AsYa OS : IZHARE ISHQ( my 1st writing) note on pg 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is my 1st writing 😳
And I dedicate this to all my Fruit Friends
I LOVE YOU ALL 🤗

IZHARE ISHQ ...!!


Meri Har Khushi Har Baat Teri Hai...,,,

Sanson Me Chhupi Ye Hayaat Teri He...,,,

Do Pal Bhi Nahi Reh Sakte Tere Bin...,,,

Dhadkano Ki Dhadakti Har Aawaz Teri Hai. . .!!!





I am Zoya .. Zoya Asad Khan . Asad and I were best friends since childhood I was waiting for Asad to come back from work . While I was cleaning I found our old album . As soon as I found it yhe door clicked and Asad entered loosing his tie . It was a busy day for him I guess . I welcomed him with a warm hug . He nuzzed his nose in my hair and wisphered "I missed you love" I smiled and replied " I missed you too" . I asked him to go and freshup Il bring his Bitter Black coffee .


I entered with two cups of coffee in our room I gave him his Black Coffee and kept my cup aside . I showed him the album . A smile crept on his face . It made me smile too . How many times do I droll on this smile of his . We sat together ob the couch and started to see the album . The 1st pic was of my ammi holding a 3 yr old asad and his ammi holding me . The 2nd one was our pic when we were goin to school for first time . I was so excited that day and on the other hand Asad was annoyed since he didnt want me to make new friends and forget him . I still laugh when I remember his face at that moment . While going through the pics we found a picture of our collage's first day .


FLASHBACK


Asad was so protective for me the way he held my hand and only if stares could kill also those boys would be dead who were staring me and same for all those shameless girls who were ogling my Asad. Time passed and it was our last valentine's day in collage . I was sad that I wont be having a valentine like all the past years but then Asad said that we will go there I stared at him with superise 1stly because for the past 4 yrs Asad never attended any Valentine's party of our collage and 2ndly he said WE WILL GO THERE did he mean wel go as a couple ? But before I could ask anything he laughed and said "Bhuddu wel go there just to have fun not as couples" I felt a relief but at the same time I felt bad ... I dont know but somewhere I wanted to go there with him as his VALENTINE and not as his BEST FRIEND . We both got ready and he came to pick me up from my place to go the party . He was looking hot in his black three piece . I couldnt stop drolling on him until he cleared his thorat to gain my attention I felt a blush creot on my cheeks and said " You look handsome" he had a smirk on his face and asked me "Only handsome ?" I tried to change the topic and said "Lets go we are getting late " he said " Ok . But you look Glamerous in this outfit " and winked I was blushing at his comment . I had worn a Black one piece . I knew that Asad would wear something black as it is his favourite colour so even I chose a black dress


The car journey was silent . We reached the venue. All the girls were oging Asad shamelessly I swear I would have killed them all . I saw Asad who had a stern look on his face . His hands were fisted I could make out that he was angry but why was he angry ? He placed his hand firmly around my waist and pulled me towards him and possessively he took me to inside . I was feeling happy because no girls were ogling Asad anymore and I noticed that even Asad was normal . Its only then when it clicked me that he was annoyed by the wah all the guys were staring me and thus he held me possessively . I smiled at it . The DJ turned on the music I knew that Asad doesnt like to dance in public so I didnt even asked him . We sat on a table and watched people dance . Suddenly the song changed into a romantic number . It was my fav song . I was suprised when Asad asked me for a dance . I gave my hand in his . We went on the dance floor and started to dance...


Hum tere bin abh reh nahi sakte ... Tere bina kya wajud mera ...

He turned me around my back touching his six packs . And we continued to dance


Hum tere bin abh reh nahi sakte ... Tere bina kya wajud mera .. Tujhse juda agar ho jaenge toh khud se hi ho jaenge juda ...


He turned me around . Now we were facing eachother . He gently placed his hand around my waist and pulled to towards him . I placed my hand on his shoulder and stared in his eyes . I got lost in those eyes . Suddenly the song stopped and then Asad started to sing ...



Kyunki tum hi ho ... Abh tum hi ho ... Zindgi abh tum hi ho ...
Chain bhi mera dard bhi meri aashiqui abh tum hi ho ...



As soon as he finished his song he went on his keens . He took something from his pocket . It was a ring box . When he opened the box it was his FANILY ring . I remeber phuppi always said me that she will give this ring to Asad amd will ask him to give this ring to the LOVE OF HIS LIFE . I was speechless at that moment .


He said " Zoya .. I know that we are best friends since childhood . We have lived each and every moment till now together as BEST FRIENDS.. we fought for small things andfor each other . We have seen each other laugh and cry .. We have been with each other on every step of life . I want to be with you till your last breathe but not as you BEST FRIEND but as your LIFE PARTNER... I LOVE YOU ZOYA ... I LOVE YOU ... I have been in love with you every since we became 18 or maybe even before that but I was always scared that I would loose you .. I would loose my BEST FRIEND . I never had the courage to say this to you I know this is too filmy but today I want to say this in front of every one I LOVE YOU ZOYA ... WILL YOU MARRY ME ...??"



