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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01

I'm so glad Zoya never ran into Asad's arms when he confessed..
Now I want to see how Asad tries to pacify her and their wedding still needs to come.. So I'm sure you will have to turn this from a FS to a SS...



Thanks
I am glad that you agree with my view. I saw so many people pitying asad because zoya didn't accept his proposal. No one sees her pain she gone through in one month. She even heard about his engagement with tanveer.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

nice update
I think u will have to do ss instead of an fs
bcuz zoya is not giving i so easy she is a misfit she cant be perfect
she accepted that she wouldnt fit with asad and dilshad choose perfection for him
TANVEER
oh he has to beg like how she told him she wanted to hear him confess days ago
but now it doesnt matter he still chose tanveer even though he loves her
continue soon



Thanks
Asad should taste his own medicine
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 4

Next day every one gathered for breakfast. Asad found zoya as full of herself. She was as usual reciting her stupid shayries. How much he missed her in past one month. He found his ammi & tamater smiling with full heart. It was after zoya's arrival he saw them enjoying there life. Asad has talked with dilshad & najma about his conversation with zoya last night. They both understood zoya's pov. They made him to realise that zoya was feeling rejected & she was thinking too much inferior of herself due to his rejection. They have to bring her out from her shell. Dilshad even spoke with zeenat & anwar also. They too agreed with them. If they didn't bring her out of the shell zoya may never agree for a marriage. Anwar suggested zoya to take them out. Zoya agreed. He has left car for zoya to take them out. Once anwar & zeenat left for work zoya asked them to get ready. Zoya was shocked to see najma in skirt & top.
Zoya: tamater. You are looking so cute in this dress.
Najma: thank you zoya. You know what zoya bhaijaan got me this dress & he allows me to were modern dresses now a days even to collage. You know what zoya it's all because of you, bhaijaan has changed his point of view about many things.
Zoya just smiled. She didn't prefer to say anything. She know asad has changed a lot. But still it's better for her to be away from him. She can't bare once more the pain of loosing someone close to her.
Zoya took them to lower manhattan. All the women was engaged in shopping. Due to there constant interference asad too got stuffs for himself. Asad noticed zoya has not got anything for herself. He slowly skipped to ladies section & got few dresses for zoya. After shopping zoya took them to a pizza restaurant. It was asad who asked her to take them to a pizza cuisine. Zoya got them New York style pizza. Asad noticed more than zoya dilshad & najma was enjoying pizza. He too liked it. For once he left all his diet. They left her to her afternoon graphic classes & asad took dilshad & najma back home. Even tough zoya was behaving normally with asad he was upset. She was firm in her desicion. They have only one month visa in New York. After that they has to go back to Bhopal. He can't go alone he want to take zoya along with him as his wife. He has no idea what to do. In the evening when anwar & zeenat returned they decided to go to Central Park. Zoya joined them directly. Since it's summer season many rides were going on. It seems like najma & zoya has became children seeing all that. They both were running and playing through out the park. Dilshad & zeenat was warning both the girls but anwar was on the girls side. Finally dilshad & zeenat got exhausted. They left them because they were too tired.
After dinner dilshad was too tired. Zoya went to dilshad's room.
Zoya: phupi you are too tired. Please drink this milk.
Dilshad: nahi beta muhej nahi chahiye
Zoya: no ways phupi be a good girl & drink this.
Dilshad has no other go she drink the milk.
Zoya: phupi this is calcium tablet one of my school mate is doing medicine she told me that this apparently good for women at your age. You should start taking this from now onwards.
Dilshad: yeh kya Baath hui zoya mein budi toh nahi
Zoya: phupi who told you are aged? This is calcium tablet phupi. Only vitamin nothing else. Please phupi this for your health.
Dilshad took the tablet.
Dilshad: beta I really didn't know anything between you & asad.
Zoya: there is nothing in between us phupi.
Dilshad: ma hoon mein beta sirf asad ka nahi tumarha ma bhi hoon mein.
Don't hide anything from me. I know I failed to noticed your love for each other. But trust me beta if I had Atleast a clue I would have never allowed you to leave India. I know you are hurt & you had gone through so much pain but even asad was also in same condition. I know he was too foolish for not to listen to his heart. We need you beta. I am not forcing you. Take your own time.
Once zoya left from dilshad's room she met asad in corridor.
Asad: zoya I am really sorry for always hurting you. I was a fool for not listing to my heart. At least for my family just reconsider your descion.
Zoya: good night mr.khan
She left to her room. She was shocked to see her bed filled with shopping bags. It was full of modern dresses for her. She found a paper in it. She opened it.

You will be beautiful in any dress you were. I got few dresses for you. I hope you like.
Asad

Zoya was stunned. Yes asad has really changed. He is not the same asad who used to dominate & judge people because of his cloths. Tanveer's incidence has been an eye opener for him. But if tanveer was not exposed would he ever listened to his heart? Would he ever accepted her? Zoya was still confused. She still has pain because of his rejection & his engagement news with tanveer. She can't forgive him so easily.

Note: this is an image of a penthouse

Farooqui's penthouse


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Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
just read the whole story rite now.. it was truelyy amazing.. loved it like anything!! plz continue sooon... i loveee this storyyy sooo much.. n plz pm me if u do pms...!!



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

it was part 4 rite???



Yep that was a mistake thanks for showing it

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Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear... lvd it...continue soon.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update dear...I loved Zoya's decision...She is not a doll for Asad to play with...Her thought was rite,what if Tanveer's truth was not revealed,he would have married her...I love this story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update Uma,
Asad had a hard time to win Zoya
Pls update soon
Thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

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