2#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala :AsYa FF(Ch6-10|#3Link pg1)

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

excellent surprise ankie😆

i was wondering who was that fallen raven girls

OMG that was sadhna😲

she s zoya's friend😲but sadie dint mention anything about that😲😆😆

i loved zoya and sadhna convo

she s good friend

another surprise here😲

if u keep on giving us surprises my mind will burst of thinking more about the outcome of those surprises😆😆

what is cooking between asad and sadhna??😕

ankie is this story or reading comprehesion we have to answer questions from the story??😕😆

the gift scene was cute😳..zoya and her antics😆

i proud of asad😃

car scenes was hilarious🤣

and then asad and zoya in rain😳

awesome one

so we will get a update this wednesday??

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@ChaiTeaWali

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Awwwe your emoticons <3 (tehe I thought it was probably best not to keep quoting that comment since it's already long as it is;p)

you came across the perfect pic for your thread header then :)

lolll Nadeem is Sadz fiance isnt he 😳

liked? 😲 ... I LOVE the surprise! :D ... and trust me you did full justice to that scene, you described Zoya's look and Asad's reaction so perfectly, not pathetic at all! 😳

Yea hai pyaar ki haddkadi ... Disco..Station... Disco 😉 ... that scene was actually quite funny 😆 😆

aww so sweet, I will definitely take up that offer if any cute scenes come to my mind 😳

awww again the emoticons <3 :')

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

haiyee i am so saving it.

lol that was such minor editing 😆 Literally all I did was change the tie colour to red 😆 😆 ... I can make edits though (well sort of 😆) ... let me know if you want anything made 😳

Edited by -Dynamite- - 11 years ago

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Awesome update
Nice song selection for their situation
Dance on rain wow
Continue soon
Congratulations for new thread
Thanks for pm

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
iss sabme i dint notice d banner ...banner is just awesum ❤️

hai na hai na hai na? 😳 😆 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
] yaa v wanted happily dancing drenched asya ...n got crying sad drenched asya

mat yaad dilaiye woh sare episodes.

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: -Aditi.
First of all congo for the new thread 👏 thank you Aditi. 😊

I guess Nadeem is sadhna's fiance...i guess not sure. What makes you think so. 😆

I like the way you describe the dialogue with miserable and the description of zoya's beauty. Thank you. Both were difficult to write am glad people Liked it 😊

But i did nt get what convo was going on between asad n sadhna U were NOT to understand too 😆 Am glad you pointed this thing out. 😆

There is a suggestion also ...never use AP and HO together...its wrong grammar. Thank you once again. Woh kya hai na meri hindi bahut kacchi hai but then its colloquial hindi. Not Shudhya Desi Hindi again 😆

Rest was fabulous...as i always say tht u r one of my fav writer here Really? am I Thank you so much 😭

Please do update soon Next week Wed. 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: ..Breeze..
Wow! Such a lovely surprise it was! Absolutely loved the update😃 The way you describe the scenes makes me visualize them! As always, you've taken me into an other land with your words..
BTW congrats on the new thread and haan, waiting for an other surprise, soon!

thank you breeze. 😊 I love reading those stories which help you to visualize the picture perfect AsYa. And I try my level best to keep my writing easy for visualizing too. 😊

For the other other surprise. 😆 I need to start writing first

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-
AWESOME!

I loved the rain, the date, everything! <3

I especially loved how Zoya got all excited when Asad brought her a present! SO CUTE. :D

Continue soon! :)

-Fari.

Thanks Fari. I hope I didnt disappoint you this time. 😊 😆 I thought the update would remind you of Raj and Tani from RNBJ 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Amulya9
I loved ur surprise ankie.
awesome update as usual..

thank you.

he hoped that all these bridges would bridge the gap between them and he would be able to build a home of his in her heart 😉 ..awww my baby Asad

Perfect choice of words right? 😉 😆

sadhna... 😛 😆..Zoe's friend..interesting...poor Zoe feels he doesn't deserve her..loved their convo...ASYA on party...Mrs.AAK is feeling proud of her husband... 😳 ..he asked her fr dance...hez not emotionally challenged I think.I really liked all d songs played...continue soon

No he is not emotionally challenged it is Zoya who is 😆 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Oldestfan
Oho! Rain dance! Romantic! Ab yeh pagli zoya kab realize karegi? Shayad Asad has to fall sick, or just fll and hurt himself? Then she will realize?

Isnt it too early for her to even fall in love dii? 😳

Haiyee mera Asad already itna tadap raha hai, aur kitna tadpana chahte ho app 🤣 😆