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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: aashiqua
cute os

Originally posted by: p_s05
This was a pleasant read! 😳

Thank you.. 😊

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Az07
That was a cute love story
Do write more devika
If you don't have time for ss at least write TS or fs

Thanks Uma.. Actually I am getting busier day by day.. I hardly get time to login but due to the addiction to this forum, I login from phone at times to read in office during breaks..😊

Yep I can think of TS next time.. Thank uma.. 😊 loved your TS Nakli boyfriend.. Apologies if I am yet to read and comment on your other updates.. Will do it tomorrow hopefully... 😭

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Loved it!!!
Awesome!!!
So cute love story!!!
Asad 's lucky charm Zoya!!!!
thanks 4 pm

Thanks a lot Maneet.. Happy to know you liked it.. 😊 Yes.. Asad thinks she is his lucky charm.. since she made him realize beauty of rain and enjoying it.. 😉

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rockstar_16

@rockstar_16

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

awesome os

i loved it

ur stories r always mesmerizing...

u r an awesome writer

do write more😉

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Azraa01
I absolutely loved it..
Can't you turn this into a 2shot.. Would love to read about Dilshad and Rashid's reactions when they see Asad and Zoya in the rain together..

Hey Azraa... Thanks.. 😊 Dilshaad and Rashid obviously knew his maddness through Zoya and hence they had given them privacy on Sunday... 😉

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: TaiLung
wow i just loved this 😃

Thank you TaiLung .. 😊

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--
It was nice Devika ,,
Loved their first meating in rain and balloon (:
and u ended it with rain too ,,
his punishment was sooo cute LoL
thanks for the pm !

Thanks a lot Bubble.. Yes I wanted to start and end it with a rain.. I had planned for the title to be a Rainy love Story.. but later on I changed.. Thanks again for liking it.. 😊 By the way tomorrow is Saturday and I am waiting for your update...😊