FS - Dont Like Her!Final Part-Page98 - Page 96

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm update.
Superb one

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Wow! What can I say- I didnt like this story :-)

Loved it!!

Originally posted by: mooumi

Omg...Juliet...u know u r a sweethrt...dat was ummm superb...fabulously fantastical... Awww my spr hot n sexyyy asad...I jst luv him...n I luv u for dis superb fs...n baby pls I want butterflies updt asap...plsss can't wait...plsss..

Originally posted by: anopama

wow I am gonna miss
I dont like you
it was a pleasure to read
especially knowing what he meant
since at the airport in chapter one
wow this final chapter made me cry and laugh
aad playing dirty with his flu and then when he
told her off in her bedroom that hurt but he stole
her passport he always made it about him making zoya
go after him but this time she was determined
his zoya turned hulk turned godzilla
she spoilt his confession so many times but the morning b4
the wedding across the sky was awesome and then he had a
back up plan too hahaha😆and after he said it he couldnt stop
zafar a darling glad he found his love...cnt believed he was the guy
asad punched years ago and he knows about asad play-dirty-itis😆
beautifully written ...so perfect

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Amazing ending

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Hey Juliet... Was not online for past 4-5 days since I was out of town... So you have finally updated... cool.. 😊

The beginning scene... and comparison to bungee jump.. hmm.. very creative thinking... that is why I keep telling you are one among the BEST writers in the forum and I love what you write... 😊

Ayaan has been great in this whole chapter.. Pink suits you Bhaijaan.. 🤣... Asad was so very very broken down crying with her scarf... Beautifully written... Entire family is cute.. the flu idea and their attempt was a genius thought no doubt.. He does not to eat but want to brush hoping she will come ... 🤣

Hulk and Godzilla.. Now how do you come up with all these wild comparisons and thoughts... They are Great... 😊

Their entire conversation was good.. blame game.. yes many a times.. we end up with it right ?? hmm... good parallel to reality over there... 😊

He had preserved her macaroni and cheese card in his wallet.. how cute and the way he later told her about them since their childhood was very sweet..

The way they finally patched up .. again beautiful play of words and emotions.. 😊

The old secret about Zafar.. that was a total surprise.. So he was the same guy.. oh so sorry for Zafar His failed attempts of telling her I love you and the grand way of telling just before their wedding was totally awsome...

Zoya's POV was also very cute to know how she and Zafar played the game.. The last family scene was equally sweet.. . on the whole a wonderful story which you shared..

😊

Keep Writing Juliet.. and when do I get to read Butterflies ?? Am waiting for the emotional stuff over there also.. 😊 I guess Zoya's actions than words to prove her love is on the way .. I am waiting..

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

Amazing

Wonderful

Superbb

Beautiful

Perrrfeccttt

Yess dear... Although it ended but each n every fan of urs including me is gonna remember n re read this story again n again...

U completely changed the meaning of I Don't Like U...

The part finally gave us the confession n dear what a fab way of making them close...

I won't say anything further for now... Till u give me most famous THE SEVEN...

So plsss update that also...

~JAZ~

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome + cute update...👏

Just love it...😊

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

aaw it was so lovely n cute update...
i loved it...
u did every family members coupling towards the end...it was so nice

Originally posted by: nikki.171

Great going! And finally.. they're together! Good that Zafar served as a catalyst in their story 😆