I had tears throught the time those were tears of happiness . I loved him too . The way he was scared even I was scared bit today he was there on his knees with his family ring in his hand asking me if i would marry him I shut my eyes and said


Ikrar may shabdo ki ahmiyat nai hoti...,

dil ke jazbat ki awaz nai hoti...,

ankhen bayan kar deti hai dil ki dastan...,

mohabbat lafzo ki mohtaz nai hoti ...




"Yes I WILL MARRY YOU ASAD ... I LOVE YOU TOO" He had a ear to ear smile on his face . He slid the ring in my finger and hugged me . I could hear the people around clapping .


As soon as we reached home I found all our relatives there . They all were ready as if they are going for an engagement or wait was it for mine and Asad's engagement I looked at Asad who nodded his head in a Yes and was shocked that everyone except me knew that Asad was going to propose me . We got engaged in front of our family .A week later our nikkah took place.



PRESENT

We were looking at our nikaah pic when we heard the clock click 12 we wished eachother HAPPY 3rd ANNIVERSARY . We hugged each other as soon as we broke the hug we saw our little angel Asya entre the room . We bent on our knees and she hugged us and said "HAPPY ANNI AMMI ABBU" we smiled and thanked her . I shut my eyes and sent a silent pray to Allah to thank him for giving me such a beautiful family ...




Here I end this ghatiya OS 😆
All types of scarcasm and comments are accepted
And even chappals are excepted 😳
But plz dont throw eggs coz m veg and i hate eggs smell 🤢 and
No tomatoes allowed coz i hate juicy tomatos too🤣
Plz comment and silent readers hit the LIKE button


P.s : IN MY OS ASAD AHMED KHAN IS ONLY KARAN SINGH GROVER

LOVE,
Niya 😳
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CHOCOSWATHI thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i'm first
we love u 🤗
u nailed it chikoo👏
what a piece of writing??
asad feeling bad on zoya joining school🤣poor baby afraid of losing his friend😆😆
and his possiveness continued in college😳
those boys would be dead who were staring me and same for all those shameless girls who were ogling my Asad
ab dono barabar hai😆😆
when he asked her for valentine i was like😲
and when he asked for dance i almost fainted🤣
he s possive but he s romantic...hmm that a good news for me😳😉😆
i'm fangirling him
and asad proposed her..oye hoyye😳
engagement on same day😲😆
he is good planner😆😆
i shut my eyes and thanking God for giving me a beautiful os😉😆
u called it ghatiya😡have u lost ur mind??IT IS BEAUTIFUL
now i want more stories from
Edited by CHOCOSWATHI - 11 years ago
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res
unresed below😆😆
Edited by SimplySmile - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww too cute

The OS was very simple and cute and I love reading little Os's like this😳😳,

Bravo my friend, Bravo👏👏

Honestly for a first time try, that was really good⭐️⭐️, not even joking here,

My fave bit: Of course with Asad getting mad at all the guys for ogling at HIS Zoya😆😆

My Fave line: "I have been in love with you every since we became 18 or maybe even before that but I was always scared that I would loose you .. I would loose my BEST FRIEND . I never had the courage to say this to you"😭❤️

I don't know, I just really liked that line, I mean he's confessing his love❤️ but he's also sharing his insecurities with her😭😭, and honestly when boys do that I find it so freaking adorable, and the bit with "I would loose my best friend",

#MyReaction

But seriously the OS for a first time writer was very well written👍🏼, it wasn't too long nor too short👏, so please continue writing and PM when(and you better) write your next AsYa story😃😃




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SimplySmile



Awww too cute

The OS was very simple and cute and I love reading little Os's like this😳😳,

Bravo my friend, Bravo👏👏

Honestly for a first time try, that was really good⭐️⭐️, not even joking here,

My fave bit: Of course with Asad getting mad at all the guys for ogling at HIS Zoya😆😆

My Fave line: "I have been in love with you every since we became 18 or maybe even before that but I was always scared that I would loose you .. I would loose my BEST FRIEND . I never had the courage to say this to you"😭❤️

I don't know, I just really liked that line, I mean he's confessing his love❤️ but he's also sharing his insecurities with her😭😭, and honestly when boys do that I find it so freaking adorable, and the bit with "I would loose my best friend",

#MyReaction

But seriously the OS for a first time writer was very well written👍🏼, it wasn't too long nor too short👏, so please continue writing and PM when(and you better) write your next AsYa story😃😃






Thank you 😃
I didnt knew ul like it so much 😆
Il try to continue writing
And yaa that line is my fav too 😳
And Il PM i when I write anything else 😊
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Thanks 😊 😳
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Thankyou 😳
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such a cute os..
thanks for the pm
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Originally posted by: kals82

such a cute os..

thanks for the pm


Thanks 😳
No need to thank for PM 😆
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Res ...Unres...
Now why would you say this is a ghatiya Os😡
I thought it was lovely...
Sweet...
Fanciful...
And...
So perfect...
Chikoo you have out done yourself👍🏼
3 OS's in one weekend👏
Keep writing dear😃
Edited by NAVI55 - 11 years ago

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