lives and characters of the drama I so loved.. so I just pray that i do equal justice to all of them 😊

*continue reading chapter 9*

How old is Ayaan in your FF? He sounds like a chota baccha 😆 😆 😳

he just turned 19 😆

Aww Asad's past :(

Dont be saddy.. it was all for Zoya to fall for him.. 😆

The video game reminds me of Zoya's line in the show ..."gaadi maine kaise seeki? video games khed ke" 🤣 ...you know what would be a cute scene? ...if Zoya challenges Asad to a game of GTA and places a bet on it (who ever wins they get to ask the other person for what ever they want).. and Asad acts like he doesnt play video games but still accepts the challenge after Zoya's nagging ... Asad turns out to be a pro at GTA and wins the match... if something like this happens later on when they're in a comfortable stage in their relationship then Asad can request for a kiss on the cheek as his prize 😳

OH MY FREAKING GOODNESS.. I Hope i did justice to your demand in the next 😆 shitt man am not suppose to leak out stuffs but yea 😆

Aww I miss the Mona-Raabart convos 😒 ... aww Asad getting slightly jealous 😆

I just miss the three. Period.

Do you have chapter 10 all planned out now? 😳

yes.. its written and proofed too 😆 but the initial chapter 10 is on hold.. i,e, next one will be a filler. 🥱 😆

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Hello Ankie and sorry for not spamming and reading ur updates 😔
coz mujhe aajakal time nahi mil raha hain yeh FF padhne ka
pata nahi mein kab padh paunga itne saare pms ab
me exams are starting from 3 😭 🤢

Awhh awhh koi naahii. u remembered na that is so very enough 🤗

All the very best.. this is from my side to you for your exams!! rock it and shock the teachers..

p.e. go and make my name proud 😎

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: Ankita.M
OMG just read the last two updates and wow :| I LOVEE Asad and Ayaan, I've always loved the bond and I am so glad you decided to write them so much in detail. Glad Zoya knows his past and his pain and is set out to free him off it. Hope we can see more of Asad and his family too. Can't wait for the next update

AYAYAYAYA Anku commented.. 😆

Thank you soo much.. I really suck at writing I swear.. but I'll still write and make you guys read each and every word of it 😆

Thank you so much.. I adored AsYaan and Maburt always.. I miss so very badly,,, them and KaKa 😆 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: sweetluck
hey Ankie..😃
first of all srry for commenting so late..

i absolutely loved both d chapters...i miss asyaan ,asya n moburt..😭..but its ok v can enjoy dem in reading ff's..😊...Ayaan entry was superb...asad past was beautifully described..Ayaan n mature..😲😆...waiting to know what zoya ll do to take him out of his shell..😳😃finally asad returns home..😆...zoya is so cute..each n evry update of urs contains smthing related to food..n der description is always interesting..😆😆

loving ur work..

thanks for pm..😃

Isnt it? it is because I LOVE food so very much 🤣 I love three things in like and they are

1. Food

2. Food

3. Food

😆

Nopesy Ayaan isnt mature its just that he can read his brother too very well.. he is mature in his own childish way.. 😳 😆

Thank you once again 😆